Xuanmen's Little Ancestor

Humorous language creates a unique world view. The setting of Luo Qinglian, a thorn in the underworld, who was reborn into modern society and returned to her old career as a magician is eye-catching. The text is concise, clear and vivid, and I can easily integrate into the story. The characters are described in detail, with Luo Qinglian's wit and liveliness and Rong Jiuxiao's aloofness and strength all coming to life on the page. The storyline is rich and varied, full of suspense and surprises. Starting from Luo Qinglian's fortune-telling under the overpass, all kinds of troubles followed one after another. He not only had to deal with the intrusion of ghosts, but also dealt with trivial matters in the world, which makes people read with relish. For example, the cooperation negotiations with Dou Mao Live and the holding of Lego competitions demonstrated Luo Qinglian's intelligence. The emotional line between him and Rong Jiuxiao also gradually unfolded in these events. It involves many mystical spells, mysterious creatures and other elements. The plot is compact and fascinating. It is a novel worth reading.

It's very interesting, but at first I thought the story was a bit cliche. The more I read, the more addictive it became, and the author became more and more imaginative. I like Luo Qinglian the most. She is free and easy, loves magnanimously, and hates deeply. If you like her, you will chase her, and you will solve the things you don't like. The whole book was enjoyable to read. Highly recommended!

The writing is smooth and the language is humorous, making the whole story full of interest. When describing scenes and characters, I used precise words and I could clearly feel the atmosphere in the story and the characters' personality traits. The plot development is very exciting. Luo Qinglian's experience in modern society is rich and colorful. The various strange events and characters he encounters, such as little ghost heads, female ghosts, magic birds, etc., All add a lot of mystery to the story. At the same time, the interaction between him and Rong Jiuxiao is also very interesting. The relationship between the two is gradually warming up, and people can't help but be moved by their love story.

It's so good to watch, I don't know why the score is so low. I feel that those with reasonable plots and exciting plots are 8.5-9.0, And those with a fun story that is a bit indescribable are all 9.0 Or above, even more than 9.5, Personal feeling

I finally finished reading it. Everyone is praising me, so let me tell you some of my personal feelings. Overall, the full text is pretty good, and the world view is quite grand. However, I had my heart attacks twice and almost gave up on the article. . I forgot about it the first time, but the second time was because it was almost the end (about 120 chapters left), and a sweetheart suddenly appeared on the male protagonist's side, and I felt that the author's description was quite detailed and ambiguous (from what I saw at the end, the male protagonist did not have ambiguous feelings for the sweetheart, but the author's description did make me uneasy and unhappy). In addition, the ending felt a bit rushed. The last hundred chapters suddenly started to expand the world view a lot, but the pace was really rushed to cover it in just a hundred chapters. Maybe it's because I haven't read much about metaphysics. The hero's identity in the end felt quite novel and surprising. I wanted to get a deeper understanding of it, but it was too short. I had only a vague understanding of the identity setting. Also, the last few chapters suddenly broke out of the system. I was also quite unhappy (this is one of my biggest shortcomings...). The rest of it didn't leave much of an impression. If possible, could the author update the extra to explain more about the worldview? I'm really curious "Suffering from the short length" I was a little sleepy and made typos in the middle of the night, and then I suddenly remembered that the author made a lot of typos, but it was difficult to change the words in the final text, so the whole text was a bit uncomfortable to read🥺 (The idea may be a little unclear in the middle of the night, the word order is a bit confusing, and some words can't be remembered at the moment, so everyone can just read it, as long as you understand what I mean)

From what I saw casually, I thought the score was too low. I didn't expect it to be really good. It's similar to Ye Fan's book. Although it's a long book, I actually finished reading it without feeling bored. The plot feels like a hodgepodge, and basically all the genres I've watched are included in it. The author has a lot of imagination, but the plot is well designed, and it didn't feel inconsistent at all. I didn't skip any chapters. It's just that there are a few chapters missing at the end, so I went to Kuaishang to finish them. I only found out about this by reading the comments. I rarely write so many comments. Just look at my reading time. I should have 8 or 9 thousand hours. This is the first time I have written such a long one [laughing and crying].

It's my favorite subject, the storyline is interesting, the characters are [like] [like] [like] Anyway, it's just one word, okay, I've listened to the audiobook several times, and I'll watch it again here, Brother Luoluo Jiu [laughs]

It's pretty good. Why are the reviews so low? Xiao Lian Lian is versatile in business and very proactive [laughing]. I love to watch that little mouthpiece that keeps blaring. Jiuxiao said Xiao Lian Lian is afraid of society. I said Xiao Lian Lian is a social cow. Hehe hehe hehe [smirk] [smirk] I heard that this article was moved from other places. The two strong men go in both directions and love each other. Luoluo dares to say and do it. Ninth brother dotes on Luoluo very much [shy]. The first volume is very interesting and the plot is smooth and not laggy. The middle part of the second volume is a bit messy but it doesn't affect it. I read the article, and the ending is quite exciting. I read the extras in other places, but there are no extras here on Tomato. This one was the slowest for me to read [laughing and crying]. It's good to read, but some parts are not explained clearly, but it doesn't affect my reading of the article (personal feeling) [Thinking]

I came across this by accident. It's so pretty. Why doesn't anyone see it?

