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Looking for Fan Fiction About the Fate of the Holy Grail War
A manga or Hall of Valor, etc., Please ask the big guys.
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Looking for FATE Fans, the Best Protagonist Is a Heroic Spirit
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Fate Ability, Preferably the Ability of Red A
Fate ability, preferably the red A ability, in Naruto or Pirates, supernatural powers, spiritual energy recovery, any of them will work, please adoptive father
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So this is the second chapter. Is the protagonist called a woman? There are too many points deducted. In fact, the first chapter of the name should be written. It seems like you are writing a riddle, all relying on guessing, right? It is recommended to rewrite 50,000 words.
I think it's okay. The author writes it from the perspective of anime. I suggest you introduce each character. Those who haven't watched Fate will not be able to understand it. Those who have watched Fate are too lazy to read it. There are too many character exchanges, but no information can be seen. The fighting scenes are also brushed off. There is no intuitive feeling and it is very confusing.