Broken Wing Traveler of Star Iron

I still don't quite understand it, and I'm afraid that it will suddenly collapse at the end, so I only dare to give it 4 stars, but the writing style is indeed much higher than the average of Tomatoes. Also, will Brother Zhou Tian's power come back? I actually wanted to read Brother Zhou Tian's book because I wanted to read Taichu Youwei [laughter]. Finally, cheers to the author

Strongly recommend, after Sunday is defeated by us and travels to a parallel world, who will he meet? What interesting things will happen? And as far as I'm concerned, everyone is very considerate! None of them are OOC! There is a line on Sunday, "If your paradise can save more people, then cut off the way forward for me with your own hands." He never thought that he would survive. He also decided to break his "wings" himself and go to the human world to see the suffering and fireworks in the world. Although he arrived in an unfamiliar place, Emperor Zhou still couldn't abandon his "divine nature"... There will always be people who are sad and sad. He hopes to meet his robin as soon as possible on Sunday and say "I like every song of yours" in person [Send Heart]

None of the characters currently appearing are OOC. The author's writing style is very good, the subtle differences brought by different worlds are well written, and the characters created are also very three-dimensional. The shiny tinplate banana badge is really expensive. Dr. Huang really had his reasons for not saving Sunday at the beginning... Su Shang catches the bird, Su Shang is good! "Original plot" where Brother Sunday and Uncle Yang confessed, Brother Sunday (eagerly): I have traveled through time! It sounds ridiculous but it's true! I swear! Uncle Yang: I understand (nods). Brother Zhou Tian is so cute, and Uncle Yang is so reliable. Is it worthy of saying that it's Sunday? I tried my best to catch everything I could, and I really tried hard to save the people around me! As of Chapter 139, I don't know what wonderful chemical reactions Suiyang, Bu Li and the memetic virus can have together, and to what extent can Parallel Luofu be harmed? I'm really looking forward to it! (Flies rub their hands together) (Run ahahaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa) However, the story of Xingtie, even if it is a fan novel, is a bit narrow when compressed on a single planet called Blue Star. Is it to prevent backstabbing? Since the specific settings of "Blue Star" have not been introduced in detail yet, there are some doubts. For example, why is the Fairy Boat called "Fairy Boat" if there is no fairy boat? What causes the "devil's body" in the parallel world to occur? Is there any life-sustaining effect? Since Kage-ryu is a short-lived species that explodes the demonic body, did the previous combat power also explode the demonic body for a short time or die on the battlefield? What kind of curse is this (laughing). I still hope the author can provide additional explanations on these settings. Author, I think your writing is very good, but very few people read it. What a pity! Regarding this, I still have some suggestions. There are too many, so I put them in the book circle!

I like it, the characters are great👌, there is nothing OOC about it. The description of the plot is also very delicate, and the words and sentences are also very clear and beautiful. But you can try to divide it into paragraphs to make the overall structure of the article look better. After all, when I personally read a large paragraph of text, it looked a bit like a big black block. But it is well written and worth bragging about. Come on, I also wish you happiness, peace and joy every day

It feels pretty good to watch.

Not bad, not bad, worthy of praise. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's useless to say more, the world needs seven days off! ! ! Sungate! ! .. ·*༙ ✟ Sunday ✟ *༙· . .

Does this book have a heroine or not?

So pretty, so pretty

Support, but don't abandon the book₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Support, character restoration is full

Dear author, update ah ah ah ah ah ah [almost crying] [crying]

It's pretty good, I've seen it from a dozen photos to now [note]

This is the best book I have ever seen that fits the character of Sunday, and it is also updated very quickly. I beg the author not to stop updating.

This is the episode that best suits the character so far. The quality in all aspects is beyond the average level of Tomato. It can be seen that the author is very attentive. Come on

This novel looks very real [Adoration]

This book is so beautifully written

Confirmation is pretty good

Good, but short and broken.

Very nice, hope to update ~ [love] [love] [love] [eating melon] [laughing]

No, I finally found a copy, but it has been discontinued again. Please let me go_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__

The teacher writes well ^_^♪Come on teacher

Updates are fast, the character design is still good, and it's the best to be more complete. Please give me a rating. After all, I've read it since the 20th chapter.

It's very beautiful and the descriptions are vivid, but I hope it will be updated faster.

It's really good-looking. It's the best article about Brother Sunday that I've read so far.

Looks good! This Sunday, my brother is too considerate, there is no character ooc

It's super beautiful and very delicious. Thanks for the treat. I finished reading it in less than half a day [adoration] [shy]

It's beautiful, the characters are awesome, the plot is clever, and the writing is super good. The only pity is that I didn't see it in time before, and now the author has stopped updating it😭😭😭

It's so beautiful. The image of Sunday is well written. I highly recommend it.

Didn't you say you don't have to worry about the end?