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New bottle, yes, the first person is not a problem, as long as the writing is good, it is the icing on the cake. By the way, regarding the character of Lin, from the perspective of the revealed character, it is objectively reasonable and a bit boring to the senses. If the author wants to make her a key figure, it is best to provide a special line to solve the problem or to shape the character into a cute and silly girl who is cold and calm on the outside but very cute on the inside. Just because she cannot express her inner emotions to the protagonist, she then behaves coquettishly and begs for a hug, and then reverses it by speedrunning through straight balls. It is recommended to add a lot of inner monologues to achieve the whitening effect. Of course, Lin's performance can actually be written in a way that makes people feel real, but if you want to use a hedge as a explosive point, it can easily become a poisonous point. It is best not to write about Lin intermittently. This will only create and deepen the stereotype that Lin is a very unpleasant character. Of course, I am just suggesting that the ownership still belongs to the author.

In terms of characters, most of the male protagonists are rational, but impulsive in small details. The three-dimensional image of the characters fits the torturous life very well. Each of the small characters does not have too many abnormal thoughts and behaviors. Overall, there are no poisonous points (purely a personal opinion, welcome to discuss) The plot and theme are all centered around the emotional lines that happened around the male protagonist, and the story lines are interspersed. Although many details are not very detailed (perhaps a character card can be added in the chapters where new characters, mainly monsters, appear. Because of sudden changes) If it appears, it is a bit like a game that needs to be updated, but it does not say what to update. It appears temporarily and is not so easy to substitute, or the connection with the plot is not that strong.) However, it promotes the relationship between the characters through a concise story, but it also takes advantage of the author's expertise in emotional description. There's nothing much to say about the worldview, and I don't really understand it myself.

I love watching this kind of slightly twisted love line! Lin's sticky love for the protagonist and the protagonist's resistance are simply amazing! The two of them have been the closest people since childhood, but they walked opposite directions with their backs to each other. When they see him laughing with other women, they will feel instinctive anger and jealousy, and they can't stop their tears. The intertwining of love and hate brings about an indescribable sense of wonder. The position next to him was clearly mine in the beginning! Why didn't you come to me? Did I do something wrong? Please don't ignore me, even say a word, don't say nothing. Conversations like this make people can't help but say, the author is really awesome! Except for Lin, I also really like Meiya's setting. I should say that she has a good handle on me in terms of personality. It's not easy to describe, but it does not hinder my preference for this character. I feel like I can forgive him no matter what bad things he does. Final words (I hope I can read your works in the vast sea of books in the future! I also hope you will get better and better, strengthen your beliefs, and work hard to create!)

It's quite good-looking, and there is no takeover, green or anything, whether it is the last life or this life, the male protagonist's brother just likes Lin but can't see that the male protagonist is better than him, and Lin also likes the male protagonist, the male protagonist's brother is all kinds of unhappy and jealous. I hope there will be no poisonous points in the future, so it is good to write in the future 🤔 At present, it should be a harem, and I hope it is a harem. It's impossible for all these girls to like the male protagonist and end up giving away the girl or something like that🤔 Anyway, I don't want the plot to be toxic in the future.

Although it is a pity, life is not perfect and full of uncertainties. The sudden ending comes too soon, which is a bit emotional. But no matter what, I still hope that the author can better survive these twists and turns and live a good life. I also hope that the author can still remember this book in the future. It is an unfinished story. There are readers who like it waiting for you to draw a successful conclusion to this story. (Novel is just like my pursuit of dreams, the chapters of the story are waiting for you to write)

Well, how should I put it? It can be seen that the author's writing style is relatively immature. Even in the first person, some emotional words have to be added. There is a lot of room for improvement in the details, but the ideas and ideas of this article are very good. The advantage of choosing the first person is that it is easier for people to get involved in the novel, but the protagonist gives everyone the feeling that he is too omnipotent. Anyway, I read this thing as a fun novel. I will write more and recommend reading other good novels. Come on.

I just read it. First-person novels are rare nowadays. The style reminds me of a book-eating demon. Maybe it's because the only first-person novels I've read in recent years are his books. The atmosphere always reminds me of his books: I'm a Superpower and Siren Blade.

