Doomsday: at the Beginning, I Used the White-Haired Lolita as a Reserve Food

Not like a Tomato book. The three elements of the novel are well grasped, and the characters are very three-dimensional. The male protagonist is experienced and rational but pessimistic about the world. The female protagonist is innocent and emotional, lively and cute, like the male protagonist's daughter. The two become one, making me feel the glory of humanity in the last days.

I personally follow it a lot, and after reading a few chapters, I thought of Girls' Ending Journey. At first glance, it doesn't look like other apocalyptic novels about fighting and killing. There are no shocking scenes, no showy writing, no pretense of elegance. But it has a prose-like style, and the writing is as slow as a stream. It is smooth and has a strong sense of substitution. I didn't even realize that it was written in the first person at first. I personally think this book will be a hit. I'm so afraid now that he will end up waking up from his dream and going to find food for today. I thought it ended with me waking up from the dream and smelling the smell of canned food.

A rare and high-quality work, it has a Japanese style but condenses its own writing style. There is no accumulation of gorgeous words, but it allows people to experience the warmth and warmth of human relationships in the apocalypse in a plain way. The joys and sorrows of separation and reunion are left unfinished after reading it in one sitting. What I especially like and admire is the author's skill in describing details, and how he can convey millions of thoughts in the most ordinary words. There is a touch of sadness lingering throughout the novel, exuding a sense of powerlessness and sadness that is unique to apocalyptic literature. In this atmosphere, it can better set off the intensity of emotional bursts. The rhythm of the article is also very good. Although the words are exhausted, the emotions I want to express are still lingering. Just in the right place, foreshadowing, climax, ending, everything is just right The character creation is also well written in the apocalyptic style, where we meet each other and get to know each other, or part ways forever, just like a traveler who never looks back. When our common story ends, it is also the beginning of our own new story, and all we can do is bless each other. Expectations for the future, reluctance to part ways, or other complex emotions are difficult to express in words but can be hidden in articles. All in all, this work can be said to be the best apocalyptic work I have ever seen in Tomato. Its literary connotation is far beyond ordinary articles and bad Internet articles. Only by reading it calmly can you appreciate its charm.

How could such a good book exist? (In my personal opinion) Whether it's plot, characterization, or writing, it's all very exciting. Although the first person is somewhat discouraging at the beginning, it is only later that we find that the first person is more suitable for this article. The protagonist's unforgettable emotions are perfectly reflected in the first-person perspective. To be honest, I feel that the author's writing style is not suitable for Tomato. This kind of delicate emotion and writing style may be better at the starting point, but after all, the first person can easily make people lose interest in reading, but if the first person is not used, the original effect will not be achieved. (Personal opinion only.)

It's a rare good book, but it's a pity that the Tomato environment is not very suitable for novels with themes like yours. Many people are used to cool writing and don't like to think about it. But the apocalyptic atmosphere you created is very good. Even in the apocalypse, people will not directly become demons. Malice is not that superficial. Keep writing, I hope they can have an ending, good or bad. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The acquaintance with this book was a fate. I'm embarrassed to say that the title of this book attracted me as an LSP, but when I read the first three chapters, it was clear to me that this book was not as superficial as the title suggested. Overall, the writing style of this book is very plain, with a touch of sadness, which fits the story background of nuclear winter very well. The first-person perspective writing naturally placed me in the plot. It is not difficult to see that the setting of this book draws on Agni from the Flame Fist, who also has the ability to heal himself (the middle plot of the book also shows the protagonist lighting a fire to drive away the swarms of insects), and it also mixes in a lot of jokes to make those who understand it smile. As a road novel, as a reader, I followed the protagonist's perspective and witnessed the world under the apocalypse, which is depressing but also hopeful. It's a pity that maybe due to the rhythm of the story, some of the foreshadowing of the branch plots were not recycled, and the ending was a bit sloppy. But the flaws do not outweigh the flaws, this is a good book, and the author has the ability to really tell a story well. The journey of 510,000 words is neither long nor short. I look forward to meeting you in the next book.

It's very good, the characters are vividly and meticulously described (especially Xia Bing's part), the apocalyptic scenes are very realistic, and each story is like a unit drama, but there is a certain correlation. Although there are settings for superpowers, they will not appear in most cases, and the explanations are relatively reasonable. I look forward to the author's continued updates.

It's good-looking. It can be considered a very in-depth work. It has a slow pace, neither rush nor slowness. It has a certain main line and doesn't look too rambling. The description of the characters is also very good. It can be seen that the protagonist is a very ordinary person. Lu Xue's performance is also lovable.

