Book 4 on the Temple of Heaven

Very well written. The reason why few people are reading it is probably because it is unfinished and has non-career projects. However, the emotional part is slow to develop (it incorporates a lot of the psychological activities and thoughts of the main and supporting characters) and is suitable for casual reading in the quiet morning/cozy afternoon/silent night. 1. The title of the book is actually not very good. Maybe for the sake of simplicity/attraction, only the most superficial characteristics of the two people were selected (compared to the quality of the article, it is a bit vulgar/flattering). Gong has a miserable life experience, and Shou is cold and hard-hearted; but in fact, Gong is calm and good at thinking. He can be described as a calm and wise man, while Shou is gentle, kind and delicate to others. 2. The writing style is okay. There are many thoughts about freedom, love, power and life in the article, but it is by no means annoying and pretentious, but is naturally interspersed with the plot and character creation. 3. Plot discussion, in fact, I think the setting of the system is very unfavorable. If it is a simple time travel, self-exploration of the new social form of the Zerg, there will definitely be more insights, and the artistic content of the article in this film will be improved. However, the setting of the system allows the author to be lazy, and the plot can be adapted to some popular plots... I hope Baozi who eats this style can see it, please warm up the rating, and give the author a big boost [Upvote] One more sentence, very suitable for both of them: Love gives people who want to die the courage to live.

So pretty! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss], it's so well written in big letters! ! [Sending Hearts] Looking at it all the way, it's really… too little! ! There are a lot of foreshadowings in the front, [it seems this is not the first time for Xiaoxia], I am really happy to see Xiaoxia and Yi's relationship getting better and better! ! [Almost crying] [Finally here (⋟⋞)] The overall story is very smooth, and the plot is a bit slow (in my opinion). [Sometimes, the more I watch, the more curious I become. How many secrets does Xiaoxia have, and how long will it take for him to fight back? I think the sentences of the story are very "beautiful" and don't feel "cumbersome". [The "melancholy" period in the early stage really felt like being there! ! I think the whole story is very innovative. It is different from the more popular plots like "picking up heroes from the deserted star" that I have seen before. I sincerely wish you can write better and better! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! Come on! ! Big[send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very good structure, complete and clear ideas, why is there no one...

Come on (the title is also wrong, thirty-three goes directly to thirty-five in English, missing one thirty-four) [Blowing kiss]

Not bad, please update, please give me a boost, the author ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و[][][][]

It's too little, and there are still a lot of pitfalls that haven't been added. It's very engaging, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

It looks great and I look forward to the future development. It feels great.