Demon Slayer: Kimetsu No Yaiba: I Became a Ghost and Became a Pillar

(Well, this is purely a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Your heart can't bear it and you'll cry.) I've read Fanzhu's book before and I finished it completely. It's very interesting. Of course, this Demon Slayer fanfic ranks third in my mind, and it's quite good. First of all, the subject matter is a ghostly breathing swordsman, (reminds me of a book called "Frost Breath") which is much more novel than those systems. Forest Breathing is okay, and the sword moves basically satisfy my fantasy of the forest. I do think that the author can have a sacred tree like Hashirama come after the ten forms. This would be very exciting. It can also play a big role in the battle with Tong Mo. This little idea. I didn't watch much of the plot. The protagonist grew up all the way. He was a pure ghost at first, with a very bad temper, and only wanted to kill Wu Pai. Then he slowly grew up and had something to protect. This point can be highlighted. Then I have a little doubt. Some of the settings are second creations, but I think they are a bit unreasonable and far-fetched. There are not that many powerful ghosts in the trial area, etc. The writing style is pretty good among free novels, but some things could be omitted and passed over in one stroke. The author was a bit slow, maybe he wanted to express something, but I didn't see it. I don't see much, that's it. Come on, the author, you can refine it a little more.

To be honest, this is the most comfortable Demon Slayer doujin I have ever seen. Most doujins basically have systems or plug-ins. As a result, the strength is too strong, and there is a sense of deja vu that is separate from the world view. This Goldfinger is not that strong, it is well integrated into the story and develops the story. Five stars for the few excellent fans. [Like][Like][Like]

This is the type I've been looking for. The protagonist has a good outlook on life and doesn't show off when he turns into a ghost. Most of the current demon slayer fandoms that turn into ghosts are dark novels. This one is really principled and I like it, but the author doesn't seem to be good at naming haha. By the way, I'm looking forward to the relationship between the protagonist and Shinobu.

Let's talk about the conclusion first, rating 4.5 Stars Let's talk about the advantages first. The author made up for a lot of regrets by writing this book. He wrote Hashira Slayer no Yaiba as Demon Slayer, and it also didn't have a rigid setting that was too brainless. It's not a brainless book, and it has a strong sense of substitution. It can be considered high-quality in terms of original plot, and the emotional drama is not abrupt. In short, if you want to read a Demon Slayer fanfic that is more of a growth series, you can start it. As for the shortcomings, the original characters are a bit hollow. The anime Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba has a group portrait style, so I think we can add memoirs to the original characters to make them more vivid. There are also some characters whose fate is a bit confusing, which can be regarded as a kind of uncertainty in fan fiction and is different from the original text. I haven't read the ending yet. This is my personal opinion. I hope it can help everyone who is hesitant to get into this book😎

The author's writing style is more delicate than most Demon Slayer fan works, and naming the breathing method is not awkward, which is better than many other fan works. The story line is long, not impatient or impatient. In addition to the main plot, there are often some interesting subplots interspersed, and occasionally there are some jokes to make people smile and motivate them to continue watching. But the emotional line about the protagonist is indeed delayed a bit too late. I know the author wants to write a slow-paced, step-by-step story, but many people who want to see the plot of sugar-making have to wait a long time before they can see it. There are almost no chapters in the first 80 chapters (maybe it's just me who cares. I'm too picky hahaha [laughing and crying]). From my personal point of view, the first time I write a book review, it may be very one-sided. Don't worry about any mistakes. I hope this book will get better and better [love] The protagonist grows step by step instead of using the system plug-in library like other brainless games. This is really good. Also, the biggest shortcoming is that it is too slow and not enough to watch! [Laughing evilly][please update]

It's very interesting. I started watching it very early. My Shinichi is so handsome. This time he turned into a ghost. Don't let the Immortal River bleed for fun again. Let's hang up. I don't want Grandpa Tong to live. Come on, author. Come on.

