FATE: I Will Have Many Children and Many Blessings in the World of Xingyue

It's pretty cool, but the characters speak without quotation marks, which looks a bit weird.

Recommend a similar book "Cao Zeitism Pure Love, Starting from FATE", not a single female character is left out

It's good to watch, but the plot feels too fast. It's okay to write about daily life, but the writing is really good. It's not super-supervisory to eat what you need to eat [laughter]

The plot is okay, but sometimes the third person and sometimes the first person are a bit unbearable [awkward laugh]

Many children, many blessings. I was too lazy to read it before, but this one is good and very comfortable. You can clearly see that my writing skills have improved, but it would be better if I reworked the front part.

It's very nice, but the paragraphs are too long. If possible, divide them into more paragraphs. If there are any words, you can add ""

Although the division of the book is not very good, the plot is very good [Chigua]

A harem, right? It is recommended that you take these into your harem Nerodius, Tiamat, and add Morgan. These are top beauties, trust me. My experience as a 10 year old bookworm

To summarize, after reading Chapter 229, my writing skills have significantly improved and the plot is smoother. Not bad. I'm used to the first person without quotation marks. Come on👍 Really good hehe

The book is quite good, but the lack of mainstream expressions in the front is too discouraging.

Not very segmented, the first person is called the Lord, come on

The subject matter and plot direction are very satisfying. The only shortcoming is the writing style [face covering]

It's a good novel on Tomato, but why isn't it rated? Are there so few people? Yesterday, I didn't get to the latest chapter on 4-10, which made me think it was finished [currently in progress]. But to be honest, the later stages gave me a be-like tone. Although the protagonist has saved a lot, he always repeats First acquaintance → Conflict → Cooperation → Bond → Separation → Summon again (general tone, the most typical one is Sesshōin Kiara, I hope to bring down the Saint Kiara later, I am a bit uncomfortable, so I won't force it) To be honest, I was not used to the first-person narrative at first, but as I read it, I felt like I was reading the protagonist's diary from a God's perspective (because of the protagonist's sullen personality, which is quite interesting) Therefore, the subjective feelings of the protagonist are not keen. It is more that the protagonist leaves one world after another, experiencing separation → concern → forgetfulness. Although each world is different from the original world, the main character in each new world is similar to Rintaro Okabe of Steins; Gate. He is just a lonely observer who just repeats the rescue. Every time he encounters her in this world that he is obviously familiar with, but when he thinks about it carefully, he is not even an acquaintance. So in the end, I can only feel be. (Personally, I feel that there is a small poisonous point in this book: the protagonist is the fourth magician, which is no problem, but there are predecessors in other worlds, breaking the uniqueness, and the protagonist is like a younger brother in the later period, hoping to patch it up. For example: leaving legends in other parallel worlds, deliberately being observed, becoming an established matter, or other worlds are the protagonist's back-up in the future, etc.) Taken together, it is a good book, especially since there are very few Fate series. The number of words is enough, and it can be regarded as passing through the plot. I personally feel that it is the best among the Fate series I have read.

I really like it, but it can't be segmented, and I'm not used to this persona [face covering]

I originally thought that I would revise the previous schedule after it was finished. After thinking about it carefully, I could still write hundreds of thousands of words. I took advantage of the night shift to redo the previous schedule. After working on it for several hours, there was no time code for even a word.

Come on, come on, come on

The back is pretty good

The content is still good

Yes, come on, author

It's pretty cool, hope you continue to work hard.

Yeah, it's really good and pretty. 10

There are things and flaws. Just calm down and look at it. It's a good work.

Did you say Artoria? If you say something wrong, change saying to saying "accept".

Give the author a five-star support

Give the author a five-star review

Uh-huh-uh-huh, uh-huh, the revival of the harem should be settled with a bowl of water [face covering]

The author's writing is a bit like a running account, but the plot is still good. If the writing was better, the rating would be higher

Very healthy, suitable for killing time.

I have a good appetite, and I am used to seeing three persons, so the sudden appearance of a first-person self-narration is quite unique.