Yandere: His Advances Are Too Intense, I Can't Take Much More

The writing is okay. In fact, it only has three stars in terms of level, but because the new author encourages me, I will give it five stars. There are two small suggestions. The first one is that there is no need to write about him traveling into the game at the beginning. You can write that he originally lived a normal life, and then one day got the system, and then the system told him that this is a yandere butter world, and then gave him a warning of danger, because the time before and after the time travel is not the same person, which means that the heroine loves the person before, which is considered a poisonous point in this kind of novel. The second is that there are some plots that have little to do with the male and female protagonists, and there is no need to write them. For example, the plots with the rich second-generation brothers can be briefly mentioned, because most readers read novels with this theme in a fast-food way. What is needed is for conflicts to occur concentratedly, the plots to be compact, and the plot to advance quickly. Writing redundant plots will make many people impatient to read. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and it will be completed smoothly. Come on!

Is it a single heroine or a harem? If it's a harem, can there be some content from the original game?

It's okay, but it feels a little awkward for no reason

It's beautiful and the characters are well drawn.

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