My Friend's Harem

New bottle, yes, the first person is not a problem, as long as the writing is good, it is the icing on the cake. By the way, regarding the character of Lin, from the perspective of the revealed character, it is objectively reasonable and a bit boring to the senses. If the author wants to make her a key figure, it is best to provide a special line to solve the problem or to shape the character into a cute and silly girl who is cold and calm on the outside but very cute on the inside. Just because she cannot express her inner emotions to the protagonist, she then behaves coquettishly and begs for a hug, and then reverses it by speedrunning through straight balls. It is recommended to add a lot of inner monologues to achieve the whitening effect. Of course, Lin's performance can actually be written in a way that makes people feel real, but if you want to use a hedge as a explosive point, it can easily become a poisonous point. It is best not to write about Lin intermittently. This will only create and deepen the stereotype that Lin is a very unpleasant character. Of course, I am just suggesting that the ownership still belongs to the author.

In terms of characters, most of the male protagonists are rational, but impulsive in small details. The three-dimensional image of the characters fits the torturous life very well. Each of the small characters does not have too many abnormal thoughts and behaviors. Overall, there are no poisonous points (purely a personal opinion, welcome to discuss) The plot and theme are all centered around the emotional lines that happened around the male protagonist, and the story lines are interspersed. Although many details are not very detailed (perhaps a character card can be added in the chapters where new characters, mainly monsters, appear. Because of sudden changes) If it appears, it is a bit like a game that needs to be updated, but it does not say what to update. It appears temporarily and is not so easy to substitute, or the connection with the plot is not that strong.) However, it promotes the relationship between the characters through a concise story, but it also takes advantage of the author's expertise in emotional description. There's nothing much to say about the worldview, and I don't really understand it myself.

I love watching this kind of slightly twisted love line! Lin's sticky love for the protagonist and the protagonist's resistance are simply amazing! The two of them have been the closest people since childhood, but they walked opposite directions with their backs to each other. When they see him laughing with other women, they will feel instinctive anger and jealousy, and they can't stop their tears. The intertwining of love and hate brings about an indescribable sense of wonder. The position next to him was clearly mine in the beginning! Why didn't you come to me? Did I do something wrong? Please don't ignore me, even say a word, don't say nothing. Conversations like this make people can't help but say, the author is really awesome! Except for Lin, I also really like Meiya's setting. I should say that she has a good handle on me in terms of personality. It's not easy to describe, but it does not hinder my preference for this character. I feel like I can forgive him no matter what bad things he does. Final words (I hope I can read your works in the vast sea of books in the future! I also hope you will get better and better, strengthen your beliefs, and work hard to create!)

It's quite good-looking, and there is no takeover, green or anything, whether it is the last life or this life, the male protagonist's brother just likes Lin but can't see that the male protagonist is better than him, and Lin also likes the male protagonist, the male protagonist's brother is all kinds of unhappy and jealous. I hope there will be no poisonous points in the future, so it is good to write in the future 🤔 At present, it should be a harem, and I hope it is a harem. It's impossible for all these girls to like the male protagonist and end up giving away the girl or something like that🤔 Anyway, I don't want the plot to be toxic in the future.

Although it is a pity, life is not perfect and full of uncertainties. The sudden ending comes too soon, which is a bit emotional. But no matter what, I still hope that the author can better survive these twists and turns and live a good life. I also hope that the author can still remember this book in the future. It is an unfinished story. There are readers who like it waiting for you to draw a successful conclusion to this story. (Novel is just like my pursuit of dreams, the chapters of the story are waiting for you to write)

Well, how should I put it? It can be seen that the author's writing style is relatively immature. Even in the first person, some emotional words have to be added. There is a lot of room for improvement in the details, but the ideas and ideas of this article are very good. The advantage of choosing the first person is that it is easier for people to get involved in the novel, but the protagonist gives everyone the feeling that he is too omnipotent. Anyway, I read this thing as a fun novel. I will write more and recommend reading other good novels. Come on.

I just read it. First-person novels are rare nowadays. The style reminds me of a book-eating demon. Maybe it's because the only first-person novels I've read in recent years are his books. The atmosphere always reminds me of his books: I'm a Superpower and Siren Blade.

My brother is not so good, why did he suddenly cut it off?

It's a very good Western fantasy, but don't end it suddenly. If you're really tired, it doesn't matter if the update frequency is slowed down a little. If you don't have inspiration, you can just go to the final chapter quickly. Even if it ends like this, I hope there will be some endings with different female protagonists...

🥺 Wow, depending on Alice's words, this plot is too short, but the male protagonist is full of confidantes, and it feels unfair to Alice. Only Alice feels that Lin is going to destroy the world again. It's hard to resist. . . The writing is really beautiful, keep it up, I like Alice