My brother is not so good, why did he suddenly cut it off?

[Almost crying] Wow, depending on Alice's words, this plot is too short, but the male protagonist is full of confidantes, and it feels unfair to Alice. Only Alice feels that Lin is going to destroy the world again. It's hard to resist. . . The writing is really beautiful, keep it up, I like Alice

It's very good. I was a little uncomfortable at first, but then the content of the novel conquered me, and the writing is also very good. In short, it is comfortable to read and makes me want to keep reading. I hope the author can maintain the style and slow down as long as the quality can be guaranteed.

It's a very good Western fantasy, but don't end it suddenly. If you're really tired, it doesn't matter if the update frequency is slowed down a little. If you don't have inspiration, you can just go to the final chapter quickly. Even if it ends like this, I hope there will be some endings with different female protagonists...

Although it's a little boring at first, it gets better and better as you go later.

I saw the latest progress and overall it's okay. However, there is a little bit of narration on the relationship between Alice and the protagonist, which makes the plot of the protagonist chasing Alice feel like something is missing; another point is that the protagonist's feelings for the female characters are still a bit vague (but I feel that the author will dedicate a few chapters to let the protagonist sort out his feelings in the future [learned]) Perhaps due to the word count issue, the author has not fully shown us the world view of the book and the emotional drama of the protagonist, but I think this book will be very interesting when it is finally written. Come on, author!

It is a rare western fantasy masterpiece among Tomatoes. The characters are described delicately without too much poison. It can be said that it starts to work hard after chapter 20. It would be better if the background of the characters is richer, and some small side stories can be produced to make up for it. Finally, if the title of the work is changed, it will be more perfect. The above is my personal opinion, thank you.

It's good to watch, the plot doesn't drag on, the main line is fairly clear, and everyone has their own style and characteristics. Coupled with the different world template, the male protagonist himself is also relatively indifferent. He will not deliberately seduce the female protagonists (although the male protagonist has only identified the elf so far) to save the world in redemption and being redeemed.

It's really good to watch. Although the first-person perspective and the plot may be a bit discouraging at the beginning, it gets better and better as you go on.

Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines? [Laughing evilly][thinking]

The emotional lines are handled very well, and the transformation of everyone is obvious. The author's writing style is very good. The article "My Fairy Life" is particularly well written. Alice also values ​​character and does not like Ares. It is a good book with clear logic.

The title of the book may mislead readers, but the author's writing is excellent and the more you read, the better it becomes.

It was so enjoyable to read it in the first person [please give me more updates]. I feel that the reason why the rating did not reach 8.5 Or above was completely delayed by the title of the book. It was recommended five or six times before I clicked in and tried to read it [smile]

I like it, the emotions are well written, and the plot is smooth and smooth. It's fun to watch. I beg the author to update it soon.

A very interesting western fantasy novel, but I don't know if it should be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. I personally prefer multiple female protagonists🥰

It's very good, very sensible and not procrastinating. It reminds me of another book that has been discontinued. I hope the author can stick to it! I don't have any money, so I just post a copy and sincerely support the author!

It's good-looking. Although it's a rebirth story, the memories are not obtrusive. The heroines are also distinct, but some of their characteristics are repeated. The only flaw is the name. Changing it to a better name will definitely make it more popular [Send Hearts][Send Hearts]

It's really embarrassing (*≧▽≦) [Send heart] [Send heart] Good-looking

It's okay, but it's a bit rushed.

Alice misunderstood the protagonist. Don't do this. I feel that the protagonist should directly deal with the matter of self-destruction and rebirth with Alice, otherwise it will be difficult to handle, and it will be very poisonous if not handled well.

[Facepalm] This book has the feeling of following the District 11 light novels in the past.

So far, it looks okay, except that Pig's Knuckle's treatment of Lin was a bit inconsistent earlier, requiring both investigation and deliberate staying away. There are quite a few confidantes at the moment, and they are all portrayed quite well. I hope they will have a harem.

It's rare that I can read a first-person novel (because I don't like to read first-person novels and I rarely read them). Maybe it's because of Western fantasy, and it feels like it has a bit of a translation accent, but the writing is still very good. Nice