Proof of the Unburnt

After reading twenty chapters, the natural worldview structure, the fascinating arrangement of clues, the distinct three-dimensional characters, the delicate but not greasy brushwork, and the informative and concise dialogues, have I really struck gold [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Kids, you've really struck gold, so watch with confidence.

I really like hard-core fantasy with a soulful flavor. Although it's unlikely, maybe if you stick with it, it will become popular someday (, author, don't give up, at least I will pursue it.

It's well written and doesn't have much to criticize. In the dark soul style, the innocent warrior princess formed a team under the trustworthy stone grain. After getting along for several years, the childhood sweethearts showed the story of the small map freely in their daily life. The narration is a bit tedious and vernacular, but it lacks a lot of nonsense. After watching it for a while, there are no flaws. Soul Wind is very solid and sufficient, and there are no dramatic points. It is good. Well, the dark soul style, the construction of the extraordinary power system is also good, the few flaws are good, the story of the two people without guessing feels very comfortable, the plot struggle is written in a down-to-earth, intuitive and not cumbersome way, the precious metals in the shit, good ദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ

So far, the writing is pretty good. I couldn't help but flip through it a little further, and I saw that the heroine (probably the princess) was temporarily separated due to different ideas. I hope we can see each other again in the next volume. I feel like it's well written.

It's a pity that I've only read the first 50 chapters and I'm not used to it. This is a Western fantasy novel with a different author's writing style, and it feels like you're slowly learning something while reading it. Maybe this book belongs to some special reading groups, and you need to reserve specific knowledge in advance before reading it. I can only say that when I read it, I had no contact with the content, and I did not understand the clear main plot and combat capabilities. The relationship between the characters was not introduced until the plot was up, and it felt like a battle of wits. The author's way of expression is relatively subtle. Although I do not belong to the author's readership group, I can still find wonderful sentences in the chapters I have read.

It's very well written. It's rare to find such a good Western fantasy. Even though the plot is a bit off-kilter in some places, very few people read it. Good luck to the author.

Not bad, pretty good-looking

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A very interesting story. The author's writing style is excellent and full of soul. At the same time, it is not too pretentious. I hope the author can finish it.

It's a pity that if this book was at the starting point, it would be much better than it is now.