As Soon as I Opened the Bronze Door, My Sister Exposed Me

Basically, I saw the update, and the writing is good, but there is a small flaw. I would like to make a suggestion. It is easy to understand that the audience is shocked. The world view is reshaped, and the anchor is also understandable. After all, the contrast between the brother is a bit big, and the shock of archaeological and historical researchers can be explained away. The problem is that in the video, the fat man and others are also shocked from time to time, which is a bit unreasonable. Does the author feel that there are too many people who are shocked? Some people are shocked, which can increase the reader's pleasure, but everyone is shocked. With only one protagonist pushing the plot forward, it is a bit too much. The author can make the protagonist's teammates more mature and knowledgeable. After all, several videos have a time span. The author can write that Fatty and others will find ways to learn knowledge and improve themselves after returning from the adventure in order not to hold back the younger brother next time. The audience can also see the growth of the protagonist group through the video.

It can be said to be the best diary-type tomb-robbing fan fiction I have ever read. All unreasonable points are at least explained, and everyone's thoughts are in line with the logic of normal people!

It looks good, please update more, it looks so good, I can't stop! It doesn't work anymore, it's getting more and more confusing, and the plot is no different from the previous one. It's all about the protagonist group encountering danger, the protagonist comes out to save people, and reveals his identity by the way, and then a barrage, the sister and a group of people come out to talk about the number of words, and I listen to so and so and so and so, what is said is very dangerous, or a barrage. Or someone else might tell a story about the protagonist, which is shocking, and then finally connect the protagonist to that plot, saying something like: "My uncle is so powerful" or: "Brother, how many secrets are there that I don't know?" Then there is something very uncomfortable. I said before that the protagonist disappeared for 10 years, but it has not yet reached that time. I also said that the protagonist and his sister met in school, but when they encounter problems, they say that their brother is going to die. I don't know what to say. I can only say that it is a curse. And when I saw the end, I really didn't have the desire to continue watching. It felt very boring. Everything was related to the protagonist. This was related, that was related, and this was also related, and this was also that. It didn't feel like a person. There was really something wrong with the character creation, and it was completely incomparable with the younger brother. It can be seen that the protagonist is written according to the template of the younger brother, but it is too restricted to the template, and the writing is too superficial. When something happens, he always stands there quietly and does not move, without saying anything. It seems really anxious. There are still a lot of questions, but I can't remember them all at the moment. I've read them all, so I can only give you one piece of advice. Don't watch it with your brain! ! !

It's pretty good, but a little too short. I quite like this narrative technique. I've read a similar book called "Tomb Robbery, I Can See Item Properties!" ", Which is to read the memory of the protagonist group.

It's very interesting, it's a new tomb robbing theme, different from other fanfics. A little watery later

It's so good. More updates please. The author is great. It's really good. Update it. You are number one [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] for this type of book.

Author, I give you a five-star praise. Please update more. It's not enough [crying][crying][crying] This tomb-robbery novel is very interesting, and it's not a bad idea to get into the trap [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The live broadcast and the audience were too much, but the story itself seems pretty good so far. (Two official people said that they went to find the protagonist's sister and talked about it for dozens of chapters, dozens of times and endlessly.

For the sake of the five-star praise I gave you, the author please update quickly and update more [adoration][adoration][adoration]

This book is also super good-looking. I have just started reading it for the second time. The content is probably about Zhang Qiling's memories being replayed. Zhang Qiling's name has been changed. If you don't like it, you can just leave. The reason for giving 4 stars is that there are a lot of typos and inappropriate words, which caused me to not understand some parts.

This book is quite interesting. It unfolds with videos and creates a lot of suspense. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit bad. In fact, the reasons for several processes are not told. They only tell the story of what happened and what the sister's Phoenix bloodline is. This is actually not explained clearly. I hope the author will come up with more extra stories to clear up the confusion.

It's good to read. Compared to other tomb-robbing novels, I think this one interests me more. But the update is too slow. It's almost 100,000 updates a day (dog head)

The plot is not like other fics that stick to the original events. It looks quite interesting.

It's good to read. I finally found a live broadcast novel about tomb robbing. I hope Zhang Ruowei can also have a strong identity. I also hope the author will update it more.

This is my best novel so far [Blowing Kiss]

Very good, not bad, this is my favorite tomb robbing novel so far

It's very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. The plot is not as rigid as other books and is very novel.

Family, this book is really beautiful. I think it is one of the best in this series\(//∇//)\

Don't ask me why I gave it five stars, because this book is really beautifully written (personal opinion)

Show me! Great writing! But the next time we meet is three weeks later~ Come on, author~

It's really good. It's the first time I read this type of novel, and it doesn't feel boring. [Sending my heart] It's just not enough.

It is written in imitation of Tomb Raider Notes. The characters are basically the same and it is quite good-looking. I recommend everyone to read it. The structure is very clear.

Looks good, sisters, come on, come on [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Not enough, not enough. The book review of 8.1 Is definitely low, at least around 8.7.

Two words: good-looking Three words: very beautiful Four words: very beautiful

The content is wonderful. You can tell what is going to happen after just one glance, but this one made me unable to stop reading each chapter. Come on! Come on! Come on!

It's very beautiful. I hope I can keep writing while I'm sitting there without interruption. [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

Very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, and very, very, very, very, very, and very, very, and very, very, very, and very, very, very, very, very, you, very, very, very good‐looking, good‐looking, good‐looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

First of all, the plot arrangement and structure of this book are very smooth, and secondly, the content also has many innovations and integrations, making it more interesting. However, in the end, the description and plot about the sister were not completed, and this open result gave readers a feeling that it was not appropriate. I suggest that the author make a lot of supplements.

It's really beautiful. This is the first novel about tomb robbing that I can read in its entirety.