Maomao Will Continue to Persuade Today.

Yun Chu is very cute, and she is a loli who can become a mother. I just don't know if this one has a single heroine or not. Although the previous one was said to have a single heroine, Su Bei was so entangled with others that I felt a little stomach ache after reading it (especially Lin)

There is a new loli [laughs] I wish the author will get better and better and write more loli, and I am really not a loli fan!

Lao A three-piece heirloom set Lolita, fighting power, civet cat [laughing evilly]

Compared to the previous book, I have no desire to read it. In the previous book, Su Bei was very happy with various behaviors under a high-pressure environment, and the daily life and feelings with Jasmine were very delicate. I have been following this book since the beginning. The taste is different. Come on.

The previous book was Man-Machine Lao Su, and this book is Man-Machine Cat. Daily, funny, single heroine. I found a small amount of fighting in a lot of memes, a lot of them in daily life, and the cats are so cute [shy][shy][shy]. Just like the previous book, the writing style is a bit offbeat, the worldview is as grand as ever, and the various characters are very vivid. You may not see anything in the first few chapters, but after chapters 50-60, the author starts to let himself go. He says he needs to be restrained, but he still flies as usual. It is a good book, no, this author is very good at writing good books, and it is very suitable to my taste. I recommend it. . . After reading it, I still have more to say. Due to poor data, many foreshadowings and contents were not perfectly displayed. It is really a pity, but regret is a normal state of life. Overall, it's pretty good that the ending can perfectly connect with the previous book. There are a lot of worldviews in the middle that really make people's heads tingle, and there are also a lot of strange metaphors, daily miraculous metaphors, etc., Which all make people smile. That's it for this book, keep it up and look forward to seeing you in the next book👋

How to say it? This book is not suitable for serious people [face covering] In terms of plot, the world view and everything are quite grand. Let's see how the author fills this gap [like]. The characters are well drawn. I hope the rating can be higher [laughs] If we put aside the erotic content. This book is really good. (Because if you engage in those contents, some people are bound to not accept it.) The protagonist of this book really allows me to see a truly "good person". Because of his own reasons, many people have a lot of prejudice against him, but he can persevere, which is also very valuable [laughs]. And when Maomao faced his sister who wanted to destroy the protagonist, he still chose to help the protagonist (the peerless cat is okay [laughs]). I hope the author will continue to make more updates, it's really interesting [like]

Familiar human-machine feel, familiar loli heroine, it feels like the type I will like very much

To be honest, this book seems to be obviously better than the previous one. The plot of the previous book seemed a bit fragmented, as if it was filling in holes just for the sake of filling them in. This one seems to be very smooth and coherent.

It is really a book that is difficult for me to evaluate in short words. It satisfies all my fantasies about light love, surreal mapping, psychic powers, and daily comedy. This is my first time reading a book by this author, so there are no spoilers/setting connections from the previous book. It feels like a huge foreshadowing, and every time I unravel it, I am suddenly enlightened. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also super sweet, especially the deep affection and love that spans time between each other. There are also Loli's mother's persuasion (in every sense), and her thoughts on good/bad people. The themes of traveling through time and space are designed to have high upper and lower limits. The poorly written works are bad and cliché works, but the well written works bring a kind of spiritual shock (for example, last year's Chinese comic "Children of Time", if it is said to be a human being, then this one is definitely the only one I have seen so far (the other one is the ultimate Narcissus pure love)). What it brings is that it breaks away from traditional concepts, like Japanese comics, and is a passionate novel that is not hijacked by secular values. Although there are some common plots in today's online literature, after truly immersing yourself in reading, you can feel that the work truly contains a modern and self-centered soul, a dull boy who is better than the past and the future. Looking forward to subsequent updates! Continuing to taste...

I read "When Jasmine Blooms" for 65 hours. Because it was finished, it was natural for me to read another book. The Scrapyard book did not do very well. It looked a bit awkward from the beginning (and it was rewritten once and changed according to the world view and main plot). There are some places in the middle that feel a little fragmented, but they are harmless. I love reading them. Moreover, this book has many links with the previous book (such as the system, such as the Twelve Gods Su Bei), so it is recommended to finish "Jasmine" before reading it. In short, Yun Chu is very cute, and Lin Chuan is a lolita fan, so it's cool.