A well-written demon slayer story will change the actions of the ghost side according to the progress of the plot. For example, in the Mugen Train series currently being serialized, the Sword Forging Village chapter has already lost its butterflies (the jade pot has been destroyed), which is very reasonable, as if this world is the original one. I want to find a different path in the parallel world. The characters in it have souls and their own action patterns. I like this kind of reasonable and logical one. Even if the plot has changed, it will not stick to the original copies. [Like] The single female protagonist Ninja, I love the Mori Insect CP! The protagonist Moriki Shinichi and Butterfly Shinobu have known each other since they were young, and they are childhood sweethearts. From Shinobu's point of view (the attributes of the protagonist are guaranteed!) The two of them bickered when they first met, and they were like enemies. Later, they were bound to do tasks for a long time (although the description is not much), but in the world of the book, the two have been together for a long time, and their relationship is It's a smooth process, and it's quite delicate. I like this kind of unobtrusive emotional line ([like] to the author). Now both of them understand their feelings, but they are trapped in the current situation and haven't confessed yet (Tamayo, the strongest support, it's up to you). After the research on the human-turning medicine is completed, Shinichi, you kid, give me an A and confess to Shinobu! The princess is getting married! At that time, the ghosts were all gone and I cared about the major life events of the protagonist, right? (So the author understands what I mean, remember to send sweets to us Mori Chong when the time comes. More emotional dramas, it will be good to watch [give heart]) PS: I almost forgot about our Mori Chong's great eldest brother Toki Toru, it's great that my brother didn't die this time, Muichiro now has an older brother, a master, and a future master. Even if he practices Kasumi too much and his brain is a little confused, it doesn't matter, you have brother here! When the time comes for Mori Chong's wedding, you two might as well be flower girls and protect your master's love [Chigua]

It's a good-looking book, one of the best among Demon Slayer fics. As the author said, the emotional line in it is not a fast-food love like in other books, but a real relationship between two people slowly warming up. Summary: Honorable, embarrassing, reminder

It's good to watch. This is the second Demon Slayer book that I can keep reading. Overall, the writing style is good. There are no sudden cheats and it doesn't overwhelm the combat power. It is indeed the best work of Demon Slayer fanfiction.

It's very interesting. The second creation didn't affect the direction of the plot, and there are new elements. It's very attractive to me. I just happened to be obsessed with Demon Slayer recently. I just finished reading Rice Pillar and Tensei Tongtou. I really recommend this book. Come on, the author [Like]

It's a good-looking, very good Demon Slayer fanfic. The original plot and setting are very exciting. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. I really like the interaction with Shinichi and Shinobu. The author's character of Shinobu is so cute. Please give more of it. Children love it [laughing]

To be fair, it's comparable to Iibashira's novel. The only shortcoming of Iizhu's novel is that the emotional line is very sloppy, but the emotional line in this one is still gradual. The writing style of the novel has a very anime-like feel and is very immersive.

Now that I have read the latest chapter, I can see that the author's writing is good and he knows the plot arrangement well. To be honest, I haven't reviewed it in the past few months, but the popularity of this book is not directly proportional to its quality. I am a little worried that I will cut it in the middle, so giving it five stars can be regarded as support [face covering] [face covering] If you keep updating, you can keep watching. To be honest, if the update is less, it would be more suitable for people like me who watch it every 2.3 Weeks [face covering] [face covering]

Good looking, good looking. The male protagonist, who is not a character in the original work, goes to influence events. New breathing techniques have also been added. If you want to see a more complete story, you can watch it (it doesn't have an ending yet, but many people's plots have been changed). The plot of the original character's disconnection was affected by the male protagonist. Ichiro, Qiu Usagi, etc. All survived. The author's writing style is also good, the plot is well constructed, and many new storylines have been added to enrich the plot, which is constantly unfolding and is very interesting and interesting to watch.

I finished it. It's very good-looking, only a little worse than Fanzhu. But I still recommend changing the cover. If I hadn't been short on books, I would have been persuaded to quit.

