Beating Loy, the Eldest Daughter of the Enemy Hakka

I feel like the author used this ~v~ expression throughout the entire article🤣 There are a lot of modal particles used in the article: Ni, Di, Li, etc., And the sultry tildes are indispensable. There are OOC characters, but they don't look cool or embarrassing. The whole article doesn't read depressingly or blackly. It's just that the article is too thin. Come on, author!

Although some of the plot is OOC, the setting of the protagonist is quite perfect. Ilmi's slightly confused reaction to the death of her "sister" also made me feel that it was handled very well. The article does not revolve around the protagonist in the traditional way. What exactly is Loy's lost memory? And how will the author deal with the unknown status of her life and death? Many such foreshadowings and puzzles will also enrich the article. Although there are not many words at present, the writing is still very good_(:з∠)_I hope the author will not stop updating, and I look forward to your work (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Good looking, However, can you reduce the modal particles such as Diah, Liah, and Niah, and it will feel better. . .

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I feel that what the author wrote in big letters is good [Learned], so it is a five-star review and does not support refutation [Start].

It's very interesting, please don't stop updating it!