The Years When I Was a God in the National Sports Game

How can I put it... It's a very good article, but it just makes people feel strange, the love is strange, the handling is strange, it feels very inexplicable, and I suddenly fell in love with it. 20% Of the article describes how good-looking and strong the protagonist is, which is... Very strange, and sometimes there is a problem with the word order. It feels like a baby who has just learned to speak, but the writing style is like a veteran who has experienced many battles. Overall, it is a very good strange article.

Overall evaluation: The plot is very good and the writing is good, but the author is a bit sloppy. It is recommended to watch if you don't have obsessive-compulsive disorder. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Here are some of the most serious problems in the book 1. There are some incoherences in some paragraphs. It's not too much but it affects the perception. 2. In some places, you can see the feelings that the author wants to portray, but because of the inappropriate use of words, there are several places where you cannot tell what the subject of the description is without reading it several times. 3. There are a lot of typos and omissions, and there are even cases where the subject is missing (so many that I doubted whether it was an AI article after seeing it)

This book is really, really good-looking, especially the copy of the elf written in big letters by the author, and I think it would be even better if Maomao revealed his strength ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற

I love watching it. The cat is so cute, calm and handsome [laughs] The plot is very exciting and there is no problem with the logic in my opinion! The biggest drawback! ! ! Too! Few! Got it! The author will update soon!

It's so beautiful that you can understand it without using your brain, but this article is written with brain text, and the description of the protagonist is also very beautiful. It's not cruel at all, okay. There are some foreshadowings in it, you can watch it yourself. Remember to come back and comment after reading it!

It's super, super good-looking. Come on, love the character of Mao Mao. When will Mao Mao show his true power? Looking forward to, looking forward to

It's so good, I'm crazy looking forward to the follow-up. The protagonist's development of pretending to be weak but actually being dominant is described by the author in a very attractive way! (Obviously this is not the first time I have read this kind of article that is similar to pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger) This is by far (strictly) the best article in this genre that I have ever read! And... Update quickly! (Update. Jpg)

The story of a boy who has forgotten his past and emotions gradually finds himself, finds a partner, saves the world, and becomes a father in one copy after another. It is gratifying and congratulatory. Let us spread flowers for the new couple [laughing evilly]. In the early stage, I pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger for a while. If you like to play without any brains, you can skip/skip the first 2/3 copies. Let's talk about the part that I personally feel is a little bit interesting. In terms of content, the later copies are larger and I almost didn't get them back, and the battle lines are too long (the cuckoo and fairy tale lines are particularly obvious). Later, the pace suddenly accelerated and stopped abruptly (I didn't mean to see enough). In addition, the relationship between the two male protagonists was a bit sudden, and there were still all kinds of suspicions and precautions in the beginning, just like after making love, they suddenly fell in love and started to talk about it, although it was easy to fight. The description of the characters/environment did not get to the point, and subjectively the storyline was a bit cumbersome/lacked a sense of substitution and was relatively thin (for example, after reading the book, I couldn't remember what the male protagonists looked like, except for one who was a martial beauty pretending to be stupid and sweet, and the other was a guardian knight who found the destined princess and had maximum resistance). The advantage is also obvious in the description of the story. The emotions are contained between the lines. The rhythm of the tears is also well controlled. In addition, the themes are sublimated from time to time to make people reflect. The main line of the story is basically explained clearly, and the world view can be extended to many copies (it's time to test your imagination). For example, Dujuan, Golden Horn, Silly Baitian's Journey into Infinite Villains, System World vs Host World, Elf Tree, Angel & Guardian Angel, Dark Fairy Tales, etc. The author should have done a lot of homework, and he can also see some new ideas after "reading all the books". The more puzzling point is that it seems that the people who entered the dungeon almost never appeared in the real world after the game ended, and they were almost disconnected from the real world. But I have the impression that there is a description at the beginning that there will be national selection/random selection of participants. Death = the country is infected, immortality = personal spiritual pollution, no hope. The system can be compared to attacking workers/capitalists. If you want energy, wouldn't the more people participate, the better? It's a hierarchical delivery. Opening a dungeon channel, one person can do it, and a group of people can do it, and it can also increase the pass rate.

The content is very interesting, and one star is given because the background setting is basically the same as another one I read. Of course, the content of the copy is completely different, but it was quite uncomfortable to look at the setting. Including two participants from one country, one official and one random, treasure box settings, etc. It gives people a strong sense of familiarity. It is not recommended for those who have seen Hungry **

Finished reading! Maomao's character design is really good. He saw a lot of the ugliness of human beings in Infinite Stream, but he did not surrender himself. He pretended to be himself in a new place and did not feel wronged at the same time. He Gong's feelings started from the predator's closeness to food, and later he was moved by Geng Zhigong's confession and emotion. I like the two strong ones the most. No one compromises for the sake of the other, and no one becomes a burden to the other. The two achieve, help, and protect each other.

