It shouldn't be too outrageous to change the Tongsheng line. Liang here is smarter and Mansui is sweeter.
Many beautiful things have been deleted o(TヘTo)
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Reader comments
First of all, let's talk about the advantages. Liang Sui's emotions are very clear and sweet. In the last chapter, Liang Sui also defeated Liang's inner demons. The author has tried his best to write it out [laughs evilly] This is good. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The whole book is basically fighting, fighting back and forth, or doing things. Sweetness must have an order. Appropriate writing of daily life will make the emotional transition between the two better, otherwise it will be too meaty. There are no swords in this book, and there are no fighting scenes, so the content seems too monotonous. However, the main subject should be about doing things, and it is understandable. It is worth recommending.
Super sweet, love it, love it
It's good to read, I love reading it, and the other book "Good Lord I Will Not Be a Wolf" are both sweet articles that I like to read [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The writing is very good, and although the pace is fast, Liangsuo Candy is really sweet! [Blow kiss] Very good fan, he Liangsu99
Yes, a short story can handle the emotional line very clearly, but the length is too short [face covering]
First of all, let's talk about the advantages. Liang Sui's emotions are very clear and sweet. In the last chapter, Liang Sui also defeated Liang's inner demons. The author has tried his best to write it out [laughs evilly] This is good. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The whole book is basically fighting, fighting back and forth, or doing things. Sweetness must have an order. Appropriate writing of daily life will make the emotional transition between the two better, otherwise it will be too meaty. There are no swords in this book, and there are no fighting scenes, so the content seems too monotonous. However, the main subject should be about doing things, and it is understandable. It is worth recommending.
Super sweet, love it, love it
It's good to read, I love reading it, and the other book "Good Lord I Will Not Be a Wolf" are both sweet articles that I like to read [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The writing is very good, and although the pace is fast, Liangsuo Candy is really sweet! [Blow kiss] Very good fan, he Liangsu99
Yes, a short story can handle the emotional line very clearly, but the length is too short [face covering]