Qingmei************

This time, the magical girl's world view is actually normal. The key is that the protagonist's outlook and behavior are also normal! I want the Magical Girl Ixin Burst. Bring it over quickly.

It's not much different from the others. After 20 photos, the look becomes worse, but it's one of the few seedlings, so hope continues. I'm getting bored, but I like the subject matter, so keep it up [note]

You can't be a girl, don't be arrogant! I don't want to see Kou Ya changing into a girl anymore!

Overall it's okay, but it's a pity that it's blocked. I hope I can win the resurrection match.

Let's give it a 4.5. Although there are relatively few daily life and emotional lines, the characters' emotions are quite full. Except for the teammates, they are all good as personal computers. In the early stage, it may be annoying that the protagonist does not want to use magic. However, if the author changes it and adds a sentence in front of the sentence that the protagonist will use magic when it is important, there will be a lot less controversy.

It doesn't feel like a newbie, but there are some inexplicable disconnects in some places. For example, the combat power is a bit erratic, and the recent support group and entering a different world are very strange. It feels like I wrote it on the spur of the moment, and finally used various methods to get it back.

The protagonist is not a magical girl who is just for fun and awkwardness, but a righteous warrior with a heroic heart in the true sense.

Not to mention anything else, the pace is fast and not deliberately procrastinating, it is comfortable, the language is concise, there are no complicated and beautiful words, and it is easy to watch. It feels wrong starting from breaking through the rift. The pace of this part of the Elf World is obviously much slower than before, and the fast-paced characteristics are lost. The main problem is that after running out of the Elf World, a chapter that should have been more enjoyable has been omitted, which is very bad and too long. It is too bad and has lost a lot of content. For example, when the two met, they were not curious about why they met. Another example is the process of Xia Zhiqiu and the protagonist getting to know each other. Later, it was said that they recognized their identity when they broke through the rift, but looking back at the fight chapter, it was a bit far-fetched. From the dialogue between the two, at best, there was a feeling of suspicion and lack of complete recognition. I guess the author originally wanted to rush the ending but then insisted on it. …………………………………………………… The second chapter was well written, but unfortunately it was blocked. I'll leave you a five-star memory as a souvenir.

It just so happens that the characters in this novel have six different attributes: light, darkness, fire, water, earth, and wind. The six kinds of brilliance are now combined into one.

It's awesome😋😋😋The details are sometimes not very good (such as name swaps, short sentences, etc.), The plot is very suitable to my taste😋The only drawback is that the author only updates 2 chapters a day😭😭😭😭😭😭

Why does the protagonist refuse to chant the spell? Although six chapters have been updated, it stops at the moment when the protagonist loses his powers, which is very uncomfortable.

It will be a permanent transfer, probably not

A very good magical girl saved my book famine [laughter]

So pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Thank you so much for the author(ง •̀_•́)ง

It's good to watch, and the daily writing is also very good, as well as the battles. The giant hammer of light hits 80 points, and I laugh every time I watch it [laughing] [laughing]

As I watched it, I felt that it was very good, but it felt like it had a few flaws, but I didn't have the answer. As long as I didn't care, it would be fine. For example, after I watched it, I had a question: What's going on in the countryside? But, does it have anything to do with the content? Because there is none, so as long as we don't go into details, it's generally good.

I beg the author to continue updating, and most importantly, don't use the knife, please! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Want to be a god? Is it just... The "god" promised by the world... The chess pieces of the "god" world... The failed "abandoned pieces"... Ants... "The world" also views "god" this way... ... Hehe... ——Observer

A score of 8.5 Or above should be possible, but a score of 9 is a bit difficult.

What's interesting is that the protagonist said he wanted to reveal his identity to the heroine, but he delayed it for too long, even though he wanted to say it in person, but in the end he didn't say anything. He was misunderstood by Xia Zhiqiu and brought him in for a discussion. After he came out, he met the heroine, but he still didn't confess. The main reason was that the protagonist confessed his identity, and it didn't take more than a few seconds. Why did he say that he wanted to confess in his heart, and he confessed several times, but he still didn't confess [smile]?

One request, I want to see the protagonist singing magic spells and shouting them out loud in public [making faces][smirking][sending hearts]

Well, it feels pretty good. It's completely different from others. Even though she's still a magical girl, why does she feel so much like Madoka Magica? Come on, try your best to update [making faces]

Anyway, among the magical girls I've read, this one is very good.

It looks good, I love reading it, please give it a rating, lest a score of 7.0 Crush the author to death @Science Forbidden Zone, please add more updates! ! ! Two chapters a day is too few (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

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It's beautiful, it's very beautiful, it's not enough to watch.

The plot is not as cliche as other novels of this type, the characters are more prominent, the writing is good, and it deserves 5 stars.

Very nice! ! ! I was a little conflicted when I saw the theme of magical girls, but after reading it, I begged the author to update soon! ! ! It looks good. I want to see it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Come on, author, some people will read it if you write more. There are only so many transformation articles. Just like me, I didn't want to read this book because it was a new book and there was no review yet, so I skipped it. It's just that I didn't have any other books to read, so I read this one. I didn't know until I read it. I thought this book was good after reading it. I believe there must be many people like me, so keep writing, this book will become popular. By the way, I have downloaded the book now. Do you think that if I copy it and send it to the author, can the author re-upload it [face covering]

A very good book, full of ups and downs. But I don't know why the update was discontinued. Is it going to be unfinished now? Why does the system not allow comments at the end of chapters? What is there to review? Nothing extreme