It's pretty good to read. The only shortcoming is that the author chooses to cover up a lot of content that can be written in one sentence. Many times, it even leaves a feeling of confusion. The writing is foggy, such as the meeting of the three tribes, the goblin clan explaining where the black core of the alien world is, what they did, why the black core of the alien world has not changed, etc. (Of course, it may just be my own doubts.) I also know that some people want to express a sense of mystery and show the protagonist's current ignorance, which is understandable. The article is very short, you can read it if you like it

It's really beautiful, and every copy has a metaphor. Every copy brings me to tears. It just felt like it ended a little hastily. Well, it might be better if the ending is not a scarlet copy, but seven copies, and then the final copy. Apart from the ending being a bit rushed, there were no problems at all. If you continue to complete it, you can actually reach 9:4 or above. When I watched it, my rating was only 7.9. After watching it, I added 0.1 Points. It should be because he is slowly getting married now. But I still feel that after writing seven copies and finally opening a final copy at home, the score may be much higher. But these copies are all very well written and there are no problems. I really like telling the truth and allowing me to comment. Basically, they are books with relatively low ratings, but they are very good to read. Recommend

I've finished reading it. How can I say it? It's very interesting. I recommend everyone to read it. However, if you want to watch a sweet love story, it may not be suitable. This book has relatively few emotional lines and not enough plot. (Of course it would be nice if the two male protagonists interacted more.) Mrs. Cuckoo really wanted to see Ella torture Jacob to death, but she even sent her own child to death for the benefit of the family. There is also the last copy, the ending is so good that I cried, bastard, a father is really willing to do anything for his children. What's wrong with him, woo woo woo

The copies are quite novel. I really like the character design of Maomao. I criticize the beauties like crazy. It makes me happy to see it. I hope you will update more and support you all the time [Blow kiss][Adoration]❛‿˂̵✧

It's very beautiful, the logic is clear, and the character design of the cat is also very good. It's the strongest in the game and it fully satisfied my love for the second half.

It's really super beautiful, each copy has its own unique flavor, Happy House wants to express love for yourself, the fairy tale writer in the scarlet fairy tale has lost himself but loves Alice deeply, the world tree in the elf copy is obsessed with the past and does not want to wake up... Super love [blowing kiss]

Maomao is super smart, and the structure of the story is complete and there are no misunderstandings. Then the plot of the crematorium is two strong points. But Cat is a human being, not a real Cat. In the early stage, Maomao was a little bit clumsy, but later on, Maomao slowly revealed his strength, which is super good-looking.

The Scarlet Fairy Tale Knife is here for me [crying] [crying] [crying] But I like it very much. This novel is very interesting. Although the content is a little short, I like it very much. Finally, let's see you in the next book [Code][Top post][Please pay attention]

I evaluated it after reading it, and it seems that the author is a bit weak in writing, and I feel that the author is not very good at writing emotional lines, but the copy and story written by the author are really beautiful, and the author's literary talent is also very good, but sometimes the expression is not clear, that is, you can know what the author wants to express, but it may not be fully expressed due to problems with the writing style. However, in general, the books I have read are quite good-looking, and I feel that it would be better if there were extra chapters.

It's good-looking, and as expected, it's the national sports article from the female channel, it's comfortable [shy][shy]

The dual strength is simply amazing [Adoration] Each dungeon has its own story line, and the writing is also very delicate [Sentiment] Everyone has a brain, and the absolute trust in the other party in the later part is simply amazing [Adoration] The cat is also very cute, the cute cat before the attack is fearless after the attack

I just read the first copy. It's really interesting and the content is very deep. Everyone's definition of happiness is different. The author's writing is really great. If the content continues with this kind of writing style and depth, it will definitely be worth 9.5 Points or more!

It's super interesting, Age of Elves and Angels Are Coming to Me are both movies that I think are good to watch. Snow White in Scarlet Fairy Tale is depicted as bloody and wild yet full of aristocratic elegance, while Mr. White Rabbit in Alice in Wonderland looks gentle and gentle but is a white-and-black monster. Both of them like it very much.

It looks good, it looks good, and the plot of the copy is very well written! ! ! I have read a similar book before. I think I should look for a few more similar books to read. They are really good.

... Well, how should I put it? The plot of the dungeon should be relatively new. It's the first time I've seen this format and I think it's okay. [Sending Hearts]

Super pretty! Although there are some typos along the way, what happened to such a high-quality novel with a few typos? ! As long as it can be updated!

It's great. The two copies so far are very creative. I think it is a very powerful one among the many Tomato novels. I look forward to the third copy.

It looks great, it looks great, the content of the copy is novel, and the character settings seem to be of a type I have never seen before.

The plot is very good. This star is mainly due to too many missing words and typos. The order of many sentences is not smooth, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch and listen to. However, the plot is really good, especially the last one. It may be due to the long-term social domestication and the influence of fairy tales. I subconsciously thought that Alice was a girl, but I did not expect that she was a boy with gender cognitive impairment. Of course, I feel that it would be better if the cognitive impairment was removed. With this, I still feel a bit affected by the social environment, that is, I subconsciously think that only girls like princesses and fairy tales. After all, this boy is also a girl in another sense.

It's great, especially the scarlet fairy tale at the end. Although the author's outline is not so complete and detailed in the later stage, the reversal in it is surprising. The author's love for children, the innocence of children, and the injustice of society seem to have returned to the past, driven by the torrent of fate, and the tragic characters with the characteristics of the times were born. The author is just one of them, and I feel deeply. I look forward to the author's other works.