I feel that the plot is a bit slow, and the content is dull due to the daily routine. Although there are live activities and occasional flashpoints, Maomao's character is relatively cold, and the protagonist is the kind of adolescent boy who doesn't dare to speak. As a result, the plot is too bland, and it doesn't have the same feeling as when Su Bei drew his sword to help Jasmine carry her destiny. I even feel like gluttony. In this case, if there is no key figure to promote the plot or a combination of two people like gluttony and millet porridge, the overall plot will be indifferent for a long time. The fox demon gives me the feeling of being a legendary clown miner who digs holes every day. It doesn't give me a strong feeling, nor does it have the kind of energy that gluttony brings to people. I feel that the author is in a strange state. When reading the article, I always feel very confused. It can be said that he is addicted to his own art and cannot extricate himself. But during the plot, the plot did not advance. When this kind of plot appeared in the previous book, the relationship between Su Bei and Jasmine was more or less advanced, but this one is just a plot. The whole story is very good, and I like to watch the whole story, but too many stories make the content too bloated, and the plot is not advanced, which makes it uncomfortable. Because of the characters of the male and female protagonists, the emotions are a bit too flat originally, and because the whole life and daily life take up a lot of space, the plot progresses slowly. Daily stories are very emotional, and they need explosive points to make them enjoyable. But at present, there are not many explosive points. Of course, I will continue to follow it, because Su Bei and Jasmine left such an impact on me that I even had a withdrawal reaction after reading it and couldn't read other books. This is rare for me, because I have been reading books for about eight years, and I believe that the author's book will not be any worse.

Yunchu Maomao is so cute. This charming flavor is so right. I love this writing style and emotional development [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Hiss~ Playing with pure love is so great and beautiful. The previous book was also so pure love. It's so beautiful that it's indescribable [Sending my heart]

Needless to say the greatness of the author, it is a rare suspense type book that makes people most curious about the content and subsequent development, so hurry up and update 50 chapters a day. [Sinister smile]

2026.3.31 It looks good. Why do I say it doesn't look good? The emotional description is very delicate, and the kittens are super cute, but it seems that the glory of motherhood is a bit too high-pitched. It has a strong shadow of the previous book, or it is basically a sequel to the previous book, but it is not bad for me. It even feels very good. After all, I personally really like that book. Maybe this book is not as well written as the previous one, but it is definitely a very good book. Unfortunately, it is really too short. Looking forward to the new book Kou Yu, the super lolicon author

Nice! It is rich in funny elements without losing the plot. It inherits the excellent writing style of the previous book and is well worth watching! The author must not abandon the book! It's just that few people are reading it temporarily. With the current quality, if readers recommend the book more, it will surely achieve greater glory!

After the overhaul, the pace has slowed down a lot, and the characters feel more fleshed out, so keep up the good work! (ง•̀_•́)ง

I've been following it since the first book. The author always has a special feeling when writing about daily life. All in all, it's very good. What about the extra chapters of the previous book that are still owed dozens of chapters? ?

I think this book is very interesting. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet. I also like the setting of Yunchu. I have also read the author's last book. What I personally feel is more uncomfortable is that the dilemma and pressure faced by the male and female protagonists are a bit too great. Both books are the same. Could the author make the main plot more relaxed?

After the legendary anti-pressure king Laosu, Laochuan appeared again. We must support it. Long live pure love>ᴗoಣ

It's a stable performance. It's still fun to watch. The dialogue writing style is quite humorous. I just don't know why I feel that the protagonist is a bit miserable. Maybe it's because I only saw the early stage. I hope this book will get a score of 9 as soon as possible.

It's good-looking, and the heroine is very good at persuading [eating melon]

It's pretty good to watch, but the plot unfolds slowly and the foreshadowing is long. I hope everything ends well The plot and setting itself have the flavor of "Apocalypse Online". To be honest, the writing is quite good, but you have to pay attention to the rhythm.

Although the story did not recycle some of the foreshadowing due to traffic problems, it still achieved a high degree of completion and perfectly echoed the previous book. The meeting of the two generations of anti-stress kings was really touching🥹. In short, although it is not as good as the previous one, the perfect time cycle and self-consistent logic still make it a rare and good book.

Although, the protagonist's strength is not top-notch, although there are many lolita, although there are a lot of land-opening guns, and although the emotional line of the male and female protagonists seems to be quite slow, it is more like friendship and bond than love, but it is still very interesting to watch. Judging from some comments, this book should be related to the author's previous book. I feel that reading the previous book will help you read this one. Of course, it won't have any impact if you don't read it [Learned]

The strength of Lao A is still trustworthy. What is the redemption journey of the young Chu Nan and the loli cat girl Mom? The ending of Qiuqiu is still he. Although it seems from the previous book that Blue Star may still be destroyed, Lao Su can have a good ending, and Lao Chuan's problem should not be big. The story is not a traditional one of beating monsters and accumulating materials for upgrading. In the early stage, it is a bland daily routine while describing the background of the story and setting up foreshadowings. The pressure is on to reveal the foreshadowings. The sense of epic is very strong. Often, just knowing the answer to a question will lead to more conflicts.

