Explosive Performance at the Beginning, Green Tea Heroine, Please Work Hard
开局炸裂演绎，绿茶女主你努力啊
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Please Read the Book or Be Reborn with a Baby in Your Belly
Both period and modern texts are acceptable
The Kind of Straight Man Who Is Bound to the Heartthrob System
I want the kind of straight man who is bound to the king's man system (actually he was fooled into being bound to the heartthrob system and became the king's man)
Who Knows the Value of a Heartthrob Forum?
Looking for a heartthrob protagonist, many forum-style articles! Don't be too childish in your writing style!
Are There Two Male Protagonists, 1Vn, Cultivating Immortals?
I want to read a book similar to "Junior Brother Xie, what should I do if he is too popular (Junior Brother Xie is super upright)". Don't wear the text quickly!
Looking for 1Vn Double Male Main Shura Field
Is There Any More Normal Male Lead Heartthrob Novel? . .
I want to read a book similar to "The Heartthrob Straight Man's Flash Abuse". It's best if there is no cp, it doesn't matter if you have cp, and don't recommend the type that is delicate and soft, with skin as smooth as cream, and don't recommend the kind of novel where the male protagonist is the female protagonist! !
Is There Any Male Heartthrob, and It Is Quick Wear, 1/N, Please
Soft baby boy
Two Men, a Heartthrob, Is There Such a Thing?
No heroine
Please Give Me a Heartthrob. Both Men and Women Can Watch It, but the Main Character Is a Man.
Heartthrob ⅹ, with CP
The Heart-Throb Male Protagonist Who Cultivates Immortality Is Ambiguous with Everyone and Is Not a Stupid and Delicate Type.
I want to read a book similar to "The Cannon Fodder Assists and the Protagonist Group Confessed Again".
I'm a Native, and I Want to See the Male Protagonist Become a Serious Heartthrob, and All the Members Have Single Arrows.
Is There Any Kind of Double-Nan Main Article Where the Aunt Laughs the Whole Time? ! Beg
Quickly Wear Two Male Protagonists 1Vn
Help People Write Book Reviews for Free
I want to read a book similar to "Online Games: Reshaping Life". Help people write book reviews, no need to reply. Please add this book to your bookshelf and start updating here
No CP, Male Heartthrob with Explosive Strength, Quick Wear
I want to read a book similar to "What's wrong with the protagonist in a sadistic novel who is so powerful". With super strong force, he went on missions in the small world and became a heartthrob and captured many of the original protagonists. However, he was cold-hearted and left after completing the mission.
Please Write QHQ for the Heartthrob Dual Male Protagonists
I'm Looking for the Kind of Brother Who Is Charming to Everyone, Shuang Nan. It's Best If the Brother Is Lazy but Strong.
Tomato Definitely Doesn't Have the Male Heartthrob + Non-Slicing + 1Vn + Quick Wear Article
I want to read a book similar to "Holographic Game: I Rely on Assistance to Become Star Dawn (Holographic Dawn Game)". I don't like wanting and wanting at the same time. I don't even resist men's intimacy when I'm doing tasks, but I still insist on saying that I'm a straight man. It's better to be cynical and play with feelings.
Shuangnan, Do You Have Any Recommendations? Just Look Good.
All Single Arrow Male Protagonists
I want to read a book like "On the Possibility of Straight Men Becoming Heartthrobs". The hero is a heartthrob! It's okay to have no CP, and it's okay to have two male protagonists
The subject matter is very good, but I would like to make a small suggestion. In the dialogue of this novel, the word "said" appears a bit frequently, and they are all said by xxx. Too many words of "said" seem a bit stiff and mechanical. The word "said" can be reduced and rich dialogue markers can be used, such as using different verbs (such as proposing, nodding, supplementing, eyes light up) and descriptive phrases, which can show the flow of dialogue and the emotional changes of the characters more vividly and naturally. For example: Original conversation: "Tom, let's go to the library," Jack said. "Good idea, I'm just looking for some new books to read," said Tom. "I heard that there are some good mystery novels recently." Jack said. "Really? I'm also interested in mystery novels." Tom said. Revised dialogue: "Tom, let's go to the library." Jack suggested. "Good idea," Tom nodded, "I was just looking for some new books to read." Jack added: "I heard that there are some good mystery novels recently." "Really?" Tom's eyes lit up, "I'm also very interested in mystery novels." This is just my little thought as a reader. I hope it can help your work to be more perfect. Come on.
I only ask one question! All? All? All? [Lick the screen][lick the screen][angry] I hope it is [shy][shy]
Jiang Zi is really explosive. . . [Face covering] [OK] Some places are a bit stiff.
It's very interesting. Personally, I feel that there is too much written about Xiaoqi's past life. There is another question. I just want to know whether the child is a phoenix or a dragon? (If the author doesn't like it, you can delete [send heart] [send heart]) The first 175 chapters describe Xiaoqi's current life, and then the next 155 chapters describe Xiaoqi's previous life, and then! Start describing Xiaoqi's previous life again! ! ! Wow, I really don't want to say anything [smile]
What can I say about this work? There were a lot of mistakes at the beginning. Everyone helped me a lot and revised it many times. As a result, the volume was very small. But I persisted, 200,000 to 1 million, for a long time. I was a little reluctant to let it go. I will use AI to expand it in the future and strive to achieve an ending I am satisfied with. I couldn't bear to let him give up. There are many pitfalls that have not been filled. Because it is very difficult to write Xiuxian. There are so many materials and many men that I have almost forgotten. Everyone has taught me a lot, and I have learned a lot. You can say that as soon as I practice, I am still suitable for writing long narratives. When will I replenish it? I will leave it longer during the Chinese New Year, and I may replenish it. The break is not the end. In fact, I really like this book. I didn't hold on to the second book test. It's my problem and I'm lazy. But to be honest, I really like this book. I think it's quite normal. It took me a long time to revise it, which wasted a lot of time. I have also seen your criticisms at the beginning, and I have worked hard, but I promised that it will not end, so I will make up for it when I have the opportunity. I also hope that Fengqi will have a good ending.
I read a little bit when I have free time, and then I finish it. In terms of subject matter and content, it is very suitable to my liking, but the connection in some parts is very strange, which makes me feel like I deleted a part and then added it. Also, sometimes I can't figure out whether the words are in my heart or spoken. Come on baby, I look forward to seeing your progress!
It's okay. This is my favorite theme. Umbrella, dance, twin men, bells, charm, and beauty are all my favorites. It's just my feeling. This is a dialogue flow. It would be better if the environment can be added.
Keep up the good work, author! Take good care of you [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]
Author: I really like this type of novel, so please work hard and finish it [Love]
It's pretty but not boring, pretty good
Very beautiful, quite difficult
Very good, come on! Great author!
It looks good, overall I like the theme [Note]
I like the author, come on