一人之下：吕家求道人

The author's writing style is very good, and there are some plots that can make people smile. Judging from the previous book, the description of the group portraits is good, and the early plot is also very comfortable to read. It is a real light novel and worth reading.

. . . . . [Crying] Finally, I found a book where one person can focus on practicing Taoism. The protagonist is devoted to the Tao. There is no ambiguity at the moment and he only has cultivation in his eyes. I have only met one Lu Linglong so far, but I only exchanged a few words with each other. Unlike other novels, which on the surface say there is no heroine, in fact the writing makes me want to kneel down and lick it. [Cover face]

It's very interesting. It is definitely ranked among the fans of "Under One Person". Unlike other fan novels that always follow the protagonist's tail and follow the plot, this book has its own unique insights. It does not aim at pursuing miraculous skills, but describes the way beyond the miraculous skills. As long as the author can ensure updates, it will definitely become a hit.

The writing is quite good, but it's not like being under one person, there is no inner seed... The atmosphere of life is like a cultivation novel with a domestic background.

I have read forty-eight chapters so far. It is very well written. It is so well written that it does not look like a Tomato 🍅 book [face covering]. It is a rare novel written by one person that conforms to the logic of cultivation. It just depends on whether it can stabilize after that, but there are still too few alien plots and it's not easy to write. Come on 💪Oli!

It is the best novel I have ever read, and the second one is also written by this author. The author's writing is powerful, the words are flowing like clouds, the emotions are full, and the vivid scenes are outlined, which is amazing.

The writing is really good. Although it is said to be a fanfic of the same person, the author added his own ideas and settings into it, and it is not obtrusive. The protagonist really didn't do anything bad. It's very interesting so far. I hope I don't become a eunuch.

A good book, it can be considered one of the ceilings in fan fiction. The author's foundation is really solid. All kinds of typical famous quotes are readily available. They are all available, well-sourced, and the writing style is also very good.

It can be seen that the author has a certain understanding of the comics and Taoist classics under one person, and he used his vigorous writing skills to blend them into a wonderful novel. It's really exciting For those of us who read in Tomato, it's like a stranger watching Journey to the West. Come on

Wonderful, wonderful, I hope the author can keep it up. The most difficult thing about writing this kind of novel is especially the self-consistency of logic and the familiarity with Taoist classics. How to ensure that the classics are introduced in the right places without too much (commonly known as watering down) is a difficult quantity to control, especially The most important thing is the way that the protagonist practices and cultivates. This is difficult to determine. The way the author sets here is pretty good. I also like the character of the protagonist. I think the author handles it well here. The logic of the whole story is also very coherent. It is a rare one-person masterpiece. I see that there are no surprises at this time, I hope it can continue, come on＾0＾~

It is one of those rare logical books that is truly beautiful. I feel that the author can try his best to write out the overwhelming weight of Laotianshi. Otherwise, I feel like the protagonist will be able to beat the Heavenly Master on this trip down the mountain.

The book is excellently written, involving a lot of knowledge background and cognitive philosophy under one person. It would be impossible to write without researching the original comics. From this book, I can fully feel the charm of the alien world and the author's extraordinary writing style. Must read.

I like the character of the male protagonist Lu Qian very much. He is a staunch seeker. After reading this article, you will find that he is really making progress down-to-earth, instead of being like other novel protagonists who have no strength and no character. I feel that the author's writing skills are very profound, and he also knows a lot about Taoist classics and theories, which made me gain a lot of knowledge. Lu Qian has the high-spiritedness of a young man. Although he is occasionally confused, he firmly believes that the path under his feet is the road to heaven. He sticks to his heart and restrains his inner ape. Nothing can be done without doing anything! He is as cool as an immortal, but what I like most about him is that he knows he is a human being. In the world of mortals and the vast sea of ​​people, he can always walk towards his goal. He is a very dazzling person, and he is also what I think a real Taoist priest looks like. All in all. Lu Qian was duly named Taoist Master. I hope the author will continue to update the article!

It can be seen that the author really put his heart into writing this article. He checked a lot of relevant information, and there is also a lot of original content. It is not copied from the original work. The protagonist also has a clear goal and has his own pursuit. If the author continues to maintain this state, he should be able to get nine points in writing in the future... For this reason, the new book will help.

