There is a different divine novel in my heart.
Yang Fan, an ordinary takeaway boy, showed up just by checking the video system.
What? Give me 50,000 yuan to become a powerful person? Do you call this the Shenhao system?
Reader comments
It's very similar to a running account. The author's idea is good, to make the country strong and the people rich, but it is too divorced from reality and cannot be brought into the world! Finally, I created something that seemed to be a cultivation practice, which shocked me! I suggest you refine the plot a bit. In the end, either you can't enter the cultivation system, or it just feels too abrupt.
It's very similar to a running account. The author's idea is good, to make the country strong and the people rich, but it is too divorced from reality and cannot be brought into the world! Finally, I created something that seemed to be a cultivation practice, which shocked me! I suggest you refine the plot a bit. In the end, either you can't enter the cultivation system, or it just feels too abrupt.