Comprehensive Comics******************

I am Shen Nong and I have read Chapter 80. The author writes about ordinary people traveling through the comic book world. It is a bit too detailed but there are many differences between the previous and subsequent chapters. I want to write a lot but it is very messy. I will give you four stars for encouragement. In conclusion, if you like it, you really like it. If you don't like it, run away [laughter]

I watched it in one go, and I personally think it's okay. Just like the setting of the protagonist is okay, I feel like he's a standard ordinary person, not like an adult who has a particularly complicated heart. This is to tell the public that when the protagonist travels to other worlds, not every protagonist will immediately get away with it. This novel tells the public that it is not a cool novel. Each novel has its own story.

It's okay, I feel like writing a novel within a novel should be a push.

Although the early stage is not very good, watching the middle and late stages makes me think about the author all the time. I think your work needs people like me who understand you to understand it. I think your portrayal of the characters is very good, especially Yukinoshita Yukino's aloofness, which fits my definition of him very well. Please keep writing it, I like it very much.

As a middle-aged reader, it is really difficult to find a book that suits my taste. Most of the comprehensive comics are written with names and works written in a running list. But this is different. At the beginning, Yukinoshita was asked to teach the protagonist to write light novels and improve his writing skills, which to a certain extent improved the legitimacy of the success of the copy work. Secondly, the bond between the two during the teaching process is also pleasant. Although the writing style of this book is not sophisticated enough, its shortcomings do not hide its flaws. In an environment where most similar novels are just running accounts, it is still very interesting. If you like to learn more, stop running away. Come on.

It's still ok, but the author's writing in the first few chapters feels like writing a paper. Let's look at it later. I read several more chapters, and there were so many bad points that I wanted to rate it lower, but after thinking about it I decided not to, and kept it four stars, which is an encouragement to the author.

The author feels like chatting with the reader. The question is how do readers respond?

The plot is eye-catching, and the only flaw is that the writing is not concise enough. It's obvious that this is a new author, five stars! [Learned]

That's right, it's not the kind of mindless and cool article that has no logic, this is very good!

This book is very interesting and highly recommended [laughing evilly]

The book is very good, but not many people have read it.