Travel Through ****

I haven't read all of this novel, so I'll just read a few chapters. Let me talk about the problem. The question setting of this 8-year-old practice is definitely not good. It's too young. You tell me some martial arts moves for you to practice. The moves require practice makes perfect. Practicing martial arts also needs to break the body. You said how to train the body at 8 years old. It's impossible to teach magic power. Your magic power comes from the inside out. You are only 8 years old. The internal organs and meridians have not yet reached maturity. How can you cultivate mana? How can you store 1 tael of mana in a cup? How can you put 2 taels of wine in a cup? You have to be at least 10 years old before you can gradually try to practice mana. There is also the issue of the plot. It's okay to add new elements to it, but it's definitely not possible to raise ghosts. You are a disciple of a famous sect. If you raise ghosts, it doesn't matter whether your master agrees or not. Even if you agree, other people in the sect will use this matter to attack you and your master. Are you a fool? Besides, how will having multiple ghosts in your hand help you? Is it superfluous? The last thing I want to say is that Uncle Jiu's film and television world is a folk supernatural drama, not fantasy. Don't write fantasy things. If you write anything, it will be wrong.

The protagonist is very childish, and his behavior and actions are very childish. It is impossible to tell that he is an adult time traveler.

Not bad. My writing so far is pretty good.