A book that tried to teach me how to cultivate immortality...[Learned] It's full of details, the plot is smooth, the protagonist's personality is perfect, the character setting is in line with the original work, and the jokes are easy to pick out. It ranks among the top 5 Tomato fanfics and is worth reading carefully. However, the one-person fanfic may be more funny. Great praise! [Learned]

It's really good. The author's writing style is good. It can be seen that the author has a very good understanding of the world view of this one person. The content of the second creation is reasonable. It is a good novel [Like]

It's very good-looking, especially when killing all the people. I can only say that it's great, and most of the characters in the drama can be said to be that basically all the characters who appear are not in the situation of character collapse. The beautiful heroine, and some plots about Luo Tian Dajiao are all very well written, very good. I feel that this book will not be rated low on other platforms. In a word, the author is really awesome

The writing is indeed very good, there are many secondary creations, and the path of cultivation is also very novel. Don't you feel that the explanation of Journey to the West is a bit too much here? It is obvious that the author has checked a lot of information and the writing is also very good. Up to now, I feel that the explanation chapters are almost as much as the main text, or even more.

The professional terminology of Taoism shows that a lot of effort has been put into it. I really like the fact that there is no heroine. Moreover, the protagonist only cares about his own spiritual path and is not swayed by external things.

I think judging from the current plot, the author's writing is very good, and the protagonist's character is also good. I think if I keep writing it, it will become a divine book and at least the pinnacle of fan fiction. I think this rating is a bit low! To be honest, as of now. The plot is a bit too complicated. When will the protagonist's demands for enlightenment last? The plot is a bit bland and I feel like many people may want to abandon the book later on. But please give the author a boost💪

It's really good-looking. I like to watch this kind of protagonist who pays attention to life and cultivation alone. It's much better than the kind of protagonist who relies on the system to gain power.

The urban cultivator of immortality wears the skin of one person. It can barely be considered a one-person fan fiction. After all, the update frequency is much better than other fan fictions. It probably has an ending. After reading many one-person novels, they basically stop updating after finishing the anime plot. The author has his own understanding and can write things. It's still quite ok.

The author writes so well and completely portrays the image of a person who seeks the truth in my mind. I have read quite a few fics under One Person before, but this one and the one by Yuqing Xiaodaoye are the number one in my mind. So far, there are no surprises. The only thing I hope is to add a little more fighting scenes. For no other reason than to see Lu Qian pretending to be..., No, heroic. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Really nice. One of my two favorites, the other one is about singing. The author writes about immortals and knights, which has a very scholarly artistic conception.

Really study a book set by one person with your heart. Unlike those other novices, they are all collectors of strange skills and become invincible once they practice.

The writing is great, it fits the original work very well, the protagonist is very good, a young version of Zhang Zhiwei, but isn't it just "enjoyable" to read novels, especially derivative novels? It's great and I love reading it. I hope there will be more updates, Modo Modo [Adored] Tomato's free article, don't be too picky. I'm the only one who wrote this article. I picked it out. Where can I read it [crying] [crying] [crying]

September 3 Read to Chapter 132 It's a good read, overall it's okay, not systematic ([like]), and has no obvious negative points (I haven't read Under One Person, so I don't know the specific characters, plot, etc.). The author updates a lot every day but likes to break chapters, and always breaks at the climax ([anger]). If things go on like this, he may lose his enthusiasm for pursuing books, so it is recommended to read while reading.

This book is a good book on Taoism, but it is a pity that it has been discontinued. The writing is good, but Taoism will be very boring in the end. This book has almost no story. The plot of the original book is that the protagonist has been practicing Taoism. If you are not very keen on Taoism and becoming an immortal, don't read it too seriously. It will bore the average reader.

The writing is really good, but I feel that some details are not handled very well, and the writing style is also a bit lacking. The only thing I am worried about now is that the writing will collapse later. I guess it may be about Ascension, the Immortal World, etc. It would be nice if the protagonist is particularly weak when he first enters the Immortal World. It should be good. Did I write this book to win you over?

This is considered one of the best among one-person fanfics, and the author has done a lot of research on this comic.