Green Snake************

I would like to give the author some advice. Your training system is indeed written in detail, but it is too much. I read that out of the more than 1,000 pages of the plot, 300 pages are related to the training system. You don't need to write in such detail. Your performance in promoting the plot or writing to show off on Facebook will be much better than now. Also, the protagonist is very aggrieved. I feel aggrieved from the beginning to the end. Although it is not an invincible style, I still don't feel that the protagonist is the protagonist. He has no skills and does not dare to use magic weapons. He is being ripped off and tricked. I don't quite understand why even though I've been suppressed, I can still self-destruct on my clothes. I feel like this protagonist is so aggrieved.

Two words: run quickly

I'm convinced, the plot is draggy and the heroine is timid and fearful, just like a little fairy. If you don't help me, it's my fault. It's only right to help me. If you want to see Lily Tie Tie, you can skip to watch it. This is everyone's opinion, for reference only, don't criticize if you don't like it.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking