Longing for You: Together for the Years to Come

This is a continuation of longing for lovesickness. The main CP is the original Yaoliu. It mainly describes the story after Xiang Liu's death in battle. The perspective of the heroine Xiaoyao in this article. Generally speaking, the writing is relatively ordinary. The language is average. There are some characters whose words and sentences are inconsistent with the context and the identity of the characters. Reading it will give you a feeling of awkwardness and drama. Characters in the story. Especially Master Xiang Liu, he has a certain degree of character collapse. However, what the author writes is that his image of Mr. Xiangliu is a little biased, which I feel is understandable and acceptable. The logic of the story is basically self-consistent. The storyline is quite compact and not draggy. The language is not excellent, but the narrative is fairly clear. But this article also has several obvious shortcomings. First of all, Lord Xiangliu's resurrection process was sloppy. The first is the cause and effect. Anyway, I haven't given a relatively complete explanation so far, so there may be hidden clues buried behind it. Second, the teardrops suddenly turned into snake eggs, which was too abrupt and lacked any foreshadowing. And hatching is quick too. From infancy to adulthood faster. This part of the plot seems to be fragmented to a certain extent, after all, it lacks internal logic. The second is the issue of language. But there is no way around this, maybe because the author has limited writing power. There is nothing wrong with the sentences. But it really doesn't fit well with the character's identity and personality. Overall, this is a continuation of Sauvignon Blanc that is slightly above the passing level. Come and take a look if you are really bored.

Looking forward to the follow-up

Very well written 🙂🙂👍👍👍👍👍👍 I like it very much, but please update it quickly.

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