What's the Matter, Can't a Love Rival Become a Wife?

(♥∀♥) It's good to watch, but it's not enough to read at all. Ma Ziji will give me a few more chapters.

That's great, it's a rare protagonist who is not a weakling, who can bend a straight woman alive, and there is nothing wrong with the human wrench. The plot is good, and there are no poisonous points for the time being. I hope the ending of the original male protagonist is miserable and only he is injured. There should be more interaction between the protagonist and the heroine, the pace should be slower and don't get together so quickly, try not to cause amnesia and misunderstandings, just fall in love with someone a little bit every day, it will be very interesting. [Like][Smile]

Hmm... Sister Meng's writing style is still on point. I also started reading the Ye Fuli book, which was the first book I read after returning to Tomato. At that time, I was thinking: "Wow, Tomato has such a good book, and it has two heroines, so I also want to read a **** Green Tintin and TD!" What I didn't expect was that Feng Aotian was already a top-notch double heroine masterpiece in Tomato. Of course, that's not to say that other books are not good. There are still very few books with two female protagonists. If they can be written, it's already very good. At least he has the passion to create. But Feng Aotian is not comparable to ordinary literature. It is excellent in terms of characterization and plot arrangement. Although there is some fragmentation in the back, maybe Sister Meng is also tired. After all, there are about two hundred chapters, and the data for a romance that is too long may not be good (in my opinion, after all, there are no living people in the back.) Sister Meng's advantages are obvious, with profound writing skills and novel and unique themes. The shortcomings are also very fatal, that is, being impetuous, giving up easily, and having no passion for creation. But this is understandable, after all, who wants to be a cow and a horse without food. I say this because I want to tell Sister Meng that everyone sees your ability, but please persevere. Success does not come overnight. Please stop being a pigeon! I really like this article! [Cry][cry][cry]

I read it non-stop. How can I put it? The plot of the guide is good, but the second half of the fight against the law of heaven and time travel are a bit difficult for me to evaluate. The sense of fragmentation is strong. I still can't figure out what the development process of the world will be like after the world is restarted. What's more, although it is said that Xiao Zhenyu is still the same in the later chapters, I still can't accept it. I keep thinking that the original Zhenyu has changed. Forgive me for not accepting the ending of the world restart in the later chapters. However, this book is a pretty good one among the lilies. It is not like the kind that starts with double lilies and goes through all kinds of hardships to achieve success. The theme is an old theme of traveling through books, but the plot is indeed very novel. Breaking another person and then turning the little white rabbit into a big bad wolf is really eye-catching. Without the cliche male protagonist filter, the female protagonist (Bai) can see Lu's hypocrisy in time, without the procrastination. There is no routine of slapping the Dragon King in the face. The plot is close and calm. There may be some small waves, but this is also an attractive point. I am very happy to read this book in my fast-paced life. Generally speaking, this book is very good. I have never read it before. Now I have spent most of the time in three days reading it every day. It is good! After thinking about it, I still feel uncomfortable when the world is restarted in the later period. Although it is still the original world and little Zhenyu has recovered her memory, I think she is no longer the same little Zhenyu.

OK, I watched it all in one go, and it received an immediate 9.9 Rating. I would be proud if it was less than 0.1. Let me comment a little bit based on my personal subjective opinion. It's been so many years, you know how many years I've been watching Lily. It's really the first time I've seen such a comfortable, male video, and the emotional drama makes me enjoy the book from beginning to end. It's difficult, especially since it's not cliché. Ning conquered Bai in an almost domineering, straightforward, and powerful way, just like the "you have strength and means" joke. At the same time, the emotions are also very sincere. After reading these more than 300 chapters, I am very satisfied with the emotional drama. Secondly, the character design. As I said above, the character design is very three-dimensional. Even if it is someone like Lu, you can still see the pathological persistence and distorted thinking in him or her. Although some of them were too forceful and may not look like a human being, they still left a deep impression on people. Let's talk about Ning, her character is very comfortable to watch, and the same goes for Bai, she is more real, she is no longer the perfect heroine, but has become her own, Ning's heroine, her brilliance, her persistence under the influence of heaven, her shining point of being a wife, etc., Are really beautiful. Finally, there is the plot. In fact, in this book-like worldview, there is a system to cover the whole story and the "original work" to promote it, so there is basically no need to consider the larger story. But the author still gave a surprising design, and some of the plots are also very "young". In addition to the invincible emotional drama, he also added a very interesting story, which I think is very rare. The last thing is to grasp the rhythm. The author also said that some readers would not like raising children and so on, so he briefly wrote the extra story. At the same time, the ending of Classmate Lu, etc., Filled in the pit. The story ends here and the blank future is left to everyone's own imagination, leaving this beauty in the hearts of readers. This is a good article and worth reading. Above

