Who Gets It? The Cool, Aloof Male Zerg Lord Keeps Flirting Without Realizing It

What can I say, the writing style is not bad, but it is not completely sweet, and there are a few minor flaws in the middle. For example, if you misunderstand and destroy Blue Star, thinking that there is a blood feud between them, you don't even search the Internet to verify it? When the recipient is given emotion and trust, what about cliff-like cold violence?! Don't you have a long mouth?! Also, later on, you thought you were doing it for Shou's benefit, but you didn't explain it clearly to Shou? The feeling of torture for the sake of torture is a bit shocking to me anyway, so I can skip it and watch it. At the same time, I feel that the Zerg setting is not that strong, it just feels like a layer of skin? Stripping away the Zerg setting, can it be read as an ordinary two-male protagonist novel, or even an ordinary romance? Maybe the new Zerg articles are written like this now? Most of the new Zerg articles I've seen recently are written with the situation of female romance characters in mind? Have the male eggs become viviparous? The pregnancy process refers to the female pregnancy process? The advantage is that the writing is average to above average, the plot is smooth, the logic is smooth, and the attack and the emotions are pulled. If you like something a little sour in the middle, you can check it out.

As soon as Shen Yan opened her eyes, she fell directly into the interstellar Zerg world. She wanted to just be a 'tool bug', but inadvertently made the female monarch who was like a flower of the high mountains blush and her heart beat. She pretended to be obedient and begged for help. The contrast was so sweet that my teeth almost melted! Moreover, the background of the Zerg tribe is written in a very touching way. The female monarch's cold and hard shell + irresistible possessiveness, coupled with Ana Shen's cowardly and flirtatious main attack operation, double cleansing + sweet pet line, and even the setting of 'unequal rights' are written in a soothing and enjoyable way! The interaction between attacking and receiving is sweet and awesome!

It's been a long time since I've been able to read a non-unit long Zerg article 😢 It's written in large capital letters and it's beautiful. It's not boring or procrastinating at all. The pace is good and the writing is good. I love it!! Wait for the update!!

The structure is clear, the emotions are logical, and the writing is very good. I like the redemption story so much, please make sure the ending is sweet!

The general content of the story is pretty good, with some notable points. In fact, when I first read it, I thought it was okay. The injured admiral met the gentle Shen Yan to heal and protect him, but there was a bit of OOC in the middle. When writing about the quarrel between Shen Yan and Admiral Blue Star, I felt that no matter how much Shen Yan quarreled, it should be verified. After understanding this fact, after thinking about it, I felt that the sudden cold war was a bit different from the character image established earlier. Reading this article is a turning point every time when I think it is good, which makes the character creation inconsistent, as if I am seeing another story. But generally it's pretty good!

I originally wanted to post a book review after reading it, but I couldn't bear it anymore. I'm not a senior and I might be childish and tolerant. First of all, it is very good-looking, very good-looking. Has the author passed the racing license? 🚗Soo Gaga is awesome. It is like a yellow stream in a tomato. The little girls who watched the vehicle were so happy that they twisted and screamed on the bed. They wanted to see the details and consciously clicked on it to check it out. Secondly, what touched me more was this sentence written by the author in the article: ""I mistakenly projected my obsession with my lost homeland and my hatred for the unknown enemy onto you. "" Really, I feel that the author has a very correct outlook on things. He is not involuntarily affected by emotions over and over again. He really reflects on himself about the harm his impulse has caused to his partner. Really touched me. Then here's what touches me the most after seeing more than 90 photos: When Lieutenant General Sivo Locke wanted to break away from the family, he collected evidence of the family's crimes bit by bit, but after the family released a video of his most embarrassing past, he thought he had failed and asked the two protagonists for help, and finally succeeded in overthrowing the family. (I'm not good at summarizing, so I'll give it a try) It reminds me of real-life incidents of women helping women, especially when other women are being harassed and can unite to resist. I'm really touched. (I know the character is male, let me think about it) Finally, I wish Lieutenant General Siwo Locke a free and easy life in the future, and good luck. I also wish Yanyan, Lanlan and Chongzai a happy reunion, and I wish Yanyan Lanlan's family a happy reunion forever! (I didn't know later that Lan Lan's family is Yan Yan's current family for the time being) (and the name of the insect cub) ""Thank you for your life-saving grace, thank you for the shelter you gave me, and thank you even more... For helping me win this lawsuit. " "Sivo Locke will never be forgotten. ""

The previous writing is very good and the writing style is okay, but in the chapters about misunderstanding, it is obvious that Shou has deviated from his character. For Shou, Gong is a ray of light in his long dark life and his salvation. In his heart, in that society, even if Gong wants to marry a female servant, although Shou feels uncomfortable, it is not unacceptable, not to mention being indifferent to Gong and staying away from Gong. Having said that there is no equal rights, there is no need to do this in order to highlight the equal relationship between attack and reception. The characters here are indeed very awkward, and there are also the chapters about misunderstandings. In fact, if the author did not specifically emphasize the misunderstandings, the effect should be better. I feel that after this misunderstanding, it is a bit difficult to connect, but overall it is okay. I personally feel that the score should be around 8.5

. It is very beautiful. I have never read such a beautiful book. The content and writing style are really good and I have nothing to say. The author's description of emotions is also very delicate and not blunt at all. I really highly recommend it. !!!!

Nice! Nice! There weren't any big surprises in the middle. In fact, I felt that the part about Blue Star was okay. It was more like a turning point in their love. After crossing this point, their love went to a higher level. If it was just a simple sweet story, I felt it would be too bland. It depends on personal preference, I like this kind of misunderstanding, then solving it, and then falling in love deeper 🤔

Another book that I can read after a long period of book drought! It can be seen that this is the author's first time writing, and the characters and plot are pretty good, but I think the most outstanding thing is the writing style, which is natural and smooth without being stiff, which is very rare. The overall reading is smooth and smooth, without any awkward feeling, nor immature, but very mature. Thanks to a few books, I will definitely write more outstanding works after I find the feeling! Looking forward to it! I also hope that the author will keep his own ideas when writing! Great support, don't be too influenced by readers' opinions, don't be afraid, new works have also been added to the bookshelf, look forward to them!