After Passing Through the Book, Bai Yueguang Became the Senior Sister

This book does not have the delicate emotions of a female cultivator, nor the intrigue and intrigue of a male cultivator. It feels completely different. Moreover, the author did not create his own setting and applied the combat power of ordinary immortal cultivators. This will make readers subconsciously think that it is cultivating immortals, and the combat power can easily collapse. Moreover, some parts of the plot in the book are misleading. In the first stage, it is still foundation building, and later it becomes golden elixir. There is also an emotional aspect. The senior sister's inexplicable affection for the protagonist seems to have come from a long time ago. Why does the senior sister know that the protagonist is the person she is looking for? A person with a broken soul is also your lover. It would be suspicious if you didn't find this out before. Let's talk about what I think is good. The sword spirit and the scabbard are a perfect match. I like this setting very much. Let's talk about the protagonist! The character and cognition of the protagonist can be said to be less likable than the current trend of tomato novels about cultivating immortals. It can be said that she is a typical junior sister character, gentle and kind, and has compassion for mortals. Nowadays, Tomato is in the genre of cruelty. Anyway, I quite like it, although I can't do anything to those who hurt me. Most people will think of this as a saint, haha, I think so too. Generally speaking, this is a typical novel about female immortality. The big smart and the unhappy, the little sun and the big ice cube, are a perfect match. The emotional line is currently in its early stages, and the emotional line has little development. It seems more like the growth of the protagonist. (Generally, I prefer to watch realms, because high realms give me a sense of security.) If you like to focus on the realm of combat power, you can watch it as a martial arts. If you don't want to apply the same thing as cultivating immortals to watching a female channel cultivating immortals, you can still watch it. I think I can watch it. Good job, author!

It's so beautiful. The sword and the scabbard are a perfect match. However, I am also somewhat curious about the journey of the natural sword spirit traveling around after leaving the scabbard. Will she think of the companion who once accompanied her? The latter must have ignorant spiritual consciousness and take the initiative to look for her. The sword spirit is very powerful, but the scabbard is stupid and weak. The two are in the same place, but the former does not take care of the latter, so that the latter lives pitifully like a fool and dies inexplicably. Now he suddenly jumped out and wanted to continue the relationship. I feel like a reasonable explanation is needed here, and the author is kindly requested to answer it. It means that the sword suddenly tried to approach the scabbard again. I don't know what happened between the original indifference and the change of attitude.

It's great to watch – the two-way rush between the two is so exciting! The Sword Senior Sister who doesn't understand human feelings, and the Sword Scabbard Junior Sister who has lost her memory, the two make up for each other and complement each other - the sword and the Scabbard are like the feelings between the two, one is as sharp as fire, the other is as tolerant as water. I hope they can meet each other honestly soon. Regarding the two identities of senior sister and master, senior sister can get closer and have better contact, and master can better protect and vent his anger, all for the sake of junior sister. The plot of the main body being jealous of the clone is also very interesting. I hope that the two identities can be balanced in the end. The master always loves and cannot be seen, which makes people feel itchy. So, after everything is over, will our Junior Sister Sword Sheath be able to live a life with Senior Sister on one side and Master on the other? Having the airs of a master on one side, and the tenderness of a senior sister on the other, I feel so happy just thinking about it—— Therefore, I wish senior sister (master) to get into the sheath as soon as possible!

How can I put it, it is difficult to see a double heroine article like this again. Basically, this kind of immortal configuration is that one weak one provides support to the stronger one, but in this article, the two heroines are very self-improving. This is the real strong woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![ANG][ANG][OK][ANG][ANG][OK][ANG][OK][ANG][OK][ANG][OK][ANG][OK]

If you read it intermittently offline using your watch, the reading time is not long. At first I was attracted by the two female protagonists. When I first saw Chang Le training in the Acropolis, I actually didn't want to watch it. At that time, I felt that the protagonist was a bit too kind, but then I thought about it. People need to grow up, and kindness is not a bad thing. It turns out that I made the right choice. I am glad that I continued to watch it. The more I watched, the more I liked it. The protagonist is very humane and growing. He is kind but not a virgin. The interaction with sister Xu Yingqi is also very interesting [blowing kiss] There are many characters in this book, and I feel that most of them are very good. There is not much darkness in this world of immortality, but there is a kind of humanity. The relationship between monks and mortals is not that of complete separation and slavery. I feel that the flow of darkness and various mindless upgrades are really comfortable after reading this book. Whether it is the growth of the protagonist, the personality and emotional interaction, or the shaping of the world view, it makes people feel a sense of tranquility and peace of mind.