It's a very good book about post-apocalyptic travel. I can give it an eight out of ten points. Detailed review below. The first is the writing style. The writing style of this work is melancholy, and the melancholy tone contains a little sparkling hope. The author's rhythm control and lyricism are just right, and he is extremely good at mobilizing readers' emotions. Second is character creation, where the protagonist is both an observer and a participant. As far as my own feeling is concerned, I can very well perceive what the protagonist is thinking and feeling. This protagonist is indeed written in my heart. In addition, the supporting characters are very vivid, with thousands of faces, and everyone can leave a deep impression on me. Finally, it cannot be said that it is an improvement point of shortcomings. The author's writing style has reached 80 to 85 points on a hundred-point scale, which is fully capable of reaching the level of the best books. However, I can't say what the author still lacks. Maybe it is a deeper emotion? Maybe it's more sophisticated writing skills? It is difficult for me to give a specific analysis. These are only for reference. I hope the author can take a step forward. Good luck.

A good book is like a post-apocalyptic road novel, but not the same. The protagonist clearly promotes changes in the world. Not a cool article. The fragrance is smooth at first, like water, then sweet, then bitter, astringent, and the last bit of flavor leaves with a sigh. Good book, good tea. The personal feeling of powerlessness in facing the entire apocalypse, and the sense of death when encountering the world unexpectedly. Because I can only protect myself, I don't join the world, but I am moved by the people who persevere in survival, and gradually begin to challenge all difficulties (unconsciously become a new saint? Just a guess), there is thinking, persistence, and obsession, and the story of living from a stray wild dog to a human being again. If there were more line drawings, it might look more like a published book. It's a pity that it was a failure in the end. It started but ended, maybe because the book traffic was not good. What a pity.

1. Fw Chen Xian, cute Lu Xue, Chen Xian always cheats on Lu Xue, and then makes people cry 2. What impressed me deeply was Don Quixote. There are many similar plots to the original novel "Don Quixote", such as staying up all night, not eating or drinking, and charging down the hillside to fight with bears (in the original work, Don Quixote charged from the hillside to the sheep). Don Quixote himself was beaten into two pieces, which is also in line with what Don Quixote said in "Don Quixote": If you see me cut in half in battle (this kind of thing often happens) 3. The most impressive sentence is a passage from "Luotuo Xiangzi" in the article: "Rain falls to the rich as well as to the poor; it falls to the righteous as well as to the unjust." 4. It feels like there are a few foreshadowings that have not been filled in (it may have been filled in, but I didn't notice it, or it may have been left blank by the author). For example, the part about naming Baisha feels like it will be about reincarnation, so I won't say the rest. 5. The protagonist's recovery ability will weaken as his will to survive weakens (guess) 6. Features of this article: The full text is written in a diary by the protagonist based on his own experience. It is narrated in the first person and has some diary narration, which is very unique. 7. Damn it, the author is too short, with only more than 200 chapters (this book is not very popular for one reason), but the book is really good. If possible, I hope the author can write more (for example, add a chapter about Lu Xue's own experience in the last chapter, summarize the whole text from her perspective, and even add her emotional line towards Chen Xian) 8. In the end, the author is really aggrieved in Yangshizi [Grievance]

It's really beautiful, I couldn't help but comment. The author doesn't want swords for the male and female protagonists. Small swords make people happy, but big swords hurt their bodies. One more thing, Lu Xue is cute [send heart]

It's pretty good. I read it in one sitting and it seemed to suit my taste. A touch of apocalyptic wind, the ubiquitous depression and dullness, and a little bit of hope in the early sunshine. It's all good. It's a rare good book from Tomato. This book is very good. I used to get annoyed when I read the first person, but this book made me persevere. I am also in a book shortage period, but this is a book that really makes me read. The protagonist is a very ordinary person, very interesting. In short, I regret not reading this book earlier. It is really a breath of fresh air on this platform.

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is also good. It shouldn't be more than 7 points. Although some plots are not deep enough and some holes are not filled in, it is really interesting. I am shocked to see a novel of this style on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to persevere. Also, Lu Xue is really a good girl [crying] [crying] [crying]

I'm very tired from reading this book. It's not that it doesn't read well, but I feel irritable now. This book is in line with my childhood fantasy, but now my heart is like a square, with four corners in the center. I started reading online novels when I was in the fourth grade of elementary school. At that time, it was just to kill time, but I would finish every novel no matter if it was good or not. I used to always think, "Every novel is a world, and every time I finish reading a novel, it's like visiting a world." At that time, happiness was really cheap. People will always change. Regardless of the reason, just look at the present. I hope that the novel will be better in the future (I am writing this based on my feelings, please do not make suggestions)

After reading it, I realized that I didn't even rate the book. First of all, I felt very mixed, with a bit of regret or joy. In terms of plot, I have never seen such a doomsday novel. Witnessing the various stories of an ordinary or extraordinary Avenger along the way, including love, friendship, and an agreement that was destined to be unfulfilled, various experiences, and Lu Xue's growth, it is really difficult for me to describe it in words. Unfortunately, there are still some stories that are going on but cannot be witnessed. Did the German soldier finally wait for Xiaoxiao? What happened to Xia Bing in the end? How did Lu Xue persevere for seven years without knowing that he was still alive?

The writing is really good, but there are still some shortcomings. 1. Some content is homogeneous, such as the time cage part. 2. Some characters were not handled well, such as the bad woman But you can feel this delicate and pure emotion when reading the novel. It is really worth reading.