The two cps are very easy to beat. They are different from the sick and arrogant ones in the author's second book, like the female versions of the overbearing president and the arrogant wife. I hope the author can have a slower ending in this book. If Jiang Ning and Bai Yuzhen want to have children, they can find the system in the second book to get the eggs. Come on

I am picky about the writing and settings of novels, but this one is really good and the plot is good. There are a few things that I can't accept in the novel. The protagonist is a man who wears a woman's clothes and has a nickname for his wife Bai (I know this is a nickname, but Bai also has a strong side. I feel that the image of the dialogue is a bit awkward and seems to be deliberately weakened. It should not hurt others), because I usually read Pure Lily. I'm a little disgusted with this kind of man engaging in lesbianism in a woman's body. Sometimes I can feel that Jiang still has some male concepts.) If you don't pay much attention to these small details, this novel is also very good!

Big cheers for the author! ! ! Very well written! You! Yes! I! Of! God! Love you love you~

I don't understand why this book only has a score of 9.1 So far My browsing speed can't be said to be one page per ten lines, but it is still very fast. However, I have only read 81 chapters so far, and each chapter is very substantial. I originally thought that it would take a lot of writing to write a character well, but this is not the case in this book. To be honest, there are not many words to describe each character directly, but in many details, each character is brought to life. Because of this, it is easy for me to get involved in the plot. I can clearly feel what each character is feeling at a certain time, like a God's perspective, oh no, it's like he is right next to me. This feeling is amazing, it has never been so clear. This book is the first time I have read it continuously for a long time I didn't feel anything, not even a little bit bored. I used to feel sleepy after reading a book for a long time at night, but I started reading this book at 11pm and stayed up all night. I still found it endlessly memorable and very interesting. Each plot progresses step by step and there is no difference. The book is so understated and a few hasty strokes. It can be seen that the author is very careful in this aspect. The appearance rate of the protagonist is also very high. At least it ranks among the best among the many novels I have read. It may be because of this that the whole story has a soul. I highly recommend this book. I think it is a really good book. Although it does not have too many amazing writing styles, it is easy to understand and makes people get involved in it very well. Chapter 192 turns to fantasy Another system appears in Chapter 200. It can be seen that the author has run out of ideas. 250 Has a relationship breakup. This kind of inexplicable external force to separate the protagonist and the heroine really makes me feel uncomfortable. I finally saw these two come together. Isn't the sweet story good? There has to be another doggy handler to ruin other people's relationships. I'm really unhappy. I won't watch it anymore. I quickly read the plot of the next dozens of chapters. Generally speaking, it is okay, and the ending is not that unsatisfactory. It can be said to be a very good ending, but it just feels like something is missing. It is a bit regretful, a bit of a pity, and I also feel a bit blocked in my heart. ๑•́₃•̀๑

Overall, it's still very good-looking. From the early stage to returning to my hometown in Diancheng, it was very good. However, later on, I felt that the system was a bit abused. This feeling was a bit out of line with the early stage style, and the look and feel dropped slightly.

It's good to read, I love to read it, the plot is smooth, the writing is online, and there's another thing I cherish. This book is the only one where I see Lily being strong. But I have another suggestion for the author @verylight. Change the character of the heroine in the first few chapters. Don't be a white lotus. This is inconsistent with the character of the heroine in the later period. You can change it to a simple and easy-to-deceive character. She is fooled by the male protagonist one after another. This can better reflect how bad the male protagonist is and how she has a loving rescue. It is simply a sublimation. I hope there will be more [sending heartfelt wishes]

The characterization is successful, but not very likable. (Maybe it's my personal problem) Let's put the villain Lu aside for now, Bai is a bit greedy, and she can't handle the relationship with the two of them well. As for Jiang, based on the progress I've seen so far, I really can't tell what she is thinking. If I really like Bai, I can only praise her for being awesome. Why does Jiang Ning fall in love with Bai Zhenyu? Bai Zhenyu's attitude doesn't make sense. You can't tell me that Jiang Ning fell in love at first sight, right?