This is a good book with a lot of self-made plots but it doesn't feel confusing. It does not give the original protagonist Tanjiro a chance to hone his skills and solves a lot of regrets, so I highly recommend this book [almost crying]

It's a very good book. Nowadays, the books on Demon Slayer are either unreasonable or full of systems. It can be said that most of the books on Demon Slayer have been completed. This book gave me a very good impression. I highly recommend the author's last book by Giant. I am still reading it and haven't finished it yet. But according to the writing skills of the previous book, Demon Slayer's new generation masterpiece cannot be beaten. Of course, there are also shortcomings, that is, it is not enough to watch.

It's really good to watch, but the timeline is a little messy at the end. In addition to the protagonist, I can write more plots about the three little ones and other supporting characters. It's not that I don't like the protagonist, I just want a change of taste. After all, many people like the original three little ones [Thoughts]

I kept reading and forgot to comment. The writing is very good. I saved more than 60 chapters and read it in one go. Because the book is new, the rating is very low, which is far from the rating of Mingju. Because of this, I almost stopped reading it. You should be glad that I took another look [smile]

It looks good, I feel like I can compete with Fanzhu.

Madam, madam, madam, you are so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author! You are my god! ! ! ! ! I still want to read it, the writing in big letters is really great! ! ! ! ! Please share with me! (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊

The plot doesn't drag, and the writing isn't jerky. Excellent product

It's really good to read. This is my second time reading it. At the beginning, there were only more than 300 chapters, so I stopped reading it because the update was too slow. Now I'm reading it again and it only has 400 chapters. But it's very interesting and the protagonist's strength has grown just right. A lot of foreshadowing also makes people want to watch it, and there are also various ways to make up for regrets, which also makes people feel comfortable to watch. I like Enji! I hope the author will work hard

It is indeed a very good book. At the beginning, there were some places that were a little bit toxic in my opinion, but I still plan to give it a good review! After all, I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I am indeed a bit picky... I have read 81 chapters of this book so far, and overall it deserves this praise.

It's not bad. I've read about 100 chapters. There's nothing toxic about it, and the characters aren't too biased either.

People who are familiar with the original plot may find it a little awkward in the early stage, but it is just a little bit. The logic of the whole book is flawless, the characters are restored very well, and the plot is very nice, not the kind of brainless creation. It's worth watching

There are no evil points, and the protagonist's combat power does not increase too quickly. The male and female protagonists do not engage in ambiguous emotional lines and are slow. Although it can't be said to be a god, the author must have put his heart into it.

It's very beautiful. It's considered a new talent in Demon Slayer. I hope the author will keep updating it.

[Laughing evilly] The old guys who are doing this are so good-looking. There are no minor flaws throughout the whole process. It's very comfortable.

The characterization is great and the narrative pace is smooth. The author has adapted and added a lot of content, which not only makes up for regrets, but also adds a lot of freshness. The author set up many plots that were quite interesting. The protagonist made faces at Shinobu and had a brain breakdown, which really made me laugh. I have to say it's really well written! The emotional line is slow-burning and handled very well. It is the most natural among the fans. It is a good choice if you want to change your taste after eating too much fast food. If you don't like fast food, I highly recommend this book! The only thing that could be improved is the protagonist's voice. The words "vital" and "green" are too general and do not reflect that vitality. I feel that it would be better to describe more about the connection between the protagonist and the trees and the earth, and to highlight the characteristics of the breathing method with the depiction of the heart mirror. For example: listen to the sound of growing rocks? This kind of artistic conception. That is the god among masterpieces [Thinking] But after all, it is an entertainment novel. Maybe it is because of the avoidance of redundancy and the reading experience, so I didn't write too much. I understand [smile][smile][smile] The most important thing is that you can see two different personalities of Shinobu in this book. Other fans let the butterfly parents live, or let Kanae live, but it seems that Shinobu's character will not change significantly. The author handles this very well, I love it [love] [love] [love]