Too Lingering

Sure enough, a good beginning can tell whether the book is good or not. In the early stage, the hero and heroine met and lived together with their grandmother in Lucheng. It was really what I imagined in my mind. The fireworks are really full and the character descriptions are also rich. This beginning is top one in my mind [Blow kiss]

This novel is really great. I have a withdrawal reaction [crying]. I didn't expect that the novel about the rich president is so well written. Every pair of CPs is so fresh and exciting, and the very sad parts at the end are really easy to cry. Si Yan redeems Xia Jin. Mr. Huo and Xiao Yuer also go from tit-for-tat but unforgettable love to being separated for many years and still redeeming each other. It's really easy to cry. Jiang Ye is also the light of the south wind, illuminating each other's progress. The little princess's love for Zhou Xingyan is also very clear, and Xingyan finally comes out of the darkness. Of course, Bai Wei and Qu Jingchuan are also there. Hahaha, they are also a pair of happy enemies. In short, it is enough for everyone in the story to have a happy ending. I have never felt so deeply when reading this kind of rich CEO story. I hope they can always accompany each other in the parallel world [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

So far, the male and female protagonists have tended to be complete and three-dimensional. Unlike some of the heroines I watched next door who wanted to write innocent and cute characters but directly wrote college students as elementary school students. The heroines were too silly, sweet, and stupid, which was against the common sense of emotions and disgusting. The plot was only slightly watchable. This is one of the few books I've seen where both the male and female protagonists made me feel comfortable with their characters.

I endured it for a week, and I started thinking about reading only 30 chapters. I wanted to wait until there were 400 chapters before reading, but I couldn't control it and saw 100. My brain told me to stop but my hands didn't obey, so I saw 150, and finally it was completely messed up and I saw 200. This book doesn't seem to have the plot reversal of previous works, but I always have doubts about the plot reversal in big books. This book is also very good-looking. Every male and female protagonist written in DaDa is particularly lively and lovable. What's more, I like DaDa to keep the traditional plot the most, with a mixed male and female doubles team up against Xiao Bailian. Come on DaDa.

Good-looking, I like the male lead Si Yan very much, he is not in good shape, it is so true love, I don't know if they will abuse her later, but both of them are long-mouthed, and the male lead is a bit sinister, and the female lead is also very arrogant, not someone to be bullied, they are a perfect match

I just want to say this, it's so damn beautiful. . Please update me quickly. I finished reading more than 6,000 pages in two days. It's so cool. . . . [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Everyone's characters are very vivid. My favorite is the character of the male protagonist Si Yan. He is strong and loves Xia Jin enough, and has a delicate mind. In my opinion, he is a great guiding lover. He has healed Xia Jin a lot, made her understand that not everyone is the same, and made her brave enough to go to Si Yan. Moreover, once he decided on his lover, he solved all his worries. He also chose Xia Jin without reservation in front of his brothers. When I was writing about my frustrations, it really made me feel very sad. [Crying] [Crying] I was listening to Elva Hsiao's (Suddenly Thinking of You) at the time, and I felt that the lyrics were very suitable! Where should my heart be when I'm alone at night? Each pair of CPs is very suitable. I hope Si Yan and Xia Jin will be fine in the parallel world!

My feeling is that this is a very sour article, maybe it is being updated, and it may feel better in the future. It is well written and the plot flow is good.