Generally speaking, it's okay. There are poisonous points and systematic electric shocks in the early stage, but after seeing the middle and late stages, it starts to look better. Bai Zhenyu's change of mentality towards the male protagonist, and Jiang Ning's change towards Bai Zhenyu. They are no longer just approaching Bai Zhenyu just to complete the task. There are many jokes in this book, which is quite interesting, but when will Zhenyu really push Jiang Ning back [you take a closer look] The flowers are finished, and Zhenyu finally reverses it later, but I have to remind you that there are more minor poisons in the middle and later stages, so you can watch it at your own discretion [face covering]

It looks good, it looks good, but I really like the contrast. If Bai Zhenyu is the one above in that kind of thing, Jiang Ning will talk the talk but not the actual actions. It would be nice if Bai Zhenyu takes the initiative [admiration] (hehe, the only remaining fantasy, it depends on how the author writes it)

Very excellent work Although it is a very cliche plot about revenge against a scumbag, it is unexpectedly very good-looking and has a compact plot. What I am most satisfied with and like the most is the author's portrayal of the characters. Putting aside the stereotyped male protagonist, the character creation of the protagonist is too good. I really like the protagonist with this kind of "bad woman" character. There are very few novels on Tomato that can set up the character well so that the character's words and deeds in the book are not abrupt. Needless to say, good writing is actually the ability to allow readers to read comfortably and smoothly, and my reading experience is excellent. Excellent work, great, no need to say more

I like it. You have to read the teacher when it comes to dual heroines and gender reversal. It's not like there aren't other books on Tomato, but their books have a very strange feeling. They are neither good nor bad. They just can't catch the pleasure of others and are quite slow. The teacher's book is very good and very easy to grasp.

Five stars must be five stars. The plot and character descriptions are all great. After reading it, I felt very sorry for Xiao Bai, especially when I saw Boss Bai appear on the stage. I felt like my heart died. My poor Xiao Bai was so close to confessing to Jiang Ning. All in all, this work is still very good. Goodbye Jiang Ning and Bai Zhenyu, the story will eventually end, and you will have to walk the road ahead on your own. I hope your feelings will remain the same during the time when there are no readers to disturb you. That's it. I'll follow up on my second review later. Goodbye, Xiaobai Jiang Ning.

Very well written. As a lily-themed book. There are no problems with your conception and plot development. After all, the magical girl next door @I Really Don't Like to Eat Raisins has awakened her yandere attribute. Except for some minor flaws in the plot modifications and the behavior of the original male protagonist, everything else can be summed up in one word - approaching perfection. Summarize it carefully. 1: The concept of lucky value is introduced. But it doesn't fit in with the storyline. 2: The development of the male and female protagonists in the original book mentioned in the book is too outrageous. Although I love to watch it and like it, I still have to criticize it. 3: I hope you can end the cold war immediately. Dance on the bed for me! ! ! @Verylight

