I’m Shin-chan’s Big Brother!

Are you writing a theatrical version? If you write about The Bride of Time and Space, it will be more nice if the little love and the protagonist appear in the future [smile][smile][smile]

Since the author wants Xiaoxin and Xiaocheng to grow up, those theatrical versions can be written when they are in elementary school. Of course, some plots can be written while interspersing some daily theatrical versions, and then skip elementary school, junior high school, and go directly to high school. After all, high school can be said to be the most lively time period in Japan's two-dimensional world. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it is mainly up to the author to decide, but I still hope that the author can write out as many theatrical versions as possible. Even with the help of Xiao Aijia, some plots may not be written smoothly, but they can be slightly changed into short articles to be active and active, so as not to write about daily life all the time. You can also write about some weird stories in the Crayon Shin-chan anime, or some extra chapters that appear in the anime. What about that? The protagonists are only in elementary school. There should be as few descriptions as in romance novels. It feels a bit awkward, like someone who is full of funny atmosphere and suddenly becomes a boss. It feels very nondescript [laughs awkwardly]

Personally I feel pretty good. Well, it makes up for some of Crayon Shin-chan's regrets. Kosaki stayed on later, which I personally think is pretty good. The protagonist of this article probably belongs to the type of cool writing. Founded his own company at the age of 5. You can take a look, it's really good.

In fact, when you read the original work, did you notice that the other people were not very close to Ah-Dai, only Xiaoxin had a better relationship with him, and there was a high school boxing match, and only Ah-Dai was with Xiaoxin, so Ah-Dai cherished his relationship with Xiaoxin.

The rhythm and content are great, you can eat it with confidence, but Xiaocheng's emotional intelligence is the same as that of a certain Fuji Shinichi, and he has a wooden head. There is absolutely no connotation to Kudo Shinichi!! Definitely a match!!!! No!!!!

Overall it's pretty good, but I wish there were more daily interactions between the protagonist and Xiao Ai. Author, when do you plan to start writing some plots for the theatrical version? If you start writing the plot for the theatrical version, will there be little love in the content?

It's okay. Mainly because there are too few new fans of this kind. This is the only one here that I like. Of course, there are many shortcomings. For example, some of the dialogues in the front look messy without quotation marks.

So far, the content and rhythm of the book are quite good. However, the content layout of the book is not very good. The author needs to improve a lot. Also, I have a suggestion, can you put double quotation marks when writing the character dialogue? Otherwise, you won't be able to tell the difference every time you read it. It's so troublesome.

Author: I don't feel the need to write a theatrical version. That's all. What happened in kindergarten. Just very good. Write a story between the 7 little ones. Follow up with elementary school, middle school and high school. Write about what happened to Xiao Cheng. Seven little ones are playing together.

Author, you are indeed a newbie, but I can suggest that you don't write those brackets like Xiaocheng Xiaoxin when writing. You can write directly from the sample, or you can learn from some authors to write like that, and you don't need to write brackets and the like after you finish writing.