The Green Butterflies Linger Around and Dance, and the Phoenix Feathers Crow at Ease

It's so well written, it feels like a classic. Is it just that the protagonist is too squeamish? The descriptions are too feminine and the characters are pretty good, but some of the descriptions are too weak.

I skipped and read part of it, but actually I wanted to eat my brother's (I love orthopedics!!! Orthopedics competition!!! Ray's conscious avoidance). Gong didn't really appeal to me, so I didn't have the desire to read on, but I still gave it five stars. After all, it's still very sweet, but it's really not satisfactory to me.

Very smooth and elegant writing! Like the leaping water of a mountain stream, like the wind blowing through the forest. Use tangible words to describe intangible emotions and pictures, just like dandelion seeds express the shape of the wind. I hope this writing style can be maintained as the plot unfolds in the later stages. The plot is eye-catching. Going back to ancient times and becoming a prince, although he wants to be ruined, he can not fall into the ambition of becoming a king and take the world as his own responsibility. The proportions of romance and main plot are very appropriate, and the emotional line is not greasy and contrived. The process of the conspiracy coming to light still feels a little abrupt, but the polish of the writing and the transition of the emotional line cover up this.

As an author, although the writing is not good, I still give it five stars. To be objective, the writing style in the early stage is still readable, but in the later stage, the plot line seems to be unclear and a bit delayed, with a lot of foreshadowing buried. The logic is still self-consistent. Although it is not rigorous, it can be seen that it is more careful. This book has a bit of infrastructure, but I haven't actually written much yet, and after reviewing the information, I found that many things couldn't be done under the conditions at the time. I hope I can write better in the future.

It looks good, but I really like my brother and brother in front of me

It's so beautiful that I wish I could marry the author on the spot [shy][shy]

Super pretty! ! ! At first, when there were so few people watching, I thought the plot and writing were average, but when I clicked in and watched it, I was hooked. The writing and plot are superb! It's so pretty! ! ! ! ! Burst! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Treasure masterpiece express delivery! This article is so stunning that I fell head over heels in love! I accidentally clicked on this article and unexpectedly saw the early morning hours! The writing style is exquisite, and each character has his own soul - especially Xiao Qi and Qing Luo, ahhhhhh, it just hit my heart! I will always be struck by Gentle Brother's literature! When Xiao Qi devoted all his preference to Luo Bao, Luo Bao's childhood scars of being owed by fate were made up for by his brother's careful care and love. The depression in Luo Bao's heart hoped to be redeemed by the love of his brother and Zhao Ling. Also, the elder brother took Qing Luo and Zhao Ling under his wing, supporting the two poor little ones, and the emotional line between Qing Luo and Zhao Ling was also very impressive! I would also like to add that regarding the family line and love line, I prefer to watch the family line between Xiao Qi and Luo Bao. I am crazy about it. I hope to write more about it in the future. There are also a lot of foreshadowings, the mystery of Luo Bao's life experience, and the seemingly peaceful world that actually has an undercurrent. I hope this is for all readers who like delicate emotional flow! I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it.

Okay, I was short of books. Then I saw this book when I was shopping for recommendations. Driven by curiosity, I clicked on this book and just started reading it. I think this book is very interesting. What a description. The character creation is very successful. I hope the author will write more [love] [love] [love]

A very nice book! I love so much!

It's a collection of all my favorite things. It's very good. It's a five-star review. You'd be a fool not to read it [Admiration]

The author's writing style is very good, and the content is also very good. I look forward to the author's updates [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Xie Qingluo, good baby😘

I've read some, it's pretty good [love]

It's so beautiful. The author writes so well.

It's very interesting. The author's writing is good. I think the cp pace is quite fast. I enjoyed reading it haha.

It's quite good to watch, but the plot of the invention is briefly touched upon, and it's so enjoyable that I can't stop watching it [facepalm]

The writing is super beautiful, I really recommend it [Adoration]

It's nice. I remember this book wasn't called this name before. When I pulled it out from the bookshelf, I almost didn't remember which one it was. Does anyone remember what this book was called before?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Good looking (○｀ε´○) Big cheers to the author! ! !

Great, cheers author

Very beautiful, looking forward to the next post~

I thought I was looking for a book to ease my withdrawal, but I was fascinated by it [laughing]

It's so beautiful, Qing Luo and Xiao Zhao are having a good time

✨Visual feast, life aesthetics, every stop is a beautiful encounter.

It's nice to watch, and I feel like I'm dreaming about going back to high school [currently in development]

It looks good, but I don't think it's too cruel.

Nice! Like it very much! Big cheers for the author!

It's really very good-looking. The emperor's elder brother dotes on his younger brother. The guards next to my brother are CPs, awesome!