It's okay. The subject matter is novel. The two heroines respect each other and consider each other. There is no twisty plot between the two protagonists. The relationship develops slowly and slowly. I feel comfortable watching it. The author's writing is good. Drinking and raining in the city. What a romantic idea. There may be some bugs in the setting. The relationship line can also start to develop.

I have read more than 20 chapters so far. The writing is very good, Ya! The plot arrangement is also reasonable. The only doubt at the moment is that Xu likes Chang Le so much, why doesn't he take Chang Le with him? Moreover, before time travel, Chang Le was just like a toddler. Xu didn't take her and live with her, but protected her secretly (probably). However, Chang Le died in the original work, so it's hard to imagine how Xu was protected. It's strange, but the flaws are not hidden, it's great to watch [please update]

Although there haven't been many updates yet, it's really good-looking. The senior sister is really cute. The setting of Sword and Spirit is so annoying to me. I can imagine the shabby senior sister Xu and her straightforward and bold spirit sword. Oh my god, I feel so in love! There is a feeling that two personalities like the same person |･ω･｀) Chang Le is also very hardworking and outstanding. She does not choose to escape just because of her own death. She bravely faces various challenges, even if they are all new and unknown. She is afraid, but she will not flinch. Although she is a monk, she still has her humanity. Kindness is her true nature, and tenacity is the ladder of her growth. I was really worried when I saw the part about Guo'er. I didn't expect that there would be a backstab, and I didn't expect that the man behind the scenes was an inconspicuous person. It was also quite uncomfortable to watch the monk avoid being contaminated by the cause and effect. Woohoo, I must praise my baby Changle for being awesome! ! ! Finally, I hope they will be sweet and be together!

The cutest lily text I've ever seen, it makes my heart go soft

A very interesting novel about cultivating immortals. The setting of the spiritual sword and the scabbard is very novel. I originally wanted to catch up to the end before writing a book review, but when I saw a book with a low rating, I casually wrote a review first. I will review my thoughts after reading it after it is finished.

Very nice article! ! After getting over the misunderstandings in the early stage, it became sweet later on. In addition, except for the protagonist, the others are also very well-shaped. The plot is divided into chapters, and you can see that the teacher wrote it according to the outline. There are some caveats. For fear of spoilers, I'll just tell you my thoughts. The object's transformation should have a sense of the prototype. However, if it is blocked by the secret realm and you don't even know that it is your own body, you may not be able to sense it temporarily. (Well, if you see it, you can think of adjustments like this.

The subject matter is novel, but as a love story about cultivating immortals, the relationship progress is relatively slow, and there are not the highlights that a romance novel about cultivating immortals should have. I can only see that the description of the characters is very delicate, but the plot has some bugs. I may not like this kind of slow pace, and the plot is not ups and downs.

So far, there are some weird spots, but it's okay. One good thing about this novel is that each chapter is relatively large (at least according to Tomato). Many novels are around 2,000, but this one is around 4,000. Well, how to put it, it's not weird, it has some poisonous points. The heroine is from the past, and I agree that she is not capable of murdering people. But facing a person who just stabbed her in the waist, the heroine not only didn't do anything to her, but also gave her her own defensive magic weapon. It seems a bit like a holy mother. It is true that modern people cannot be cruel, but they are not so kind to forgive the person who just stabbed them in the back. Let's look at it later. If it is to let the heroine grow, the heroine has indeed grown. Then I'll change the points back

The plot is good and quite comfortable. It's not embarrassing to look at like others like me. And the most important thing is that there is no system. There is no other book. It seems that the system cannot be written. If you write a system, it will be bad. I haven't seen such a comforting book for a long time. It just feels a little like that. It's just that the male protagonist was written too much, like a villain and not like a normal person. And when you read this book, you probably came here for the two heroines. The so-called male protagonist in front. He does the same thing as a villain, so it would be better to just write it as a villain, which would make people feel a little bit uncomfortable. But overall, this book gives people a very good impression. Both in terms of plot and writing. They are all extremely smooth. It seems that the veteran author is considered a clean slate in Tomato.

