This Vine Snake Is Obviously Super Strong, but It's Too Salty

So far, the writing is pretty good. The protagonists, Ibrahimovic, Eevee, and Zoroa, are all strong and good-looking. Considering the reality, the protagonist lacks life-saving elves (the ghost type can move people through shadows, and the super type can teleport) [I vote for the Wife Beast], and lacks flying tools [I vote for the red plane]. Considering the author's preference, there are probably burning insects [smile] [smile] [smile]

Is the heroine Ibrahimovic? If I remember correctly, Ibrahimovic and Eevee seem to be from the land group [Research]

Well, the genius in the elf novel is really the pride of the whole village. But there is a little problem. 1. The protagonist's words are sometimes very white and awkward. Coupled with his unreasonable admiration for the protagonist, it seems very cool. 2. The protagonist is not very different from other Pokémon. It's not about strength, but about characteristics. The protagonist is a very ordinary vine snake with nothing else but different characteristics. The author can enhance some abilities, such as speed and strength. Or given qualities, such as making machines, singing, dancing, etc. 3. For example, characters like Ibrahimovic really have the flavor of a male and a female protagonist, so try to reduce them as much as possible, otherwise it will affect the perception. Everything else is not a big problem at the moment, it's pretty good.

Very good Pokémon article. The protagonist's system is relatively simple, giving the protagonist room for self-improvement and allowing trainers to play a role in daily battles and training. The description method is partial to group portraits, the daily themes are delicate and warm, and the occasional battles add a bit of blood and passion. The plot background is also quite special, linking the timelines of Xiaozhi and Rico together, which is unique. If you can temporarily abandon the concept of "three golden chapters" when reading, and take the time to try reading, the style of the novel may just fit your taste. Looking forward to the author's future writing.

Foxes don't recommend bad books, this is a really good book

It's really good, I hope I can stick with it

The previous one is pretty good, but this novel feels more like daily life. The characters' actions, mentality and psychological descriptions are very good at the beginning, but it always makes people feel a little childish, but it is definitely childish for others, and it is definitely just right for a college student like me, and the writing is closer to the world view of anime. Overall it is good and worth reading. [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] One star missing, where is the missing, why did you stop updating it [angry] [angry] [angry]?

To be honest, it's not that fun after evolving. Although it will become stronger, I feel that the first form is quite good, relatively cute, and it also has hands. After the final evolution, it disappears. I feel that it will become cold and not as cute as before.

Skills are a bit lacking

A very good book that makes my bookshelf spin [laughing evilly]

It's okay, very good, but when Shi Labi traveled through time in the early stage, I always felt that there were bugs. I said it was decades, and for a while it felt like hundreds of years, and then in the end it was actually thousands of years. Also, in the moment when the flower was sprinkled at the end, no one could see the posture of the legend of the forest. I didn't put on that cow Bo Yi. Poor Bo Yi, a deer with a big head on his head, was beaten twice in a row.

It's good-looking, a little more daily, but it writes about travel very well. The protagonist also has his own path to becoming stronger. I hope the author will stick to it.

Looking forward to evolving into a monarch snake soon

To become a Pokémon, you can refer to the water otter from Sky Adventure Team.

Very well written, keep it up

The plot doesn't have any bad points for now, I hope it stays stable

Five-star praise has been sent (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ This article is very to my liking. I like [Shy] very much, so the author should not stop updating it! [Send heart][Please update]

Super beautiful and generates electricity directly with love

It goes very well with daily writing, okay

I personally like this one better, it's very well written (òωó)👍

Who is the heroine? Ibrahimovic?

Just like petty bourgeoisie.

It sounds great, but it's too short!

Well written, but please read the follow-up

It looks good, support it!

It's time to start school and go to military training😭😭😭

Beautiful, must support

It's very well written and very interesting [laughing]

It's okay. You can take a look.

Very nice! But it's broken! ! !