This is a very good article about ruins, but the title of the book is a bit unique, it is more healing [smile], and the whole text is enveloped in a faint sense of despair. I also want to ask the author, when will the extra story about their encounter with Ms. Chun and Victor be released?

So far it has the same style as Girls' End Journey, but the main characters are brother and sister. The daily plot is relatively light-hearted in writing, but it has the depth it deserves. (One thing to say, the writing style is really like Japanese light novels)

A good book that is weighed down by its title. The title sounds like a pure novel about a post-apocalyptic base vehicle. I thought the protagonist would be the kind who appears to be decisive in killing, but is actually a pretentious second brother directing the flying dance of the elder brother. However, after reading dozens of chapters, I found that this book is more like an apocalyptic version of a two-person Kino journey.

It's beautiful, but it's not good enough [Adoration] To be honest, I was a little surprised when I saw the ending. After all, looking at the previous plot, Chen Xian should still have some way to go before he wants revenge. I didn't expect that it would just fast forward to revenge. Although it is a bit rushed, it is very good overall. I hope the author can write another similar book in the future. (Lu Xue is so cute! And Bai Sha is also [love] [love]

When I looked at the title, I thought it was written in a city-like way, but the more I looked at it, the more wrong it became. Looking through the table of contents again, I guess no one had survived. But these are innocuous. I quite like Don Quixote, the choice between the cowardly survival and the charge that is doomed to death, the fullness of ideals and the withering of the body. Unfortunately, the author is a little hasty and does not have much shaping. Fortunately, the writing is good, and it can be considered that the role of Tang Mingde is completed, and his heroic ending is completed. To borrow the words of a knight in my favorite game, it didn't happen, it just suddenly occurred to me. To your valour, my sword, and our sworn duties, long may the sunshine.

It's a very good book. I feel that the writing style is similar to "Lillian Everywhere" (if it's not similar, I must have remembered it wrong). Although the ending is a bit sloppy, the author's knowledge system is still very comprehensive in terms of the whole book. The details are good, and the foreshadowing laid in the previous article is also reflected in the later text. It is a pity that the writing power is limited. The story is still good, the knifeman still has ribs, the author is kind, and the lack of popularity should be a problem with the tomato style. Maybe the title also accounts for part of it.

It progresses layer by layer, just like a real journey. Each article can be taken out as a very short work on its own. The most touching thing is what happened when the protagonist and his party met when they went round and round and returned to Ms. Chun's shelter, as well as the narration of the child's birth. The echoes are in place. It is really a rare and down-to-earth article in Tomato.

A relatively good daily article about the apocalypse, with humor, humor, and warmth. Except for the part about Lu Xue's life experience that I thought was a bit flawed, everything else was pretty good. Generally speaking, it met my expectations for daily articles. Supplement: Chen Xian's character and behavior are sometimes normal and sometimes indecisive. As mentioned above, the flaws in Lu Xue's life experience also come from this. Later supplement: After watching the end, I feel that Chen Xian's character is not presented in a three-dimensional way. Instead, there is a sense of contradictory fragmentation, but I can't express it correctly. I will add more after a while when I have new feelings. About the ending: A family relationship like brother and sister is enough, but the relationship between lovers is still too inconsistent. Supplement: The author's language expression ability is still slightly lacking. The countless "as if" and "like" add a sense of boredom to the text, not to mention that there are also many nonsense parts. It would be better if he could learn some new narrative techniques.

It's a pretty good book, with good foreshadowing, mainly because the emotional impact brought by the first person is very exciting. I found it very comfortable to watch, except that sometimes the male protagonist is really kind, but then he becomes hardened, and he dares to face and solve his own obsessions. After solving the problem, he can face the revenge of others more calmly. Although there are still some foreshadowings that have not yet been resolved, such as Xia Bing's origin and whereabouts and Victor's flying saucer and love, it is already a quite mature and beautiful book. Hey, after reviewing it again, this is really my White Moonlight, plain yet interesting, refreshing and comfortable.

This is a really good book, but unfortunately the subject matter and content are difficult to become popular on Tomato. I just hope it will have a good ending.

Fine chaff, good product, the writing is really good, but there are few people, so the author is not interested. I will recommend books to you when I have time during the National Day.

The ending is a bit rushed, but the previous chapters are full marks. The plots of Ms. Chun, Xiao Qisen, Xia Yi and other chapters are all very interesting. What is rare is that the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very interesting, not industrial syrup. The author has great potential in writing books, but he just lacks a chance to be promoted!

Rather than saying that I have finished reading a novel, I feel more like I have finished reading a TV series and have an indescribable feeling. The whole book is composed of short stories one after another. There is nothing wrong with it. The author's writing style is quite good, especially the characters, both the supporting roles and the protagonists, are made with flesh and blood. But yesterday, because I read this book and saw Lu Xue Meet Her Mother, my blood pressure soared that I forgot the time and was late for work the next day and was fined 50 for forgetting to know [face covering]