The following contains spoilers, but overall it is good, sweet, and the plot is quite interesting. The setting is very fresh. One of the two heroines is a scabbard (Chang Le) and the other is a sword (Xu Yingqi/Xu Nuo). The shortcomings in my personal opinion are that Xu Yingqi (senior sister) is Xu Nuo (master). / Sword Lord), the author insists on writing it like two people, which feels a bit separated. Xu never told Chang his identity. He only found out about it in the Demon King chapter. The rest of the part is okay. The interaction between the heroine is also very interesting. There is no big misunderstanding. It is worth watching.

This is my first comment. I have watched a lot of the two female protagonists who are cultivators of immortality. This is not a mindless romance. I feel that it is about love and cultivating immortals together, but there are more emotions. The training and fighting in it are written in detail, as well as the fortune telling. It is very real. I recommend it. It is good to watch.

It's very good-looking, the kind of book that makes the author turn into a typewriter and update it quickly. The characters and the plot are all full of flesh and blood, bones and soul. After catching up on the latest chapter, I just couldn't wait any longer, so I planned to save more and read it slowly. Big cheers for the author! I finally finished reading it. It is undeniable that the author is of high standard. The only uncomfortable thing is that the relationship between the two is not symmetrical. The setting senior sister is very strong, but the highlight of the plot is given to Lele. Even if she is the first heroine, she is a bit biased. The more I watch later, the more I feel this way. Reading the whole article, I have been supporting Lele. One keeps getting stronger, and the other keeps getting weaker. Even if it gets weaker, it doesn't matter if it doesn't look good. Shouldn't two people get better together? I remember that I set up the clone of the senior sister to be ordinary-looking, but in the end the plot left this clone and let the main body die. I admit that I am superficial and do not like this setting. As an ancestor, Sword Master can still be himself. Even if Sword Master is not Sword Master, he has not shied away from his responsibility and still has to protect the human race and fight against the demon race. I don't understand why the identity of Sword Master must be eliminated. When the demons and humans go to war, the one who decides the outcome on the battlefield will definitely become the new sword master regardless of whether she reaches the tribulation stage or not, because she killed the tribulation stage demons. The clone and the main body are like two people. The main body of Sword Master is very frustrating. Erasing this identity is actually like erasing her origin. She becomes stronger in order to protect people who have been in the tribulation period for tens of thousands of years. In the end, their cultivation level is low and they have to fight the demons in the tribulation period. Well, I feel quite complicated after reading this. The overall writing is very good, but the setting is a bit hard to describe.

I am so touched to see such high-quality articles on Tomato [cry][cry][cry][cry]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, hehehe, it's been a long time since I found such a good article with inspirational growth and a big main line. How to describe it, it's like the high-spiritedness from the novel, the excitement and obsession when reading the novel that I had lost, have been found again, and the emotional line is not abrupt at all, and the image creation of the two protagonists is also good. Personally speaking, this book resonated with me. During the six or seven years of reading the novel, I seemed to have lost the original vision. The novel gradually became a tool to pass the time and make sweets. Really, I haven't read it for a long time. Maybe her writing style is not as rigorous and vivid as that of famous writers, but during the reading process, I It's as if I have witnessed the growth of the geniuses with my own eyes. They are all good people. Especially the content of one of the secret realms, for the common people and the world, from being cold all over to being passionate, paving the way for the overall shaping... Please forgive me for my lack of words. I can no longer describe it in words. In this busy world, I have glimpsed a corner of the Taoyuan.

It is no exaggeration to say that this is the best novel with two heroines and a story about cultivating immortals that I have seen so far. The emotional line is not sluggish, and the plot line is also very good. I saw it during the exam week. It is difficult to stretch, and the writing is also very good. I just finished the creation chapter, it is so good [crying] [crying]

I finally finished reading it! It's really beautiful. Woohoo. There are always changes on the road to growth. Even if you want to stop, fate will push you forward. But there are always things that will not change, such as the original intention of always enjoying the world as one, and the promise of waiting for thousands of years. Everyone will grow up slowly, and the ups and downs will take turns. Everyone is full and three-dimensional, has strengths and weaknesses, and has grown. All the foreshadowings have been withdrawn (I was very happy to see it), and it also reflects many problems in real society. Even though I know that disaster is destined to be turned into good luck, the thinking about human nature and society brought about by it is still profound and meaningful. In short, it is a very good article...! This may be the charm of Xiuxianwen. The time is stretched out for a long time, and the feelings become a bowl of diluted warm wine, with the vastness of the world and the pull of gravity. Three thousand paths in the human world weave a large network of cause and effect. Jianmen is like a utopia, while Fengchao is a cruel and naive hope, slowly approaching the ideal. When I saw the ending, I really felt a sense of relief. All the crises were over, and I could return to normal happy days. Only then did I realize that what I had at the beginning was the most precious. I can no longer see the story after that, but they will definitely work together towards a common future. (Scabbard 99!)

