
Childhood Friend, Teach Me to Become a Magical Girl!
青梅,请教我成为魔法少女!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 425k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- After My Childhood Friend Retired, I Became a Magical Girl青梅退休后,换我来当魔法少女Alternate title on Fanqie
194Chapters
73Reads
8.7Score
4Listens
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Reader comments 71
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This time, the magical girl's world view is actually normal. The key is that the protagonist's outlook and behavior are also normal! I want the Magical Girl Ixin Burst. Bring it over quickly.
You can't be a girl, don't be arrogant! I don't want to see Kou Ya changing into a girl anymore!
It's not much different from the others. After 20 photos, the look becomes worse, but it's one of the few seedlings, so hope continues. I'm getting bored, but I like the subject matter, so keep it up [note]
Overall it's okay, but it's a pity that it's blocked. I hope I can win the resurrection match.
Let's give it a 4.5. Although there are relatively few daily life and emotional lines, the characters' emotions are quite full. Except for the teammates, they are all good as personal computers. In the early stage, it may be annoying that the protagonist does not want to use magic. However, if the author changes it and adds a sentence in front of the sentence that the protagonist will use magic when it is important, there will be a lot less controversy.
It doesn't feel like a newbie, but there are some inexplicable disconnects in some places. For example, the combat power is a bit erratic, and the recent support group and entering a different world are very strange. It feels like I wrote it on the spur of the moment, and finally used various methods to get it back.
The protagonist is not a magical girl who is just for fun and awkwardness, but a righteous warrior with a heroic heart in the true sense.
Not to mention anything else, the pace is fast and not deliberately procrastinating, it is comfortable, the language is concise, there are no complicated and beautiful words, and it is easy to watch. It feels wrong starting from breaking through the rift. The pace of this part of the Elf World is obviously much slower than before, and the fast-paced characteristics are lost. The main problem is that after running out of the Elf World, a chapter that should have been more enjoyable has been omitted, which is very bad and too long. It is too bad and has lost a lot of content. For example, when the two met, they were not curious about why they met. Another example is the process of Xia Zhiqiu and the protagonist getting to know each other. Later, it was said that they recognized their identity when they broke through the rift, but looking back at the fight chapter, it was a bit far-fetched. From the dialogue between the two, at best, there was a feeling of suspicion and lack of complete recognition. I guess the author originally wanted to rush the ending but then insisted on it. The second chapter was well written, but unfortunately it was blocked. I'll leave you a five-star memory as a souvenir.
It just so happens that the characters in this novel have six different attributes: light, darkness, fire, water, earth, and wind. The six kinds of brilliance are now combined into one.
It's awesome😋😋😋The details are sometimes not very good (such as name swaps, short sentences, etc.), The plot is very suitable to my taste😋The only drawback is that the author only updates 2 chapters a day😭😭😭😭😭😭