Advantages: The author writes fluently, and it can be seen that he is an experienced writer. Personally, I think the areas that can be improved are: too much pursuit of the twists and turns of the story, but looking back, there is no particularly outstanding plot, and the text is more like a million words. The story has a plot, but I feel that it could be more perfect, there are more words, but the previous plot is still dragging after returning from the United States, and the protagonist has Let everyone look forward to this cp story in the updated plot, because the relationship and revenge between the male and female protagonists are not interesting, and they just drag on and on. Their story is almost finished in hundreds of thousands of words. Many people are looking forward to another story, which is more dramatic and attractive! A lot of people gave up after half the story. I came back to watch it after a long time. The first thing I felt was why the male and female protagonists were still so consumed with themselves. Then the motivation to read the rest of the story came from the scenes of other supporting characters. I think what I wanted to see the most during the process was Shen Huo's couple, and I'm even more looking forward to it. Fortunately, at the end of the story, the two chose to give their children a happy family! For me, the story of this couple is more impressive than the story of the male and female protagonists. And the story of Jiangnan couple, love can heal everything. The overall feeling is that the first chapter catches the reader's attention. The introduction and the plot of the first chapter alone show a different heroine who uses her advantages to attract the male protagonist to help her take revenge. It makes people want to read it immediately. However, the middle part is not particularly attractive, and the plot and characters have not progressed. This affects readers who are following the update to abandon the text and feel like drinking boiled water just reading it. The appearance of the sub-CP in the later chapter makes the appeal of the previous text return. Therefore, after reading it for several months, I only remember the story of Lucheng, Shen Yu and the others... Finally, I hope the author can consider it next time and write the plot and emotional lines of the main line first, and then use the extra plot to write the plot and emotions of the supporting characters in detail in the later part. In this way, friends who are following the update will feel that the plot is relatively coherent and the progress is slightly faster. There is no need to consider the word count. Based on the plot rather than the word count requirement, many readers who follow the update will abandon the article because of the plot drag and watery words, which also affects the overall perception. One million words is a lot, but the drag of the plot cannot support the word count, and it is easy to fail a good article.

It's so good to watch, it's so magical. From my perspective as a reader, I feel that the heroine likes her uncle too much. I felt angry and a little uncomfortable while reading the novel. But it's normal to change the heroine's character. How can a redeemed person forget so easily? It would be nice if the heroine changed her attitude after being deeply hurt by her uncle and stopped caring about her uncle all the time! The heroine's treatment of her uncle made me feel a little distressed for the hero. The heroine has always felt sorry for her. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Overall, it's a very good-looking movie. The hero is very arrogant and has great sexual tension. [Sending my heart to you]

I really like the story of every character, Si Yan and Xia Jin's firm choices, Jiang Ye and Nan Feng's sweet love, Xiao Yu and Huo Yunting's triumph of hardships, Xing Yan and Shu Hui's ultimate redemption... The author has created colorful characters of them one after another, super empathetic! I was moved to tears throughout the reading process

This is the only novella I have read on Tomato. Everyone in this book is a protagonist, and I can't let go of their fate. The heroine's friends are concise and simple, and they can trust each other. I have thought about the value of the novel countless times. It may be a moment of respite for us to escape reality. Well, I hope that I have the strong character and luck of the heroine, and can live stably in the painful world. I also hope that I can have the courage and hope to face the future. I hope that Si Yan, Xia Jin, Zhou Si Yan and all the beautiful people can live in their own parallel world, happy and joyful. I highly recommend it.

It's really good to watch. I especially like the heroine's character. I love it. There are few plots that are so appealing to me. I used to find it boring after reading dozens of chapters and have no interest in reading anymore. But I just finished reading this one in one go. I really love it. The male protagonist is really sultry and very possessive. My favorite type is [shy][shy][shy]

I think not only the story of the heroine is very colorful, but the emotional stories of the other supporting characters are also very interesting. My favorite one is Shen Yu's couple. They prefer a more sadistic one. It's so beautiful. I really want to watch them all.

I came across this book accidentally and couldn't stop reading it. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The author's writing is very good and the intimate plot is easy to grasp. It's really enjoyable to read [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I just want to update it every day [love] [love] [love]

Very nice! ! ! The plot is not procrastinating at all [shy][shy] However, the heroine in the later chapters will have concerns, but this is what she should be. After all, the heroine's previous experience is there. I can only say that it is so good that I caught up with the latest chapter in two days and couldn't get enough [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot is full of ups and downs. It is no different from other childish sweet novels. This one is really sweet but also cruel, and it really tugs at the heart. The family is really well! It's just not enough to read. I couldn't stop reading, but I'm afraid I won't finish reading it too fast. Can the author reveal how many chapters there are? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's very interesting. My family won't lose money if they follow this book. The plot is very novel and not a cliche plot. It won't be a loss if I invest in it! ! ! ! The subject matter is absolutely novel and it is really good to watch ^ω^. You won't lose money if you invest in it. The eldest daughter of the Mingming Fishing Department × the wealthy prince Jin Jingui (although she is an illegitimate daughter, she is not the daughter of a mistress. Look at how Sister Xia can turn her bad cards upside down and make the scumbag regret it)

