Quick Transmigration: The Plan to Save the Heroines and Supporting Women

I think it's pretty good-looking. Why are people in the comment section so picky? I think it's pretty good-looking even in Tomato. The heroine is the same person from beginning to end, so there's no such thing as a scumbag. Moreover, the relationship between the two of them is really sweet. There are some words in it that I think are quite funny. I think they also have some laughs. In fact, I think besides After reading the first world, I think it is considered he, and the first world is not considered be. The first world is quite sweet, but it is a little sad at the end. Why do you need to read the novel with your brain, and I think overall, I think the plot is very reasonable. There is no particularly invincible plot, and there is also a particularly brainless plot. I have been reading Lily novels for several years. I read them on JJ before. I think the author's writing is really in line with my wishes. I hope the author will stick with it. I really want to finish this book. Come on, I hope it writes so many small worlds like the introduction. I think it is very interesting.

It's good-looking. It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written story about two heroines, but the first one really tortured me to death. Most of my pillow was wet in the middle of the night. "You lost your mother when you were young, you lost your father when you were young, and you lost your wife when you were middle-aged." I really can't even think of this sentence. Woo woo hoo yeah😭😭😭😭😭

Lily is a bit shocking. The heroine of the small world once gave birth to a child for the male protagonist, and recalled her previous life in the form of a dream. Let me give you a five-star review first. I heard it is very cruel, but I want to see how cruel it is. [Thinking][thinking] 6. Who do you want to torture to death in the last chapter? A different kind of redemption, a redemption gained and lost, a redemption seen in the light and then plunged into darkness. There is also the halo of the dead man. Does the plot need to be so powerful? It was too easy to die. It was frustrating for twenty or thirty chapters, but he died so easily. Won't every world be like this in the future? The dead man's role is almost equal to that of the heroine. Isn't the point of redemption? Shouldn't we break through the shackles? It's still not fun enough, I'm so frustrated. The heroine is a bit weak and has become an immortal, but the eldest lady is still kidnapped while she is with her.

Ordinary quick travel sweet article, focusing on 1V1 If you don't have high requirements, you can read on. Poison points: 1 Xiaobaiwen, vernacular 2. Repeated plot plots and the same pitfalls that the protagonist has stepped on in similar things to promote the needs of the plot. 3. Always write some slightly inconsistent plots to promote subsequent development, such as: (1) It is necessary to describe how miserable the targets of each small world were, how they suffered all kinds of inhuman torture, how badly the male and female protagonists of the original world behaved towards them, and how they looked like wolves. It's not necessary to go to this extent, right? Please don't be so naive when describing the plot. The most important thing - why do you have to mention that the target of the strategy was humiliated in the end? I can't bear to think about this; (2) After being careless and losing Jingzhou, the heroine regretted it: "If only... Ying'er (the target of the strategy) would not have been harmed..." Over and over again, a similar scene seems to happen at least once in a world. I really want to roll my eyes. These poisonous points made me unable to read it. Other than that, this book was okay, as far as fast-travel novels in Tomatoes are concerned.

