Ming Chao: Phoenix Returns to Wutong, Leaving Returns to Qi

My suggestion is to write more + edit more. As for the content of Ming Chao, it doesn't really matter. After all, it is mainly written around the protagonist Chang Li. If it follows the main plot, it is only 1.2 And there are too few plots at the moment. Therefore, you have to think about the outline in advance, otherwise it will not be easy to write later. Finally, cheers to the author, the writing style is very good. I have read more than a thousand books, and the writing style of this book is also very nb.

Author, I have some suggestions. I have read a lot of fanfics, and there are quite a few of them, but the good-looking and high-rated works have one characteristic: any knife is used to prepare for the subsequent sugaring. The author's writing style is indeed good, but if you just stick to writing about knives, whether it is Mingchao or Blue Star, it will make people feel weak and sad. When we read novels, we really hope that the novel has depth, but we also really want to see a happy ending. This is my expectation for the novel. I hope the author can write better and better.

True reading comes from inner love. This love is pure and natural, just like a sunflower that always pursues the sun, not for fame and fortune, but obeys the call of the heart. It is this love that allows people to smell the fragrance of books no matter when, where, or under what circumstances, and to touch the pages of the book with tender fingers in solitude. In the passion of active collision, the people and things in the book, the author's ideas and wisdom interact and communicate with our experiences, thoughts and emotions, and they resonate with each other. As time goes by, we gain the deepest understanding and understanding of life. If you have seen my book review, don't read it. If you have the time, don't read it and update it soon!

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is good. It is one of the few good books in Mingchao fan fiction. The disadvantage is that the author may not be able to continue writing later. After all, Mingchao has only been out for more than a year, and the story line and world background are not obvious. If the author writes according to the updated content of Mingchao, the update speed will inevitably slow down. However, if the author writes according to his own ideas and imagination, it may be fresh, but it is also easy to be different from the subsequent content of Mingchao, which will cause a large deviation from the reader's impression in the future. (The above are my personal opinions and are just suggestions and comments. Of course, you will only know if you like this book after reading it. I personally think it is worth reading. Finally, there may be problems in my comments. You can point them out. If you don't like it, don't criticize!)

Love to watch! More, faster and more! Why are there so few words? A chapter of just over 1,000 words is too few! It should be at least 2,000 words, and it should be updated twice a day! Otherwise it won't be enough! I can only keep books

Keep updating, but the update will be very slow... I will update it naturally when I feel inspired. Finally, I wish you all find your own long-term separation... Although I am afraid of flames, when I feel the inexplicable warmth coming from your palm, it is always difficult to break free. The feeling of the burning heat on my tree trunk. It's like, like, your stubborn frequency broke into my life. It was not the burning heat that Lihuo left on the tree trunk for a moment, but the desire burned into the heart of the tree. I hope you can give me more. I want to stay by your side. Now, I'm pretty sure it's this constant neediness... That makes up my life.

The front is a bit difficult to understand, but the back... See for yourself

It looks good, but it's a bit messy at the front, but it doesn't affect your viewing.

It's very beautiful. Even I, who's not a Changli Chef, think it's beautiful. Except for some of the first chapters, it feels like classical Chinese (it looks big, but I can understand it). All in all, it's highly recommended.

Although I don't know what to say, I still want to say something

Very good, even though I don't play Mingchao, I can still watch it.

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot is a bit confusing. The characters are not very rich, but it still makes me addicted to reading. I have been following it since August until now.

It's been a while since I've been working on it. What I want to read is a sweet article, do you understand?

May I ask in which chapter the protagonist meets Changli again after 12 years?

The story is a bit bland though! But your writing is really good [face covering]

There are very few novels that I have read.

An excellent fan work. Excellent plot, the content of the plot is deep, the artistic conception is very full, and the thoughts and feelings expressed are also vivid and vivid. In addition, there is also a wonderful writing style, which vividly outlines the artistic conception of some scenes with extraordinary significance. I have read more than a dozen chapters now, and they feel very good, so please give it a thumbs up, author! I hope that the subsequent plot will be more in-depth and have more foreshadowing. In addition, I also want to say that this is much better than those mindless fanfics, which are mindless, cool and sweet. The plot logic is strong and the plot is deep. I really want this.

The author should stop replying to messages and focus on writing the book. Give me a few more. [Smile]

Don't judge, just go and see for yourself

It's so emotional, I'm really in tears [I'm about to cry]

The front part feels a bit messy, so the author will continue to work hard and hope to write better in the back part.

It's very good-looking. I think it's quite good-looking with a moderate amount of personal settings and complete and distinct characters.

It looks good, I love watching it, I still want to watch it

Don't know how to evaluate, just evaluate casually

The first person is still a niche, which is a bit uncomfortable.

Do you know how uncomfortable I feel when you stop updating? As a result, I only dared to collect them, but I didn't dare to read them. I'm afraid I'll be anxious to death if you don't update after watching it😭😭😭

The book is very interesting^ω^ and the plot is also very good. I hope the author will work harder! ! !

It's such a hazy feeling

Keep up the good work, author!

It's not Bai Wen, it's pretty good