New works are released. Welcome to Tomato Novel to read my works. I hope you all like them. Your attention is the motivation for my writing. I will try my best to tell every story!
Reader comments
The plot is quite interesting, but there is no segmentation, which is a bit unfamiliar. At present, I personally think this book is more relevant to today's world. After reading some of it, I found some problems. (Currently only the first coupon has been seen)
1. There is no paragraphing (this is really unaccustomed). I hope the author can divide it into paragraphs.
2. The first chapter feels a little sloppy in its completion, and I feel it could be corrected and made better. (Seeing this makes me a little bit unsatisfied [shy])
3. No 3, purely for entertainment.
(I haven't read it all, I still need everyone's thoughts on the real situation)
Finally, I wish readers better and better, and I also wish the author's books to be read by more and more people.
(Does anyone recommend novels? There is a shortage of books [crying])
The plot is quite interesting, but there is no segmentation, which is a bit unfamiliar. At present, I personally think this book is more relevant to today's world. After reading some of it, I found some problems. (Currently only the first coupon has been seen) 1. There is no paragraphing (this is really unaccustomed). I hope the author can divide it into paragraphs. 2. The first chapter feels a little sloppy in its completion, and I feel it could be corrected and made better. (Seeing this makes me a little bit unsatisfied [shy]) 3. No 3, purely for entertainment. (I haven't read it all, I still need everyone's thoughts on the real situation) Finally, I wish readers better and better, and I also wish the author's books to be read by more and more people. (Does anyone recommend novels? There is a shortage of books [crying])