The plot is compact, light-hearted and enjoyable. It just keeps talking and my mind is filled with talking...

I particularly like the story of Luo Luo and Brother Jiu. When I read it, I thought I had seen their past lives, but it turned out to be reversed. I thought that the story after the reversal was their original time, but there is another storyline. It is really interesting, [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's very good-looking. The two male protagonists gradually upgrade from modern fortune-telling and fortune-telling to the world of immortality, and finally to the mission system. The world view is grand, and the whole story is almost full of male-male CPs. Personally, I felt that the ending was unexpected. The ending of Deputy CP Lao Duan and Nan Yan could have continued to be written! Why did it end when we arrived at Yunyuzhou?

It was quite interesting, but the (extra) ending was unexpected.

It's wonderful. The book is great. The author's thoughts and ideas are great. It's a pity that the story doesn't have a complete ending, but it doesn't affect the viewing. Some people may say that some places are strange. In fact, it may be because there are some text errors in some places, so it feels strange, but it does not affect the overall effect. I highly recommend that everyone give it a try. It is not too boring and boring. The plot is very exciting.

The content is quite rich, but I feel like I always get caught up in it. But you can still understand it even if you listen to one paragraph or not, which is very good. Sometimes you will be distracted by little things [make faces][make faces][make faces]

Yes, the protagonist is kind-hearted and just, but not a virgin. He dares to love and hate, and he can clearly tell the difference between right and wrong. He loves money but has no conscience. He doesn't have such a strong copper smell. I like it very much.

It's good to read, and I like the characters. It's a full-length novel. I haven't seen such an interesting novel with so many chapters in a long time! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Overall, it is very good. The characters have outstanding personalities and the plot is also good. It progresses step by step and reveals the identities of Luoluo and Jiuxiao little by little. But I haven't read such a long chapter in a long time. I skipped to read the last 1/6 [face covering]

The writing is very good, and the subject matter is very novel. I can't even finish all the tomatoes. I was so angry that I couldn't find it on other platforms. I guess I have to go to the author's original platform to find it. It's really nice and I think it suits my taste very well. I prefer the human world, because it's both ridiculous and doesn't have the feeling of having a destiny, it's just really miserable.

The characters and plot are both good. At first, I almost gave up the book because the ratings were not high and the protagonist's character was too out of character. However, the more I read, the more I read. The plot is more coherent, the supporting characters are developed, and the characters are quite fleshed out. I feel that the current rating is low and it deserves a higher rating (it would be better if the extras could be made up)

Unlike other immortality novels that start from the world of immortality and describe the protagonist's cultivation and upgrading to obtain treasures, this story takes place in a modern fictional background. The protagonist does things neatly and neatly, and the plot is not draggy. Later, there will be some fictional backgrounds that are not modern, but overall, the story develops very naturally. Each large chapter can be taken out as a short story on its own, so friends who don't like modern or non-modern stories can skip reading without much impact.

This book is very good-looking, and I didn't feel aggrieved at all. The protagonist's IQ is very good, and the routines in the book are also very novel. The content in the book is not at all about victim guilt. I got into trouble, and after I taught you a lesson, I had to give money to apologize. I really didn't feel aggrieved at all. It is indeed a fine product, and it deserves such a high score. It is really great.

This is so funny and the plot is so exciting. Should I say it or not, the author is very strong! ! ! There are many cars, and Xiao Qinglian is beautiful and wild. I like it so much. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, there should be a few chapters missing at the end, but it doesn't matter, the main plot is over.

It's so pretty, I really like Luo Qinglian [laughs][laughs]

Very good. Luo Qinglian and Rong Jiuxiao are so fun. One is a patient pet and the other is completely dependent. I envy this kind of relationship. Sure enough, the sweet love is still in the novel [Blow Kiss]

It's very good to read. I've read it elsewhere before. This is the second time I've read it. I've read several other books written by the author and they are very wonderful.

It's good to watch, but there are a few extra chapters that the author hasn't uploaded in full. I went to Kua Fei's place to finish reading the rest, but the extra chapter was cut off before I could finish it. It's not a loss if you invest in the stock, it's really nice and nice to look at [Like]

After reading it, I still feel unfinished. Is it possible that the author hasn't finished writing yet? What about Yan'er and Lao Duan? These sub-CPs are also very nice.

This book is so beautiful. The plot is very compact and novel. Why is it rated so low?

Nice! The plot is compact and the characters are distinct! Cool article! ! !