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I am very grateful to the viewers who can read this book. Here is the author's post. My original intention of writing this novel was a sudden inspiration from a friend, and then he recommended me to write it. Here, the author guarantees: 1. Long Aotian's script, the drifter will never be defeated, the battle will either win or draw, there will be no defeat. It's cool to focus on one battle! 2. In terms of plot, the protagonist and Sora will also become stronger step by step, mastering more elemental powers and various fighting methods, and the author will also make appropriate changes to the main plot to make it more reasonable. 3. In terms of characterization, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Before describing a character, I will try my best to understand the story and legend of the character, and try not to be OOC. 4. It should be noted that if the main plot of this book really touches on Xumi, I may have to make drastic changes, especially the controversial skirmish plot. I will try my best to make the readers not feel aggrieved and give our Sora true justice. Finally, if you have any suggestions you can give the author, I will reply to this book review. I am very grateful to the audience for reading this book, and I wish you all a happy reading. Self-evaluation, give it a five-star rating

The plot of this book is fluently described and the characters are well created. The author is very obedient and really corrects his mistakes. I feel that Sora in this book is the real Sora. He has his own thoughts. He feels inferior because he cannot catch up with the wanderer, and he works hard to make progress in the hope of catching up with the wanderer. Because of the influence of the Drifter, he was able to respond and resist in the face of various calculations, and even blew up the original yellow-haired camera from a distance. Ah Piao's sense of security is really overwhelming. I feel really nervous when I'm not with him [face covering] Highly recommended

If the senior calls, please inform me and I will run away immediately. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

This is Long Aotian, the protagonist, and the witness, his meow, yellow-haired camera, [face covering] [face covering]

How to say it? It's very refreshing. It's not the kind of mindless novel. It's like drinking a bottle of iced Coke in the summer. It's the opposite of the suffocating feeling of Genshin Impact. The protagonist's strength is not overwhelming online, and there are no blockages in the main plot. It's a good book.

It looks good, but don't let our great sage down when we get to Sumeru [crying] [crying] [crying] We must kill the brave man [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's great to fight. If you don't accept it, I'll do it. The plot didn't drag out at all, and Liyue was finished in just over twenty chapters. Genshin Impact should let you be the planner. The important thing is that the author really listens to advice. The author who listens to the readers' suggestions is a good author. There are fewer people reading it now. I think the author needs to reflect on it. If the number of words is too small, I don't recommend it. Please update it more. The author is a popular author with ten chapters a day. So, the author, you don't want this book not to be popular, do you?

It's okay, no big problem. He even took travelers to play. I cried to death. As a former traveler and now a drifter (doctor, analyst, pioneer, captain...), It looks good. The legendary Sleep King of Teyvat is also growing, and I am so happy!

I like the setting of the male protagonist in Ming Chao, but after reading this book, it felt very inconsistent with my impression. As for what the drifter is like in the original work, gamers know better than me, but I think he will deliberately add psychological activities and language that he should not think are domineering in the novel. It is like deliberately creating a label. For example, who is weak to the protagonist, the novel will add "but like this" "So, I thought it was awesome" and "Next time I meet you, you will never escape" and so on, just like the idea of "handsome" is the protagonist's perception of himself, rather than other people's evaluation of himself. In order to fit this setting and cater to the audience, he has to say something to maintain it, but the protagonist's allure has been lost. To put it simply, you can try to delete the performance effects of language and psychological contrast in novels. As for the plot, it is more suitable for readers who do not understand the plot of Genshin Impact. But there are few books like this. Although it doesn't meet expectations, I'd better go for it.

Being Long Aotian is much better than being a camera

It's all over. Although I really wanted to see the drifters sweep across the world of Teyvat at the beginning, as the author said, the fault was not the character, but the screenwriter who destroyed the logic of the character's behavior. I wish the author ten consecutive double golds and never guarantee! [Sending Hearts]

In fact, the look and feel is okay. To put it bluntly, there is one thing about the author that I agree with very much. The author said at the beginning that the drifter used the name in the game, while the traveler used the name Kong directly. Why? Because Kong is the only name for travelers on the continent of Teyvat. The name the player named them is just yy😋. This is also my first book, and I saw that the author can distinguish it so clearly.

Some of the cool points gave me the feeling that I couldn't get up and get down. I was obviously very strong but my hands were tied. I could provoke anyone and show mercy. For example, in the scene in Liyue, when they were framed and attacked without explanation, the four of them were injured and maimed and lost the ability to resist. At this time, they said, "Are you willing to sit down and talk with me now?" This is no better than being covered and running away.

There's going to be a plot later about killing stray soldiers😋👆

This book is mainly made by the Mingchao mechanism. Senior drifters can go and see it first. Travelers do not recommend it, because the world view mainly belongs to the wanderers, and the characters in the Genshin Impact worldview will be relatively weak (I am a little uncomfortable with it). Fortunately, I am also playing Mingchao when the server is opened (unfortunately, I am not as enthusiastic as before and quit the game [face covering]), and I am still addicted to it. . . Repeat: It's fun to go to the Drifters. Travelers will wait and see first. The home court is at the Drifters. Travelers will feel uncomfortable after watching it.

This is my strength, I am no longer a yellow-haired camera [cool]

The plot arrangement is quite reasonable. Huang Mao is not used as a camera, and the protagonist also maintains his own personality. It can be said that the future is promising.

How can I put it this way? This book is very good and enjoyable, but I can't become the eldest brother. It would be better if I could become the eldest brother. The protagonist can be more decisive in killing [Thinking]

How shameless, Senior Xing called me and I was the first to surrender.

Mond and Liyue are qualified for Shuangwen, but Daozhi is not so good. It feels like it is going downhill like Genshin Impact. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I knew it was right when I beat ✌🏻 and hooked up the loose soldiers 🌶️

It looks good, but I can't accept that he can't become a big brother. The rest is okay.

To be honest, Huangmao is not a camera, and it looks pretty good. Hopefully this book will be lukewarm. For us serious Genshin Impact fans and Mingchao fans, just take a look. Don't let those unfaithful seniors lead you here.

It's really cool to watch, especially when I'm being beaten violently. It's not an ordinary pleasure. Come on, author, hold on! [Cry]

Highly recommended, very beautiful, this is me, not flat, with many highlights, although the number of words is not many, but it is really cool [face covering] [please update]

Yes, we are almost at the Grass God. It would be better if we could help the Great Sage to kill the skirmishers and the Grass God together [laughter]

Yes, but the conversion of combat power is still inaccurate. The main reason is that the background story settings on Genshin Impact are too complicated, and some settings have been swallowed up. The same is true for Mingchao. Currently, it can only rely on expressiveness, and it cannot be counted as the expressiveness of the background story. Otherwise, there is no way to compare. The calculation method of expressiveness depends on destructive power and creativity.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Can the author let Mingchao's five-star resident (except Snow Bao) appear? The breakup chapter was so cool [sneaky laugh]

It looks good, but when you get to Xumi, remember to help the last sage of the Great Ci Tree King [full]

A drifter in the eyes of friends; handsome, strong, gentle, and full of divinity A drifter in the eyes of the enemy; powerful, fearful, killing machine