Love at First Sight: the Cool Little Mermaid of the Aloof Major General

The writing style can be seen to be relatively immature, but it is well written. For this kind of subject matter, it is the first time for me to see the profession of the protagonist. However, it may be because there are not many chapters and the emotional line of the protagonist is not obvious. (I also suggest that the author should not say that the appearance of the protagonist is very good-looking many times. Instead, saying that the appearance of the protagonist in some specific places will be unintentional. The effect you get, and the adjectives for sound are not only good-sounding, there are many kinds of good-sounding sounds, such as magnetic, crisp, etc. Adding more such words will increase the reader's immersion) (personal suggestion, I don't like to rush, and it does not interfere with the author's meaning). The author is also quite active and will correct the errors in the article in a timely manner.

I think it's very interesting, and the story setting is also very good. Shining is beautiful, smart and cute, but in the first few dozen chapters, the other male protagonist, the major general, is always playing tricks, and the relationship scenes between the two male protagonists are almost over [laughing and crying]

Great book with potential, not many people read it

So beautiful. Recommended. Recommended. [Shy][Shy][Shy]

Twinkle is so cute, when can I be with Sikong?

Twinkle is so cute, come on

Ah ah ah why? It's very beautiful.

Nice! Great article! Twinkle is such a cute kid!

It's very beautiful, I will keep following it.

The author's writing is very good. Come on, come on, don't give up on the article.