Gaowu************

Why does Mao keep the word count down?

This is so long-winded, can you please be more concise?

Where do all these inner dramas come from?

It's too gritty, with more than 70% water content.

Too watery. . . . . . . .

It's so cool that you can interact with an old gatekeeper for several chapters. . .

It's a bit... How should I put it, too watery (the pace is slow, and the system only appeared in the third chapter), personal feeling

I'm too lazy to type anymore, just look at the stars