It's so good, so wonderful, the plot is compact and well-handled, the characters are full, the settings are complete, and the overall background is also very nice. It makes me eat sweet candies and makes me feel the sassy and handsome cultivation style! All in all it's very good! ! I came across it during the summer vacation, but I must have lost my eyeballs and didn't collect it. Fortunately, I came across it again during this vacation. I fell in love with it in a second! ! Nice! Love watching! Like to watch! ! ! ! The author must hurry up and update! ! I hope I can start school tomorrow and see Fei Fei's new chapter in a month! ! [Sending hearts] [Sending hearts] [Sending hearts] [Sending hearts] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Breaking news] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The plot is completely logical and self-consistent, with no surprises, lots of sugar and almost no knives. The writing style is very good, and many scenes are described in a very graphic way. In the world of cultivating immortals, it depicts the feeling that the people are the masters of the country, and the two heroines have witnessed the struggle and growth of many creatures on this land. All in all highly recommended! !

It looks good, it looks good, the author should not doubt his own level! Youhuzai is also very good-looking, and this one is also very good-looking! If you don't write, I won't be able to find anything to read [I'm about to cry] There are very few authors who can make you want to read two books in one go, and I like the characters in both books very much, and the plot is really good at shaping the characters. Although this book is a novel about cultivating immortals, it explores something completely different from other novels about cultivating immortals. Some people will definitely not like it, but it is very to my liking. It is written in a unique and interesting way. And Kitsune's subject matter is even more interesting. It's just that the audience for fantasy novels is bound to not be large, so it's normal to be a little overwhelmed. Don't be discouraged. Just write the story you want to write. Creation should be a place where the author's personal expression can express his personality. The assembly line formula template is made by robots.

When I read the novel for the first time, I felt like I had a picture. The characters in the story are all very vivid. They are not just people on paper and ink. Everyone has their own personality. The plot of the story is not boring, nor is it the same kind of article. It is the first time I read it seriously. I will not feel bored with such a long story. I haven't finished it yet. Seeing that the promise is about to disappear, I understand what the author said. Lele will still like her. Although I still don't understand it from a God's perspective, but it makes sense when it comes to the character.

I've been reading it slowly over the past two days. The author's writing style is very good and the subject matter is very attractive to me. However, after more than 80 chapters, the relationship between the two has not been revealed, which makes me anxious to death. To be honest, I don't like this kind of mouthless scene, not to mention it's so long. But the writing is very good and the story is interesting. I support it and look forward to more works.

It's beautiful. I love reading it. I read it more and more, and then I realized that the author's sister is as graceful as a startling dragon, her pen is as graceful as a startling dragon, her wonderful strokes produce flowers, and the thin stream of water flows. Every time she writes, the lily is in full bloom, short and weak [shy]

The writing is really good. I have been looking for a lily novel in which the heroine is a scabbard since I was 12 years old, and now I finally have one that I can read. Also, don't hand out knives! ! ! ! !

It looks good, and I don't agree with the idea that there is a previous life. "The male and female protagonists are together" is an early warning. There is no previous life at all. It is the early warning given by this world that lets the spirit of the sword sheath born from heaven and earth know about it and pull it back to the original world. It can also be regarded as the world's self-rescue, so don't think it is unclean to insert unknown prophecies into cyberspace. Secondly, the author's writing is smooth, delicate, long, and in-depth. Some settings are old-fashioned but there are many hooks. It is very enjoyable to watch and encourages you to get into it. Finally, I hope the author will open more new books and look forward to the new setting~

Looks good! The story goes from personal destiny to the common people in the world, from the conflict between immortals and mortals, to the conflict between humans and monsters, the more you look at it, the better it gets. The heroine is growing up little by little, and the layout of the whole book is getting bigger and bigger, which is very shocking. Although the story is dull in some places, and boring in other places because of the analysis of contradictions, you can see that the author is making little progress, come on, come on [Blow kiss]