I Am Brother Xiaoxin!

Are you writing a theatrical version? If you write about The Bride of Time and Space, it will be more nice if the little love and the protagonist appear in the future [smile][smile][smile]

Since the author wants Xiaoxin and Xiaocheng to grow up, those theatrical versions can be written when they are in elementary school. Of course, some plots can be written while interspersing some daily theatrical versions, and then skip elementary school, junior high school, and go directly to high school. After all, high school can be said to be the most lively time period in Japan's two-dimensional world. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it is mainly up to the author to decide, but I still hope that the author can write out as many theatrical versions as possible. Even with the help of Xiao Aijia, some plots may not be written smoothly, but they can be slightly changed into short articles to be active and active, so as not to write about daily life all the time. You can also write about some weird stories in the Crayon Shin-chan anime, or some extra chapters that appear in the anime. What about that? The protagonists are only in elementary school. There should be as few descriptions as in romance novels. It feels a bit awkward, like someone who is full of funny atmosphere and suddenly becomes a boss. It feels very nondescript [laughs awkwardly]

In fact, when you read the original work, did you notice that the other people were not very close to Ah-Dai, only Xiaoxin had a better relationship with him, and there was a high school boxing match, and only Ah-Dai was with Xiaoxin, so Ah-Dai cherished his relationship with Xiaoxin.

The rhythm and content are great, you can eat it with confidence, but Xiaocheng's emotional intelligence is the same as that of a certain Fuji Shinichi, and he has a wooden head. There is absolutely no connotation to Kudo Shinichi! ! Definitely a match! ! ! ! No! ! ! !

Personally I feel pretty good. Well, it makes up for some of Crayon Shin-chan's regrets. Kosaki stayed on later, which I personally think is pretty good. The protagonist of this article probably belongs to the type of cool writing. Founded his own company at the age of 5. You can take a look, it's really good.

Overall it's pretty good, but I wish there were more daily interactions between the protagonist and Xiao Ai. Author, when do you plan to start writing some plots for the theatrical version? If you start writing the plot for the theatrical version, will there be little love in the content?

So far, the content and rhythm of the book are quite good. However, the content layout of the book is not very good. The author needs to improve a lot. Also, I have a suggestion, can you put double quotation marks when writing the character dialogue? Otherwise, you won't be able to tell the difference every time you read it. It's so troublesome.

It's okay. Mainly because there are too few new fans of this kind. This is the only one here that I like. Of course, there are many shortcomings. For example, some of the dialogues in the front look messy without quotation marks.

Author, you are indeed a newbie, but I can suggest that you don't write those brackets like Xiaocheng Xiaoxin when writing. You can write directly from the sample, or you can learn from some authors to write like that, and you don't need to write brackets and the like after you finish writing.

Author: I don't feel the need to write a theatrical version. That's all. What happened in kindergarten. Just very good. Write a story between the 7 little ones. Follow up with elementary school, middle school and high school. Write about what happened to Xiao Cheng. Seven little ones are playing together.

I just read the first chapter and I like Xiaoxin very much. The writing is also good. It pays tribute to my childhood [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

The writing is very good, but the person writing it must be a novice. I find the spaces between words uncomfortable, but it does not prevent him from writing well.

I'm curious if the author will write a subsequent Kendo chapter? I remember that Xiaoxin's kendo potential is very strong. I remember that in the comics, Xiaoxin also used a branch to cut a leaf in half.

This author is one I admire very much. Personally I don't think I can write about him to the same extent. I believe the author spent a lot of effort writing this work. Chapter 76 is currently over, the movie about the bride. Perfect. I was listening to the song and reading it, and I felt like, author, you are so awesome.

Hui Chang looks good, anyway, I just like this pair very much~

The author's writing style is getting better and better. At first, the writing style felt average. Later, I can clearly feel that the author's writing style is getting better and better, and I can also feel that it is gradually improving. I hope the author can keep updating. I have already taken a liking to it [Admiration]

It's very good. There are also many scenes between the protagonist and Xiao Ai. I like it very much.

Have you changed the previous ones? I don't see anyone talking about the punctuation problem. I looked at a few pictures from Xiaobai Shopping and they all don't have any punctuation marks. It looks a bit uncomfortable.

I don't read nonsense. The main reason is that it is rare to see Xiao Ai in other novels. However, most of them have not been involved for a long time, and there are only about 123 pictures. But this one is different. Basically, Xiao Ai is included, and it is really great.

It's okay. Most of the plots are written by myself. Although the protagonist and Xiao Ai are a little slow, it's okay. At least it doesn't look toxic so far. The author was not very good at writing in the early days, but after Chapter 20, he changed his writing style. It is very good and not as messy as before. Now he has written a sweet chapter about Xiao Cheng and Xiao Ai [Adoration] [Adoration]

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

The author should work hard Come on, author, keep at it [sending heartfelt wishes]

This version of Xiaoxin is more reasonable.

Can you please continue to update? Why aren't the later ones updated? Can you continue to update?

Although it's a bit hard to see from the front, the back is still pretty.

Love watching it. To be honest, this rating is low.

Awesome [Blow Kiss] There are many creative and interesting creations, and the connection is no problem. I, a silly person like me, can't find the difference between characters and animation.

I like it very much. I have read a lot of Crayon Shin-chan books. I think this book is quite interesting and very good.

The writing needs to be improved. I read a little bit of it earlier, and it seemed to be similar to what the author of another book had written. Both of you have a running account style, so I suggest you improve your writing skills. But the later stage is pretty good.

It's very beautiful. The self-extension of the original daily life and the theatrical version is also very reasonable. I look forward to the follow-up story [Like]