Why is such a good-looking book not popular? [Crying] [Crying] The author's writing level is very high, the writing style is excellent, the plot is exciting, and every foreshadowing is very subtle. I stayed up for two days to finish reading it. Unfortunately, due to poor grades, the later plot was pushed too fast, and some plots were not told very straightforwardly. If you don't read carefully, you might not understand it. This is the only shortcoming of this book that I can list. The rest is excellent in every aspect! Especially the character creation, each one is very vivid, Yun Chu (Yun Shu), Xiao Bai, Yi Jiu, Da Bai, I will never forget each one. Even with the above-mentioned shortcomings, you can still feel the unity of Yun Chu and Yun Shu. The transformation of the two can be written very naturally. You can feel that Yun Shu and Yun Chu are really the same person. This is really admirable to me. I actually didn't finish reading "The Demon King with My Head Down" because it was too stressful😎. I couldn't bear it even if Laosu couldn't bear it [crying]. I can't read such a stressful book. Fortunately, this one is shorter and can be read through. I also thought of Nanako Lynn, but unfortunately that one was B, but fortunately this one is relatively complete. I still want to watch more emotional dramas. This book is actually quite stressful, but it's a pity!

The development of the worldview in the early stage is a bit slow. After reading a few more chapters, I feel that it will gradually pick up. It will slowly pick up. Viewed from a positive perspective, the early stage depicts daily life and the later in-depth story can be watched for a long time, and the narrative rhythm will not be as stressful as the middle period of the previous book; viewed from a negative perspective, the protagonist lacks motivation and the main line is unclear. Wait and see Chapter 100, and come back to make additional comments after the story unfolds I finally got rid of the stand-alone mode, I'm in tears Updated on 2026.01.14 Unparalleled cat, superb timing, super straight ball, clouds above the river and rivers flowing There needs to be a good ending It's okay if you don't have one (start learning how to have fun with a knife)

The introduction and content of this book may be inaccurate. [Thinking] For example, a single woman. Having ambiguities with other characters [laughs awkwardly], but this is the author's old tradition, and the author's previous book has the finale. The male protagonist and the 11 nominal sisters or daughters (that is, human sisters are also daughters) and the female protagonist. Live together [smile]. If you read the author's last book, you will find this flaw. The male protagonist's personality is superficial, but in fact he is still a loser. [Face covering] The author depicts the characters very realistically, and there are many scenes on them, etc., All of which are very well done. This is a very important reason why a large number of fans of the author read this book (including me). The story seems a bit boring from the beginning. Or it doesn't match the introduction, which is very bad for casual fans [smiles]. I personally think there is room for improvement in the dialogue and plot in the book. Just like the author said, he doesn't have enough writing power to describe such a grand story. However, the author's last book is still worth reading [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Top Post][Top Post][Top Post] In short, I wish the author this book will get better and better [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart] (Can the author post more updates? It's really not good enough [grieved] [upvote])

I caught up on the last book and want to read Ririko [laughs]

The style of this book largely inherits from the previous book, and even uses some of the settings, as well as the characters. If you have read the author's previous book and read it again, you can think of the male and female protagonists in this book as the gender-transformed versions of Su Bei and Jasmine. They are really similar. There are also guest appearances by characters from the previous work in this book. Please go and find out who they are in the book. In fact, I personally don't like books with themes such as monsters. I wouldn't add another book to my bookshelf. However, I still read it because of the author's previous works and the good characters and story. Surprisingly, it was not bad, but I still can't accept this world view. I hope the author can produce a purely urban, martial arts, or western fantasy novel next time. (!! The following content contains spoilers!!) The first time I saw that Yun Chu was a time god, I was really stunned. The familiar smell and the life-changing thing, now I understand. We were quite shocked when Yun Chu revealed that he was Yun Shu. At first, we thought it was simply Yun Chu traveling through time to save the male protagonist, but we didn't expect it to be so profound. However, the personalities of Yun Chu and Yun Shu in the first two volumes are very different. It is difficult to believe that they are the same person without telling them. It is only at the beginning of the third volume that Yun Shu slowly "transforms" into Yun Chu. Therefore, the sweets given in the first part are basically on Yun Chu, but it is not clear in the later part. Let's take your time. There is also the worry about whether Yun Chu's time traveling back in time will affect his past self, causing a paradox. At present, Yun Chu exists independently of the timeline. Yun Shu in the past will not be able to affect Yun Chu as long as there are no major changes. This can be reassured.