I always only give five stars when reading a book. If there are flaws, I am willing to encourage five stars. Even if I really feel that it is not good, I will just quit. This is the first time I give you one star. You like to feed readers with knives [laughs] If you want to torture you, just write a good title and a good introduction. Although there is no be/abuse story, the introduction is about redemption and the title of the book is about saving the female protagonist, which already indicates that it is a good ending (the text has its objectivity and does not change according to the expresser's will, so you are right). [Redemption] Is this how you redeem yourself? [Saving the female supporting character] Is this how you saved her? You give her a beam of light, and then poke her blind, and she will only have this beam of light in her heart. Do you feel that you are great, do you feel that you are saving her, redeeming her? Why are readers so miserable, to be deceived and tortured? And I also want to say that it's not that I can't read abuse stories. I have read abuse stories and given them five-star reviews. But this article is just for the sake of torture, there is no logic. He had to find a lame reason: "system regulations", so that Shen Lin could only stay for a few years, and he would lose his senses, and he was force-fed a few chapters of knives. Obviously it can be said in one sentence that they will be together happily for the rest of their lives, or they can write three chapters of a cookie extra chapter. If they really want to torture, they can let Shen Lin leave directly after the mission is over, and Xiaoying will hold a funeral for her and then die in the same cave. You have to add all kinds of lame settings to make Shen Lin half-dead and torture him into a few extra chapters. Do you have the intention, the author? I saw the author said that the knife in the back can be skipped, but I didn't accept it because the extra knife was given a low score. This is simply unrealistic. Everyone's actions have internal logic. A normal reader has already seen this. He recognizes the story, wants to understand the subsequent plot, and hopes to see the real ending. I've read Chapter 57 of the main text, so why don't you stop reading just because you said there was a knife in the back? And even if you are afraid of the knife and don't read it, but readers know that there is a knife behind you, can you really deceive yourself and others into thinking it is he? What's the use? It's not just being abused. I got dressed at five o'clock and got ready to go out. I made an appointment with my sisters to go out for dinner. At that time, I was only a few chapters away from finishing the book. I wanted to go out after reading it. After reading it, my clothes were wet, my makeup was ruined, and I had no intention of going out to eat. Let's just count the balls. I had a meal in the morning. It's 7 o'clock now. I'm not hungry yet. I'm full [laughs]

It's beautiful, but it's also really sad. Author, do you think this setting should be be at the end of every world? Let me know in advance that I can skip those few pictures and treat them as he. Forgive me because I really can't bear it and my heart is not good.

It's very interesting. The first world is a bit sadistic at the end, and the plot is okay. It shows that the characters are controlled by the consciousness of the small world. The second world feels like "Xiao Ying". She must be her in every small world, and the same person in each small world. I like this the most.

The author's writing is very good. I can't express it in my writing. Shen Lin's feelings are described very delicately (the author doesn't need to care about the bad reviews. He writes novels because he is happy and uses his own thoughts to create a parallel world. Although there are good and bad, people who like your novels are the ones who agree with you. I sincerely hope you will update more [laughs][Adoration] ][Blowing kisses][Laughing][Licking the screen][Sending hearts][Sending hearts][Love][Love][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Cool])

Don't read it if it's about torturing men. Chapter 40 of the first world contains several plots about torturing women. It tries hard to give the original male protagonist a halo, while also emphasizing how sober the protagonist is. Also, the original heroine was kidnapped under the protagonist's nose. The protagonist Chun Feiwu is called a scumbag, but in fact he abuses women and readers.

The plot is a bit slow, mainly because it deliberately creates conflicts. Things that can obviously be avoided, but it is written out. There is also a lot of complicated explanations. I only read it once. I can't remember the previous part clearly, so it was the conflict between the world of orcs and the clan leader. This is a minor drawback, but overall it's fine. After that comes the next world, the world of senior sister. Which is the latest chapter? I am particularly speechless. The heroine is in the Nascent Soul stage, and the senior sister has been crippled. Although she is a cripple because she has absorbed her luck and cannot recover temporarily. I guess she can recover later, but at this period, will the heroine be unable to stop a crippled senior sister? She clearly sensed something was wrong, but she said she didn't stop her. Oh my god, author, are you serious? After that, he performed a series of actions that lowered his intelligence. Please, it's a Nascent Soul stage. If I have to explain it, it would be that the senior sister was not completely eliminated, and her potential exploded in that moment, and then she was not stopped. Oh my god, but you didn't handle the plot well. You didn't show it like this. What you showed was a particularly bloody plot. In summary, the biggest poisonous point is that it is bloody. This bloody world is interspersed in various small worlds, and there is a kind of cruel cruelty. The small world in front is full of poison, but it is still bearable, but I really can't bear it here, my God. If the writing was so bad from the beginning, then it would be okay, and I would just stop reading it. But maybe the author is out of shape now, and it feels like the writing is getting worse and worse? It just gradually becomes more and more ridiculous. Looking forward to the author's future creations, forget this book and won't read it.