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My God, what a treasured new book this is! ! The introduction is so to my taste, I clicked it with the mentality of giving it a try... I read the first few chapters very quickly (sorry), but the further I got to the back, the more reluctant I was to read them briefly. Who knew the tacit and peaceful feeling when senior brother and junior brother get along with each other? The senior brother is really doting on me, and I will fall in love with him inadvertently when I am a junior brother. I just went back to read the first few chapters, and I found out that it was all foreshadowing. Madam, you buried the clue too early... Now I always feel that there will be abuse in the future. I'm in the trap now, and from now on I will be an old fan among old fans! Madam, please don't stop [crying][crying][crying]

Although I may not have read enough to convince others of what I said, but it is really good-looking and the writing is very good. It has the feeling of a long stream of water, and the author writes it very clearly. Even the flashbacks can be very clear. I know what the author is writing. Mrs. The author, her words touch the soul. It's very smart, and it looks like I've really been in their shoes, and the relationship between the two of them is also very warm. The heart is pried open and slowly flows in. The development of the emotional line is very reasonable. There are just a lot of broken glass and slag, which makes you want to be poked when you look at it. But I still like it very much. I hope the author's wife can write better and better.

I personally prefer this kind of writing, it's that kind of narrative. I feel it's very graphic and real. The two protagonists also develop as introduced. It's the first time I've met a character like Jiang Qiuyu. He won't hate the past and will just keep moving forward. Liu Yue's description is also very good. He is a very nervous old father (a bit), but there are also times when he is serious, which is good.

The plot is online, not brainless, and the writing is good. Author, I know why you are not popular. The writing is very beautiful. The problem is that it is too beautiful and has the feeling of narrative prose. This kind of writing is too ink for ordinary people who read online articles. You cannot quickly understand the text content by scanning it at a glance. The language is not popular enough and is not suitable for the current kind of fast reading. Many people read online articles at a glance and cannot remember particularly detailed descriptions. In addition, the language style is very unique, like a stream in the mountains flowing slowly, and the article is full of emotions. It is very slow and delicate, a bit like the "Xiang Ji Xuan Zhi" in the textbook, and is suitable for writing modern poetry, prose, and short stories. But when used in a long novel, it feels dull and the reader has no sense of involvement. Modern people like more tense words and pursue excitement. This is my feeling after reading the first 20 chapters.

The author's writing style is beautiful and poetic. It feels like a spring breeze when I read it. Although I haven't watched much so far, I can feel that the teacher is very thoughtful in conceiving the plot. Those descriptions are really comforting. For those who like slow-paced writing, this is a no-brainer.

I've read dozens of chapters and it's very well written. I haven't seen such a good article for a long time. It's just that not many people have read it. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on~

The writing is good and the plot is good, but I can't understand it. My problem is [face covering]

The author writes very well! The relationship between the two protagonists is very interesting. I'm very curious about Liu Yue and Shi Kaiqi. But what is Liu Yue's dream? Is it possible to go to modern times in the future?