Haokang——! [Chigua] I like Teacher Meng's writing style very much. I just hope that Teacher Meng will remember the settings I wrote earlier. After all, if there are too many words in the code, there are some foreshadowings and so on, so I won't be able to remember so much [I understand]. Generally speaking, I have only read more than half of the updates so far. Everyone has their own unique insights into the plot. I am very happy to see it. However, if there are any problems, they should be pointed out appropriately and reasonably, because I also hope that the novel can be written better [Sending my heart] Okay~ Now I have finally finished reading the main text of this book. Congratulations on the completion~ [Blow kiss] After reading it, I think this book has great advantages. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It is important to remember clearly some of the small details in it [Explore]. In the plot, the parts of Jiang Ning's character that felt out of place were supplemented and improved later [I understand]. And here is a little spoiler. There may be conflicts between different people's ideas on the setting of Bai Zhenyu. The biggest aspect may be that Bai's character design in the later period does not match up with the early one, and the separation is a bit big [exploration]. I don't think that's the case. In the beginning, Bai's character was influenced by the character defined by the whole world. Everything she did was influenced by the setting the world had for her before Jiang Ning came. Although Bai also changed a lot under the influence of Jiang Ning to a greater or lesser extent. However, after Jiang Ning smashed Tiandao to pieces, her life should not have been programmed from birth. In the subsequent plot, Jiang Ning traveled to the past to face Bai in the original miserable setting of Tiandao and did not change anything. Later, with the help of Jiang Ning, Bai's fate also changed a lot. Jiang Ning, who traveled back in time, was also affected by the butterfly effect. Then for a short period after coming back, you may think that Bai Zhenyu's character has changed. In fact, if you look carefully, it has not changed. She is just dissatisfied and missing Jiang Ning's sudden disappearance🤔? Specifically, I won't talk about La Moduola. In fact, it will be a bit complicated to explain later😱. All in all, the plot is very well controlled, and the pits dug in the front are filled in later. Anyone who likes this kind of works highly recommends this book🕵️, although I don't understand how to score it only 9.2. Finally, great work that makes my five stars rotate 😋👍

First of all, you have to accept it and then read it again. In some scenes, you should not introduce some male porn novels. In my opinion, this book is super good. The luck value of the system is also supposed to be gradual [full] [full]

That's pretty good. I wish Jiang Ning and Bai Zhenyu never be separated. The author's writing style is very good, but it's a pity that the plot is a bit confusing at the end. Under normal circumstances, it is better not to touch the time [Like][Eat Melon][Love]

How can I put it? The writing in the early and middle stages is really wonderful. The author's writing is great and the viewing experience is very smooth. In the later stage, it involves the way of heaven, time travel and so on. I personally feel that it is unnecessary. To be honest, it is a bit embarrassing. Of course, it is a personal opinion and only represents my own opinion [laughing] , I feel that if you look at it as a daily novel, there are too few stories between the protagonist and the heroine in the later period. If you look at it as a fantasy system novel, it feels like the early stage is just a bland slap-in-the-face daily routine [thinking], but it is indeed very interesting. I look forward to a little more daily life with children in the follow-up [blowing kiss] I'm looking forward to it! ! !

This is the first time I have rated a work, and it is also my first full five-star score. It is really beautiful. I got into it today, but the plot is so good that I can't stop at all. Great author, come on! Looking forward to more excellent works from you!

Very good, Jiang Ning and Xiao Zhenyu are very sweet. Although there are some twists and turns along the way, they live happily together in the end (congratulations), and Lao Lu is still Lao Lu. But there are still some minor flaws. The world reset near the end made me feel uncomfortable watching it. But in the end, Zhenyu is different from the Ship of Theseus. She has experienced everything after meeting Jiang Ning and getting married, and the substances she carries have not changed. And I will always have the same love for Jiang Ning, but the setting of time is still too difficult to grasp. Perhaps compared to Zhenyu traveling through time a hundred times, it is more acceptable and smoother to leave Zhenyu's memory unaffected, right? Moreover, the time reset at the end was too sudden, with very little foreshadowing. But as I said, the gap at the end is too big. Although Zhenyu is cute and silly, which makes me like it very much, I can only give it four stars. In fact, there are four and a half stars, but Tomato does not have half a star [facepalm]. However, both Ye Zhen's book and this one are both very good, but I still prefer Ye Zhen who pursues freedom and fiercely resists Ye Fuli. Finally, I wish Lao Meng's transformation stories get better and better as you write them. Tomato rarely has Lao Meng's transformation stories as good as Lao Meng's. I'm looking forward to Lao Meng's book.

