Pokémon: Orange Alliance Rise

Although I don't know much about original fan stories, I want to commend the author for his courage to try and break out of his comfort zone. What I like most about an author is that he can accept opinions with an open mind, no matter good or bad. What I can do as a reader is to make the work more ideal as it grows, rather than controlling every bit of the work. Whether it's the dregs or the bright spots, maybe after seeing the explanation/follow-up part, you can rewrite the inherent thinking. Let us work together to protect the growth of the work, come on [send heartfelt]

The protagonist at the beginning: The sky is falling 😂

I just wanted to ask, I just saw him taking Nemu to fight Zapdos, is he the heroine? If it is him, I'm going to give up.

Very good, I didn't understand the Lightning Bird part either, but the author has an explanation [laughing and crying]

This is the first time I see someone writing about the Orange Islands, please keep writing.

It's good-looking. It's rare to write about the development of the Orange Islands. The protagonist relies on his own efforts, flexible thinking and some plug-ins to gradually become stronger and maintain his fighting power. The characters are vividly drawn and the characters are in full bloom. It's quite good-looking.

It has many advantages. This is a good Pokémon novel, but there are also many shortcomings. The most uncomfortable thing is that at the beginning of more than 300 chapters, the protagonist's brother disappeared for more than 100 chapters, and the search for someone only took one chapter. There was no news at all after that. The last time I wrote it was just to say "the protagonist took advantage of his loss of contact to effectively attack the pirates." It seemed that no one cared at all, as if that person was dead. This affects the subsequent look and feel like a needle. @ Different Dimension Chef hopes to optimize it, and I also hope everyone can have a different perspective.

Everyone is welcome to take a look. If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can mention them in the comments and I will read them.

Does anyone like the steel gun arm shrimp? No one can conquer it

The rating of this book is so low [shocked][shocked][shocked]! Although it is said that the rating thing is just a cassock [grievance] [grievance] [grievance] and cannot determine the quality of the content 🤓🤓🤓, but it happens to be cold now🥶🥶🥶, and multiple cassocks will make it a little warmer, right? 🤗🤗🤗

Yes, it looks good. Pokémon is not a particularly popular one. I like them all. It's very good, very good-looking, and it's the kind of person who reaches the top step by step. Starting from the Orange Islands and cultivating the Orange Islands as his own strength, he looks a bit like a gangster.

When will the Tempel region Pokémon appear? That Pokémon I changed is so annoying.

In Pokémon, there is almost no writing on the development of the Orange Islands, but I think it's OK now that I've read it. Then try to write more rigorously, like before with Lightning Bird!

The subject matter and background are novel and few people know about Orange Islands. I don't know why so few people watch it...

There are very few people writing about the Orange Islands, so please do your best. By the way, the division of elves' levels is in that chapter. Why didn't I see it? It appears directly later.

With the Pokémon world as the background, it tells the story of the growth of a hot-blooded boy. It is innovative based on the original animation. It is very creative and well written. Keep up the good work!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Okay, keep at it

I hope the author can persevere and finish with more than one million [please update]

Come on, I don't think it's toxic at the moment.

I haven't read this article before, but I read it in one go. It feels pretty good. There's nothing particularly bad about it. Did the author create a Pokémon from a parallel elf world before? Suddenly there is no follow-up 🤣 Come on, come on, I hope the author will be inspired and write more smoothly

The perspective of the protagonist in this book and the unpopular elf are both to my liking.

The author has quite a deep knowledge of Pokémon and has his own ideas. The second design is not created out of thin air. Come on!

Not bad, just like the giant crab book. It suits my taste very well. Recommended

Tomato's rare Pokémon article, good, non-toxic and edible. It's good-looking, and it's really considered a very good Pokémon fanfic in Tomato. Many of the Pokémon fanfics from the starting point are not as good-looking, and there are some slight flaws, but it's considered to be top-notch food.

It's good-looking, has its own little power, is not brainless, and is not an invincible text.

Come on, the author, the writing is very good. It has its own understanding and plot. It doesn't have the cleanliness of invincible promotion, nor the feeling of writing Pokémon in a dark way. It has passion and its own selfishness. The characters are very three-dimensional. Five-star praise.

The story is very novel, five stars for encouragement!

So far so good

Except for being a little bit toxic at the beginning, it's pretty good later on.