Honkai: Star Rail: Surviving Endless Cycles with Them

For a book I wrote, I can't give it too many five stars. Well... This is my account for reading books, and the other one is for writing books. I will consider the opinion of the brother above as appropriate. After all, I just wanted to write the entire first-person novel to pass the time. As for the person issue, I'll try to adjust it. The other thing is, it's similar to the second chapter but not entirely. Thank you brother for your rating [currently in progress] Brothers and sisters, I should be writing another book in the next two days. I will learn from the experience of this book and try to handle my emotions better. If you are interested, you can come and support me!

We would call it efficient. Very good synopsis, made my brain spin. The plot only needs to be shortened crazily, but there are more things to think about in daily life, such as who plays whose role and so on.

There is no need to add so many me. Add the protagonist's name appropriately. This way the article will be comfortable to read, and there should be no other problems. I will talk about it later after I read it. As long as it's not a big problem, I probably won't give it to Samsung. To make it clear, first, second, and third person are used consecutively. Don't bury too many pits. Otherwise, it will be very troublesome to fill it out. This should be the second week

The protagonist may not be insensitive to feelings, but may not have confidence in himself because he is an ordinary person. In my personal opinion, the book is generally good. After reading the first volume, I still feel like I want to continue reading. It's a pity that I don't have enough time.

Other books are all written in third person or second person. This book is written entirely in first person. It is very novel. At first, I was a little bit used to it. After reading it, it is actually quite good. Then the writing style is very good. Shura Field is not very intense. Is your so-called slow pace a bit too fast? I think the main plot of Yaliluo No. 6 Has been passed in just a few chapters. This book is still very good. It ends a bit quickly and there are inexplicably many extras, but it is also good to watch. Hehehe.

First person like diary, then galactic succubus

The author is great and will always support

The writing is pretty good, but the first person feels more like a diary and a bit stiff.

It's pretty good, at least I enjoyed watching it

How to say it? The confusion of person pronouns at the beginning does make it difficult to read, but it's okay later on, and you can clearly feel that the author is making progress. Overall it's pretty good