Even If You Want to Become a Beautiful Girl Through Time Travel, You Have to Create Your Own Sequence to Become a God.

The writing is okay, but the author is very cute

The author can listen to some readers' suggestions, but if he wants to make changes, the author can make changes without hurting Dagang (you can't just say that the changes are made, the author needs to be clear about it, otherwise it may be a bit poisonous) [Love] [Love] [Sneaky smile]

Beautiful, the author is very cute

Please give the lovely author a five-star rating, no need to thank me~

The writing is ok, but the author Jiang @ is very cute. The plot can be created, the characters can be created, and the author can create it.

A potentially good book, but the content of the article is a bit reserved [snicker][snicker][snicker]. If you like being carefree, I don't recommend this book (self-evaluation, no evil intentions)

It's beautiful~ Come on, author! The only drawback is that there are less. There are also some common minor problems with transformation invincible novels, such as what...

I think it looks okay. Did he change from a man to a woman or was he originally a woman?

Although I have only seen more than thirty pictures, this book is quite beautiful and can be read. Although it is a book, it is necessary to read it. Author Author, the novels you wrote are indeed very good, but do you have any recommendations for simple and good-looking novels?

One of the flower languages ​​​​of tulips is respect. Xiaochanmiao, we respect the characters in the story you continue to write, and look forward to you writing more excellent stories.

After thinking about it... The main reviewer still gave it 4 stars~ (Originally I wanted to give it 3 stars, just average or even a little lower, but as a new author's first book, with such bad data, he actually insisted on updating it to the end...). On the whole, it is indeed an average novel. There are good parts, but of course there are also many bad parts. Note in advance: the main character is either Bai or a girl, Lily. Moreover, there are male supporting characters of the same age, and there are quite a few (three), and there are many descriptions of cats (although some male supporting characters are occasionally changed into female cats by the protagonist). But for those lily novels where you can't read anything about the main character and the supporting actor surrounding him, I don't think you are suitable for this book. The contents of the book are a bit complicated, including various games, animations, and comics (it doesn't matter if you haven't read it, the protagonist of this book is the biggest cat). The protagonist is not the kind who is brainless and invincible, and there are situations where he is defeated, but most of them are suppressing people and beating meow. The next good thing is of course that the author's writing style has indeed improved to a certain extent. The look and feel in the middle and later stages is indeed better than that in the early stages. The plot processing has a tighter rhythm and is handled better. And I insisted on finishing it. The plot of the protagonist before the end was also very well written. The bad part~ 1: Some of the previous chapters have been deleted due to previous review reasons, resulting in plot connection problems. Some NPCs are obviously characters that will be thrown away after use, but a lot of words have been spent writing them, so it feels like a meaningless reading. 2: In many places, I feel that there are problems with the logic and perception of the sentences, and something feels wrong. Moreover, some parts are not handled well. The psychological description or the parts where the protagonist performed are not explained too much. Although everyone knows that some parts are played by the protagonist, it does feel strange when reading. Three: In the early and middle stages, there is a clear feeling that the plot is all normal, and it does not feel that there is a lot of water, but it is very watery and dragging, and there is no sense of watching it as if you keep watching it. Four: Part (should be part) of the plot or emotional plot of the post... Is not very good. It has a feeling of youthfulness and unfamiliarity. It is true that there are posts and emotional descriptions, but I always feel that the emotional description and interaction processing of the posts really need to be improved. It is watchable, but most places do not feel touching. (The wording in some places is also inappropriate, which makes it feel inappropriate to do this in this scene.) Five: Because there are too many various small worlds in the article, every time a small world or a universe is released in the later stage, the calculation of combat power units in each place is different in most cases, resulting in confusion every time when looking at units with different combat power. I have no idea which level of another combat power this combat power should correspond to. Six: I forgot meow~ Hey? You can see it, meow Ignoring the above small disadvantages, it may be a good read (I can ignore these problems, so my personal reading experience is still good) But after all, it depends on personal feelings. Everyone's reading experience and reading habits are different.

"I finished reading hundreds of novels early in the morning and forgot what I wanted to read. I accidentally clicked on the author's novel and continued reading, deciding to give a good review."

It's nice to read, but the content is a bit lacking and the writing is too short. Update! ! !

Is CP Nalandel?

Keep up the good work. When it is finished, you will read the next one. I will read this one and finish it. If you finish the next one, I will read the next one and you can write it perfectly.

Personally, I think it's good-looking. It's a lily article... I don't want to write a long review. The last time I wrote a review, I nearly fried my brain. Anyway, it's good-looking [Like]

Beautiful, nice new book.

Please rate before reading Okay okay😍

The plot at the beginning is a bit watery, but overall it's still quite enjoyable.

A very good novel, it makes my mambo spin [Like]

Not bad, not bad, tastes great [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good, at least better than 90% of novels [Punch Out]

Come on, come on, come on

Beautiful and well written

Haokang Haokang Haokang

Really beautiful, recommended

I should give the author a five-star rating, so go ahead and give me a hug.

A small five-star tribute to the author [laughing evilly]

One dandruff meows, two dandruffs meow, um~, it smells so good.

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