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Your great critic has come to review. First of all, let me comment on the advantages. I think the identity and strength of the heroine are very good, and it gives me a very refreshing feeling. Secondly, I think the self-created spells are very good, because there are very few spells in the drama and they are very weak. Writing spells can give people a poetic feeling. It has a sense of feeling and can fill the plot. The overall style of the whole book is an everyday style. (Personally) If you like this style, you will basically read it, and you will not tear down the cp. You respect every character. Let's talk about the shortcomings. I think if you write this kind of combination and derivative novels, most of them will be enjoyable and strong. The heroine feels like a group favorite. Everyone in Lingxi Pavilion dotes on him. Although there is a plot and reason for doting on him, I still feel that the whole article is a bit crazy (personally). Second, the writing of the fights is not very good. It feels a little simplified. That is to say, the fighting scenes are all verbal descriptions with very few movements. People can't think of the pictures. The writing is just for people to think of the pictures. Third, this article is very long-winded, because everyone has watched the main drama, and just wanted to see some different plots. The author wrote the plot of the entire drama, and then added the part created by the heroine. I think if there is no heroine, the part can be deleted. It is better to focus on the heroine. Of course, it is right to give some perspectives to the supporting characters, but it is appropriate. Overall, the article is above average, and I hope the author will continue his work in the next article [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The plot is really comfortable, and the pure friendship without ambiguity is really good to watch. I just felt that the darkness of the scene where Wang Mo and Chen Sisi appeared was a bit deliberate. It just felt a bit... Inexplicable. I got jealous for some reason. But the author wrote it very well. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss] It's been a long time since I've seen a Ye Luoli fan novel that suits my taste.

I really like it, the heroine is so handsome! I've long been dissatisfied with the main cast.

Can the author write more? I even stayed up all night reading this book for you, so please Please, it's so beautiful😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍! ! !

When the heroine traveled to Mutian Pavilion, wasn't Mutian Pavilion sealed? He was sealed from the 11th level when he was sealed in Mutian Pavilion. Then, why did everyone in the fairyland know that he was the 11th level after unsealing it?

Nice! You need to work harder~!

It's super cool. The author needs to work hard and update it! [Sending Hearts]

I am a screaming chicken. Thank you to the author for his great efforts in updating. It is really beautiful. I hope the author will update more and more [laughs][laughs][like][like]

It's really great. The author's writing is finally not as boring as those with CP. Now I find that I still prefer the non-CP. I really like this book.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon. What the author writes is also very correct.

Ok, it looks very good. As Yae Kamiko's dog, I agree with it.

It feels ok, author, come on!

I really love reading books about the dark protagonist group😍 Personally, I think this is the best book I've ever read in Time Traveling by Ye Luoli.

One of the few novel Ye Shu. The plot and plot are very good. Come on👏

Very beautiful! ! ! I really like the fact that CP does not dismantle it.

It's good to look good sometimes. Didn't the heroine suppress the disappearance of the Ice Princess? Why did she disappear again later? Will she not find the heroine to help her again?

It's so well written. It's a great article. I enjoyed reading it. Come on, the author, work harder!

It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. I've watched it many times.

It's really beautiful! ! ! Don't understand why the rating is so low?

Super invincible and beautiful!

So pretty

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Really, this book is super good. It is written by Wang Mo from the Black Protagonist Group. But if you like loli, you can read it. I suggest you not to hoard books, because it is easy to hoard books. When you find this book on the shelf, the author has updated it a lot and you can't finish it. It is still very good! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author has updated [adoration][adoration][adoration] a lot, and finally found a book of suitable taste [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very interesting novel

Yes, the female lead is pretty strong, Tsubaki! Mom loves you! ! !

Super good. The character settings are very good and the content is very rich. Highly recommended.

Who knows what it feels like to see that shitty yellow button halfway through?

Very well written, looking forward to the follow-up

Come on, author, come on!