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The story is good, and the worldview is okay, but too many personal thoughts and descriptions of the author are inserted, and there are too many spoilers, which leads to a serious loss of expectation and sense of substitution. In fact, it can be explained and revealed slowly at the end of the plot. There are some places in the story description that are seriously under-described, such as the causes and consequences. Why is this happening? You have to read the author's own explanation later. This is not good. You can describe it carefully in the story. Of course, except for these aspects, other places can be said to be advantages. Of course, people who can accept PC narration can also read it. I can't adapt to it. Goodbye, come on, author [Like]

The themes raised through crowdfunding are really good The settings of the two-headed lizard and the world are good But after about 50 chapters, I didn't want to read anymore (the reason for not wanting to read is just my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the author's writing level) There are too many PSs and there is nothing exciting in the later part. The only interesting thing in the early stage is the part where the elf Tangsa realizes that he is now a lizard. It becomes very boring later on and the despair of change. Emmm. Maybe it is the reason for crowdfunding or the different pleasures of each person? When I first read it, the setting of the two-headed lizard and the world was very attractive, but later on, the transformation was shaky, and Liya cheated all the way in the fight, and there was no interaction after that. Maybe the author's transformation was to a lizard instead of a gender change? I used the skills of an astrologer to watch a movie with supplementary settings and a lot of supporting characters. Maybe what I wanted to see more was the daily life between the two protagonists, so I fast-forwarded for a while, but because it was crowdfunding, there were many supporting characters' stories. It's not that the stories of the supporting characters are not good, but I just didn't see what I wanted to see. The stickiness between the two protagonists and the passionate battle or the growth of the protagonist. The fun after the players come. The subject matter is very good. Good luck to the author.

How can I put it this way? It's a very good novel with a relatively complete worldview. The shortcoming is that the author will only comment on some settings. The protagonist's personality is a little bad in the early stage, but becomes a little more normal in the later stage, but I surprisingly like the growth type. Moreover, there are so many interactions between the author and the perpetrators that it would fill several chapters. I also like some of the character descriptions, such as the elf teacher. You don't know how happy I am when Nao Deng, the author, gives strength to the protagonist. In the past, if I felt a little dissatisfied while reading a novel, I would just scold it. However, after I tried to write a novel, I realized how difficult it is for authors. So now when I read such novels, it's like finding gold in shit. Finally, I hope that the author can write the most perfect novel in his mind without being affected by the opinions of a small group of people, which is the so-called survivor bias.

So far, it's okay. I kind of hope that the author will kill the elves that have no value. Creatures that have no effect have no value in survival at all. This elf was really a bit queasy when I watched it. But whether it should be written or not depends on the author's wishes. I'm just giving an opinion.

It looks good, although I can't understand it because of the large amount of author's PS and the long timeline, but the characters are well drawn and the world view is complete. I also like this setting, especially the Vasso Lizard. And willing to ask Sarafa and Vasolya to have some sparks of love [laughing evilly] It's still good-looking, but the author is too slow to update, and there are too few main plots. It's basically a short section of the main plot and a large section of the branch plot. Although it makes the supporting characters more vivid, the protagonist has too few roles. This book is actually written by a group of elephants. ! ! ! I want to see Vasso and Sarafa stick their teeth together! ! !

Love to look good! If I draw a picture of the protagonist and it doesn't look good, I can slap him hard! The front is very good, it suits my taste But After the protagonist obtains a profession, too many characters are added in a short period of time, which makes readers very confused. The most uncomfortable thing is that there are too many PS! ! ! It seems that I want readers to understand more clearly and keeps adding PS explanations. But part of the PS is more confusing. In addition, as Hemingway said about the iceberg theory, it will be much better to read without explaining everything clearly. All in all! Even though it's a bit toxic, it's still NICE! Because the protagonist is really too much, too much to my liking! ! ! !

Wow, it's super interesting. The writing style is a bit immature but the description of the characters other than the protagonist is pretty good. However, the PS is a bit long. I suggest you reduce it a bit. Finally, go to the author's group to play. I also have some designs that I want to show you.

I hope there will be less PS and some spoilers.

A word comes to mind: The sharp edge of Sarafa Delete that Sarafa. It doesn't seem to be of much use.

The writing is pretty good. Some people may think that a lot of PS and spoilers affect the viewing experience, but I'm okay with this. The protagonist and Vasso's character design are very good, and there is a lot of writing space. The descriptions of other eras are suddenly inserted in the middle. The character creation and story line of the first era are quite clear. It's clear and good. The protagonist of the second era was not involved, so the writing was a bit messy. It appeared together with a bunch of settings and the look was very confusing. Later, it returned to normal. The insertion of the branch plot of the White Witch was too stiff, but the writing was pretty good. Overall, judging from the current update, it is worth a look.

The story of Lezi consists of the main line of the Lezi people and the settings of the Lezi people in the Lezi group. Oh, there is also the traditional repertoire Ps, which is even more fun. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][ah-hah-hah laughter.]

The story is not very attractive, but the characters are really interesting, and the author is very active. If you don't understand the setting, you can ask directly.

It's a grand publication, but I write whatever I think of in the early stage. It's a little bit beautiful with an outline (all the PS are almost spoilers), but it's not too demanding or picky, and it's very enjoyable to watch (it seems like it started to get more serious after sixty-seven)

It looks like a semi-cool article and a grown-up article. It's so cool. Don't keep begging me for more updates. Please update them faster. Ahhhh. Although the plot is very interesting and the plot is rigorous, it is too rigorous. The protagonist's role is too small. The rest is basically other people's stories and the stories I read during the advance. If it is too long and continues like this, I will lose my patience!

Is your PS too long?

I'm just a novel reader, so I can't comment on it, but I still think this book is pretty good. Haha, Wolf, do you still want to write? #Grab the collar

Very interesting book The current shortcomings are too many PS and the protagonist is too arrogant in the early stage (this affects the viewing) Overall very good

The author is great, when will the protagonist cast magic @ Very Pigeon's Wolf

It's very interesting, and the writing is very delicate. However, the protagonist's personality in the early stage is a little aggrieved, and the fact that not many people saw it may be due to the cover. In the end, please don't stop [please update] [blowing kiss] No, buddy, your cover is almost the same as it has not been changed [shocked] [laughing evilly]

Want to see Vasso and Sara posting

It feels like watching an anime commentary...[Thinking]

That's great. It's the Vasso lizard. We're saved ()

Haha, although I quite like it, this is simply a collection of settings [laughing and crying]

The author has too many spoilers. I feel that the author wrote the novel just to satisfy himself with the setting. Of course, the writing is good and the setting is also good.

Not bad, I have the beauty of writing whatever comes to my mind

A very nice book, believe me, I will not lie to you or you as I have read more than 400 books [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It pays great attention to details, there is nothing poisonous, and the plot is very good. I wonder if the author can come back with details even if he gets lost in writing [laughter]

It's been a long time since I've seen a newcomer with such potential. The story is very appealing, the character sketches are also very vivid, and the writing style is very good. The author is encouraged [please give me more updates]

Great fun The characters and author are both cute [laughs]

It looks good, the author group is online at regular intervals, and the world view is created by many people