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After reading a few chapters, I think the combination of themes is pretty good. After reading a previous book, I was attracted by the exciting feeling of dancing on the tip of a knife and the sense of crisis and imminence. I hope the author can continue to bring us this kind of similar excitement. The plot is a bit cliche. I hope to highlight the battle of wits, analyze human nature, figure out psychology, and use existing resources to pull in a huge network of interests, just like the previous book. Overall, this book is very good and worth reading. If possible, I hope the author can see some of my small suggestions, and I hope the author can persevere and wish success.

There is a loophole. These subordinates are all trying to gain money and power for a better life. But now they keep doing things for the pig's feet but they don't get what they really want. . . . It means that they have obtained superpowers but still have to live humbly [what] [what] [what] including pig's feet, but they still don't get anything and still live like ordinary people.

I came to support from the last book. Although I have only written a few dozen chapters so far, I have also written the feeling of Lu Ping in the previous book. The author will update soon [Blowing Kiss] Although the protagonist in the current chapter cannot awaken his abilities, I still hope that the author will add some abilities to the protagonist in the future. It is still very inconvenient for an ordinary person to pretend to be unpredictable among a group of superpowers. For example, to awaken some high-explosion but short-lasting abilities, the protagonist only needs to take a few shots at critical moments to calm his men and establish the character of an unpredictable spiritual powerhouse. Another example is the awakening of some superpowers that have no actual combat effectiveness but strong auxiliary capabilities, such as telepathy (mind reading), future prediction (can see a small part of the future), etc. This is also in line with the setting of the protagonist as a behind-the-scenes manipulator who does not take the initiative to fight but can control his subordinates very well. ————————Dividing line—————————— Yeah, I just stopped reading it a few days ago and now [face covering] It seems that this book has been abandoned again. The author ran away when the data was not good [laughing and crying] The subject matter is pretty good, a classic behind-the-scenes story about mortals, and with Lu Ping's experience in the previous book, I think it will be good enough to write it down. It's a pity. Personally, I really like Mortal Behind the Scenes. I had read Wang Xin's Autumn Wind Tower before and it was quite to my liking. Unfortunately, I stopped reading it when it was about to reach its first climax. Mortal behind-the-scenes stories are rare on Tomato [exploration] If any book friends passing by know about it, please recommend it to me. The source of the book can also be found on other platforms.

Familiar Mr. Lu, familiar taste, personal feeling is still very good, but it is a little worse than the previous book, the subject of Reiki is actually relatively common, I still hope that the boss Yu will write some new ideas, keep up the good work, come on!

It's best to give the protagonist random abilities. You can't just keep being an ordinary person. Even if you don't have the ability, at least strengthen your body. You can't just bump into people.

It's a bit like analyzing the setting of the world of cultivation or the world of superpowers from the perspective of a science and engineering player. Very interesting. After the last work, I thought the author had retired, but I didn't expect that he would come back again. Maybe many people don't know about the author's return. Traffic is a bit low

It's quite good, and when the plot is going on, there is also a little bit of daily life interspersed in the middle. I like this very much. Come on, author! Don't care about other people's opinions. At least there are a large number of people like me following you. This is the first time I've met you, and I hope I can continue to know you [Like][Like][Like][Like] I also discovered a small foreshadowing, as Bao Hongjiang said, there is a mysterious world behind those top dignitaries. I suspect that the protagonist will have to "get to know" them later. ੭ ᐕ)੭

The logic is clear, the plot is eye-catching, each person has his or her own character, showing the characteristics of the characters, the suspense is bizarre and interesting, and the social environment is complex. Secondly, in this book, I personally think that the most exciting plot is that Pig's Foot overlaps with reality through lies, deceiving many people [face covering], and also through the supporting characters' imagination, making them believe in Pig's Foot. For example, when building a spiritual realm online forum, the protagonist uses a big trick to raise his status in the eyes of a boss worth hundreds of millions. My suggestion for this book is to set up more dramatic and joyful plots and reduce some straightforward narratives. Although it is a new book, there is still a lot of room for improvement in this book. The theme is relatively novel and the main content is good. (The author is great, please update more, one chapter a day is really not enough [please update] and please correct typos🦀) Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, [eat melon]

Final remarks Dear readers, I am sorry that I have no way to continue writing this novel. After all, this is just an experimental novel. The purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! (You can uncollect this book, I have no complaints)

I just read a few chapters and found it very interesting. I almost stopped reading the book because of the title.

When I first read it, I felt it was inexplicably familiar. It turns out that the intelligence book is also written by the same author. I think this book is more innovative. I like it and support it.

It is very smooth and comfortable to read. It has the style of early Internet novels. It has some minor flaws, but it is acceptable. The protagonist's personality is also very good, but it is better to arrange the improvement of strength as soon as possible, otherwise it will be very insecure. I hope it will be updated soon, and I will comment immediately after reading it. If it can maintain such quality, it will be a very good food^ω^

At present, it seems that there is no poisonous point. The author's thinking is very clear, the plot transition is also very smooth, and the writing style is also mature. Overall, if the plot does not collapse later, it can be regarded as a new book with full potential. If you like this type of book, it is worth reading. I hope the author will continue to do so~(•͈⌔•͈⑅)♡

Boss, can you join me in a group? Your constant disappearance has made me very sad these past few months! [Cover face]

The protagonist should be able to cancel the spiritual energy recovery at the designated location, right?

The subject matter is new and interesting, and the author's writing style is also good. It's a pity that the last book was a eunuch, I hope this one won't be a eunuch! !

It's finally here. The whole year of waiting is not in vain. It's now five stars.

Except that the author is a bit short and weak, the story is very good. I hope the author can write 100 chapters a day [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Yes, the pretense is spot on.

It's very interesting, but where is the author? Come back and update! ! !

The writing is indeed good, and I hope to become a god.

I finished reading it in one go. It would be unjust to not give this five stars! ! !

Finally a new book is out, this is what I have been waiting for

WOC, just finish the chase in the middle of the night, and compete with the intelligence merchants

It looks good, the writing is delicate, and the plot is okay. It's a bit similar to the Immortality Club or something like that.

I feel that the writing is okay, the plot is also very coherent, there is no water, and the character of the protagonist is well established. I hope I can stick with it.

It's really good to watch. It feels like you are an ordinary social animal slowly growing up. The author describes the protagonist's heart very carefully.

I am a long-time reader of Lao Yu. The three books are all very exciting. I believe this one will continue this excellence! Hehe, Lu Yuan and Lu Ping, hehe

I picked it up from the previous book. It's good to read. I want to read it and write more. I like the decisiveness of the protagonist in your writing.

The first few chapters persuade me to quit, but the later chapters become more and more exciting. I suggest you change the previous chapters.