The Astral Eye Spirit

From the content setting point of view, the level division is a bit confusing. If you really want to write about science fiction, please respect science. In terms of introduction, I think it is unlikely that the earth's civilization will reach level three civilization by the end of this century. According to the Kardashev scale, the earth is currently only a level 0.73 Civilization. Even if there is a technological explosion, it is impossible to cross such a large scale. I suggest that this novel can try to comply with certain objective laws, and it will be better in terms of look and feel.

Personally, I think it's okay, but the content is a bit verbose.