(The kind of one-heroine story you’d find on a one-heroine forum. Maids and the like don’t have that kind of relationship with the protagonist. I’ve been a forum regular for years!) (The one-heroine forum is so starved for stories these days that I couldn’t find anything to read, so I’m writing one myself!) (A fantasy world with a familiar feel.) (Haphazard territory building.) (I want to make it thought-provoking, but I can’t get my brain working at all.) (I want to make it funny, but I have no idea how.) (They don’t dock my pay if I slack off at work, so I’ll spend some time writing.) (But now I slack off at work to write all the time. Writing has completely eaten into my leisure hours! Why do I feel like I’m the one losing out here?)
Song Qiu transmigrated (or so he thought).
But why was this transmigration nothing like he’d imagined? His territory was right next to a duke’s, so there was nowhere to expand. He developed guns early, but nobody came to challenge him, making him practically invincible. The only people who came to join him were refugees, and hardly any of them could even write. Why didn’t he have the kind of luck that novel protagonists always seemed to have?
Where was my genius researcher, my great-great-great-great-granddaughter?
Where was my wife, who could use fire magic to build a steam engine?
Where was my half-elf thief who’d become head of the intelligence agency?
Why were all the people around me men?
What? Even I’m a fake?
What? There are three bands of bandits in my territory?
What? There’s a monster spawn point in my territory, too?
Although the writing style is a bit rough, it's okay, the logic is fine, the setting is good, the magic technology is adopted, and modern technology is not forced into the magical world. The plot is not poisonous, and there are no vulgar plots. However, I hope the author can write more about the protagonist's territory. Many farming has this problem. If the farming novel does not write about farming, it will focus on the intrigues in other countries. Of course, I can understand it, after all, it is for the main plot. The protagonist is an ordinary person, with no invincible cheats or vulgar character. He has upright views, unlike some protagonists in farming novels who are either like vampire capitalists or like a stallion in heat. This book is considered to be the best among tomato farming articles. Those who like western fantasy farming can read it. Cheers, author 🤓 Author, please get back to me
I have finished reading Chapter 110 so far, and the overall feeling is quite good. I am not suitable for reading those mind-numbing articles. This kind of mindless article is watching the territory develop and grow step by step. I feel quite comfortable with it. The language may be a little more plain, with more narration and less dialogue, but I don't care about anything. This kind of dull and ups and downs, I think it is okay. Support.
It's okay, but the problem in some places is that there are a lot of poisons. The most important thing is that I really can't understand why in a world with magic and martial arts and a big BOSS, the protagonist doesn't even think about practicing on his own, doesn't worry about beheadings and assassinations at all, and has never encountered any 🤦
It looks okay. I asked how to apply the urban label. It turns out that guns were made in the Middle Ages. It's incredible. I saw 60 pictures and the world view was directly brought to the universe. I thought there was no high technology, so I went directly to cyberpunk. No wonder it's a city game. It's not pure Western fantasy. To be honest, it's well written. The plain plot has a few ups and downs. But I really don't like the technology in Western fantasy. The gun and other related things are quite reasonable. I just have a theory, but it's still made with magic. But suddenly an alien comes. I've read a few Fantasy Lords stories with systems. After the game, they almost always hit the universe directly. It's quite outrageous. I thought there was no system and it wasn't so unbelievable, so I just changed the way to commit suicide. Although the writing may not be too outrageous, he is all focusing on technology, which seems that his local magic is of no use.
After reading Chapter 38, although there are some minor flaws, it is good and comfortable to read. It is strange. There are a lot of comments in the comment area of some books that are not as good as this book. Why is there so few comments about this book? Let's reduce it by one star first. Although there are few big poisonous spots so far, there are too many small poisonous spots. I came back again and saw Chapter 107. Although I wanted to deduct points, I don't want to deduct points for the time being. Now all kinds of classic plots have come out, and there are all kinds of big and small poisonous points. Let's talk about another poisonous point. As a Western fantasy novel, in many cases there will always be a situation where it hits the mark but doesn't hit the mark, and the West doesn't hit the mark. I'm here again. There are noobs in various places in this book, and there are lots of poisonous points, big and small. After reading Chapter 432, my impression has improved. There are not so many poisonous points, but there is still one bad thing. It is also a common problem of a lot of farming articles. It develops too fast. The protagonist in the article has an army dedicated to the people in one year. The systematic production process has a 30% literacy rate in one year. If the time is extended, this will be an advantage, but it is too short Let's review it again. I've seen the latest version. The plot rhythm is much better, and it's not as toxic as I think it is. But it's still the same problem. It's developing too fast, too fast, too fast.
After watching it for a long time, I came back to add five stars. This author can really persevere. Come on 👍
A rare good book by Tomato, with the flavor of Sword of the Dawn It's so stream of consciousness that many chapters are complete foreshadowing, but the author completely forgot about this foreshadowing.
Good start, follow-up pursuit
The general logic is passable, but there are quite a few minor bugs. It can only be said that it is not too easy to open. This magic technology is opened, so it doesn't matter if there is a cheat or system. It is equivalent to the foreign medieval times without a system. The cheat has only a few thousand people. The protagonist is given a rough appearance and uses local people to make repeating rifles, RPGs, trains, and steam engines.
Pretty good farming article