The emotional and plot lines are quite smooth, and basically every key character is well-shaped. There is no weak point in the whole story, and the CP is very satisfying. The IQ and strength of the protagonist are also not mentioned. Although it is Lily, it has a strong flavor of a rare male video, and Tongzi is strong in the back. I was so happy until the end. The key is that the author is so good at keeping things organized. I was so stunned that I couldn't put down the book at three o'clock in the morning. At first, Xiao Wu was like a cool and sassy bodyguard in my head. Later, after talking to Xiao Qi, I changed [shy][shy][shy]

Qingtian turns white (does this count as a change?), There is no long sword or short telescopic knife. It is a very classic romantic comedy. The emotional development of the two protagonists is not considered to have twists and turns, and develops naturally. From the plot point of view, the development does not seem delayed or compact, and it is very comfortable to watch. The focus is on the main character of conquering the novices, but there is no lack of supporting roles. However, it seems that there are many subplots that are not explained clearly. Maybe they are not important, so I just skip them. The character design is also different from the black and white and facial expressions of most of Shizi's novels. We can see a relatively complex and multi-faceted personality of a character, such as Xiaobai's gentleness and low self-esteem but greed and stubbornness; Miss Lu (bushi) is greedy and vain but adaptable, never gives up to achieve her goals, and has a comic image that is different from the villain; the interesting interaction between the two bodyguards Xiaowu and Xiaoqi and the unexpected development direction. All these make every character in the work vivid, as if a life that really exists in the world is recorded in words. Even the villain is hateful and cute, and the tragedy is full of drama and harmony, and is not disgusting. Personally, I think this is a very good Lily comedy love story. I deducted one star mainly because the ending was too hasty. I guess it was because I was in a hurry to finish it and there was nothing to write about. I personally thought it would be a fairy tale as it progressed (), but overall, it is still a good work [full]

It's particularly good-looking. It tells the story of the protagonist acting as a wrench and forcibly bending the heroine, and then there is a heroine whose mind is influenced by God. That part is really disgusting and heartbreaking. In the last 20 chapters or so, the world is reset, and my sweet-smelling, soft and pretty little lolita Bai Zhenyu turns into a strong woman. I don't like this part very much. After all, a silly little loli is no better than a strong and domineering strong woman. Isn't it good to watch? [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Anyway, it's worth recommending.

It's still good. Although the plot sped up a lot in the end, it did land smoothly. As for the protagonist, how should I put it? At first, I couldn't accept the "sexual transformation" of the protagonist, but I can accept the author's treatment in this work, because the female protagonist still behaves and thinks like a "male protagonist". Moreover, the author did not use too much space to describe some of the things that happened after the protagonist changed into a woman, and deliberately downplayed this point. This makes me more accepting of the female setting. Maybe for those who are following up on updates, they will get stuck in some places where they are eager to give the author "door-to-door service", but this is not a problem at all for friends who have already finished and then get into the trap. The author can solve all the "poisonous points" you feel in this work in the next chapter (three chapters at most), so you don't have to worry about suppressing the protagonist's combat power or deliberately making the protagonist weak. I won't say anything else, but I'll add one final point. There are the "education and training" plots you want to see, but there are no "details" [laughter]

Although the feeling in the later stage is a bit uncomfortable, I still give it five points, which is regarded as a star to reward me for persisting in reading it. From the early stage to the middle stage, the viewing experience has always been great. Each character's personality characteristics are very distinct, and the struggle between all parties is also very interesting. However, it is uncomfortable to fight against the will of heaven in the later stage and cause the world to restart. Especially the later scene where Jiang Ning changes the past and affects Xiao Zhenyu. In the end, the world line will be restored no matter what, but changing the past made Xiao Zhenyu remember Jiang Ning's things, causing her whole person to change. At least it seems that little Zhenyu is no longer the innocent and cute little Zhenyu. She should not be the little Zhenyu who looks like Ning Ning's sister, but the arrogant and shy little Zhenyu who simply loves Jiang Ning.

It's quite good-looking, and the ending is also a happy ending. I'm a bit uncomfortable with this because I often get stabbed. I think the sweetness is acceptable, but it's not as sweet as I thought it would be. Maybe the author's description doesn't fit the description. To be honest, I don't think this gender change is reflected too much. Of course, it can be explained according to the author's settings. Then I didn't see much about Counterattack. It was basically the female protagonist. Although it was described a few times, I was always not satisfied with it. I hope Xiaobai can be a little tougher.