It's extremely beautiful, but please update it as if you were riding a rocket [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The writing is really good, very delicate and touching. Every character in the story is very vivid and thoughtful. And the male protagonist Si Yan [crying] is really great! ! ! Express your love openly and openly! ! ! Especially some famous sentences: "All you have to do is protect yourself" "Ah Jin, you have the right to cry out in pain." "Sister, you are no longer alone." "I will be your best weapon" "I need to be relied on by you" Si Yan is really great! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

The story is extremely tense. As the unpopular illegitimate daughter of the Xia family, the heroine Xia Yu struggles to survive in a hostile environment. The oppression and cruelty of her native family sets a strong tone of conflict for the story. From the vindictive approach to the gradual warming of emotions between her and the wealthy prince Si Yan, the plot development is unexpected and reasonable. The heroine Xia Yu has a distinctive image. She is as bright and flamboyant as a rose with thorns. She is indomitable in adversity and rises from the quagmire of being trampled by others. Her tenacity and courage are admirable. Si Yan looks handsome, cold and arrogant, not close to women, but his heart gradually softens as he gets along with Xia Yu, showing an affectionate and possessive side. This contrast makes the character three-dimensional and full. However, the advancement of some plots is a bit hasty, such as the resolution of certain conflicts and the lack of delicate transitions, making the story's pace a bit hasty. Although it has flaws, it is still a masterpiece that allows readers to immerse themselves in it and feel love, hate, and hatred.

Very beautiful, the plot is different and attractive

Go see it! Who knew that I would start watching something so good at nine o'clock in the evening and couldn't stop watching it! I stayed up until about four o'clock in the morning to watch it before falling asleep [I almost cried] I am a college student who loves watching it!

The main storyline is great, but I didn't expect the secondary storyline to be so exciting! Love it!

It's a great love. Si Yan is simply a guiding lover. He lures Xia Jin to love him step by step. He is willing to be used and willing to do so many things for her. His efforts are always without regard to reward. If she does not have such courage, he will put down his pride and love her again. Although he will also be angry. He is afraid that Xia Jin will not love him and that Xia Jin will not have the courage to love her. I don't have the courage to believe it. Fortunately, Si Yan is there. Fortunately, Si Yan is different from others. He only wants her. Si Yan fights and robs Xia Jin. Love with such courage is really rare in so many novels I have read. There is also the relationship between a female partner and a male partner. Childhood sweethearts but have family feuds. It really fits the recently popular entry "You can't love me anymore." It's so helpless. The hatred that can't be let go is sandwiched between the two. Fortunately, if there is more love than hate, then we can choose to forget.

This book is really good to read. I really like the pulling feeling between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I hope Ah Jin will recognize her own heart soon and have the courage to be with the male protagonist. By the way, can the author update it more? It's really not enough. [Adoration] [Adoration]

This book is really well written. I have read it for the second time. I feel that no matter which emotional line it is, it is well written. The unclear relationship between them is very good. There is only a few emotional lines between Jiang Ye and Xun Nanfeng, but overall it is very good. I first read it about half a year ago. Recently, some clips of A Yan and A Jin's ambiguous relationship in Lucheng suddenly popped up in my mind, which aroused my interest, so I read it again without skipping any chapter. There are only two books that I have read for the second time, and this is one of them. In short, I think this novel is well written and the expression is outstanding. I look forward to the author's other works.

I really like this kind of book, it's not a stupid one. I read it in one go. Please update it soon. The author sends you my daily love

I have been reading romance novels since I was in junior high school until I am working now. This is the only one that portrays the psychology of the characters in such a delicate way. In particular, it combines current Internet memes and current social events, and the summarized words and emotions are highly consistent. Very relatable. Except for the part where the heroine snatches the bride is a bit awkward, haha, I really love it.

I originally read it well, and thought the author's descriptions were good, but after reading it, I realized that it was originally a novel adapted from the short play "Jiaoying". What should I do! Instantly, I felt that the image of handsome men and beautiful women I had just imagined was shattered [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]