
Weird Timer
诡异计时器
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 102k Words
- Genre
- Mystery
- Subgenre
- Mystery High-Concept
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
47Chapters
2Reads
1Listens
1kReads · all time
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诡异计时器
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I suggest you write an outline and insert some foreshadowing. Overall, the article is not attractive. That's because you give too little information and leave readers with questions. Only with some good descriptions can readers be willing to read it. The first three chapters are all about water, and it didn't give me any sense of novelty after reading the first chapter. I don't want to read any more. But it can be seen that you have thought about a lot of things. At least you have the goods. All you have to do is connect the pieces into a whole. Listen more, watch more and learn more. Looking forward to playing.