Scraping By in Another World

A relatively good novel, with a semi-male style, and the plot is quite reasonable in all aspects. There are a few suggestions. First of all, the heroine's daily life. Compared to the male channel, she is a local who has traveled through time. If the female channel is a female channel, she will often talk about her thoughts and the like. Also, she is not decisive enough when dealing with hostile relationships. Also, the methods of combat skills are relatively simple. There are chance genius treasures, but their effects are not that prominent. It is recommended that more descriptions of the skills and scenes during the battle can both reduce the word count and increase the reader's feeling (the above suggestions are all based on the requirements of the male channel and can be ignored). There are many suggestions that I won't mention. Let's add a few more chapters every day.

The protagonist of the escape game at the beginning is really too perseverant and has a strong body. This tells us how important it is to have a healthy body. Really, I was originally more inclined to the protagonist being able to save himself, but what I saw in these chapters is that not only was no one saved, but he was stabbed twice and questioned. This plot is too real and too tragic. I hope someone can help. Fortunately, the heroine has a strong desire to survive and perseverance, and she comes out alive alone. I found that the protagonist didn't use insulting words when he cursed these few times. Oh my God, the author is really good.

It's so beautiful. Isn't such a beautiful book popular?

In fact, it's okay. It's just that the front is a little confusing, but you can see that this is a growth-oriented heroine. She doesn't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Because the heroine's strength comes from actual combat and she won't keep practicing. In fact, it's okay.

It's tied in two days. Overall, it's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this type of article. The subject matter is novel and each character in it has a distinct personality. I've read this book for the second time. I didn't understand it after reading two chapters before and then stopped reading. This time I read it and it's getting better and better. Good luck to the author👍

Has no one discovered this book? It's very interesting to read. Although I don't know how to evaluate it, the author should do more.

The escape starts at the beginning, the rhythm is very tight, and the plot is almost unbroken. This makes me feel a little uncomfortable after reading a few chapters, but after getting used to the rhythm, it is still good. The twists and turns are interesting, the fighting descriptions are wonderful, and the writing style is natural and unpretentious. However, the setting of the story's character realm is very novel, which is different from other other world travels. It also has flaws, but it is worth reading. Full marks for encouragement. I hope that the following chapters will go further and reach a better state.

It's so pretty and hot [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss], tied in one breath [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's tied. It was a little flawed at the beginning but then it became smoother and smoother. It was a great battle!

Very attractive, the plot is compact, the heroine is funny, it is worth watching